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Why study? 'career preparation, gaining experiences, and increasing knowledge' [3]
Nowadays attending to college or university is one of the most important issues for juveniles. Seemingly, every youth has attended or wishes to
attend to university . Doubtless, there are lots of advantages in
participating to universities .
It seems to me that,three arguments and advantages are highlighted in
attending to university . Benefits such as career preparation, gaining experiences, and increasing knowledge have motivated youth to attend to university.
First reason for attending to university, in my point of view is career preparation. These days, there are lots of competitions among people for occupying certain
jobs in job market. Having adequate
job is a dream for everyone. In order to apply for the better
jobs , people, try to make their resume stronger than others. In the marathon of getting
jobs , who have studied in universities have more priority than uneducated one. As an instance, while my cousin was looking for a
job for more than six months, my brother applied for the certain
job and immediately started to work, because he was a university graduated. Entering university make us an expert, and more skillful. Therefore, we can occupy better
jobs .
Second reason in my idea, is gaining
experiences .
Living alone , while studying, lead us to gain majestic
experiences . Usually, adolescents rely on their family and without their supports will be disappointed.
Living alone for the period of life might be useful or detrimental. In some periods such as during
studying in university , being far from family is not only difficult for students but also a pretty useful chance for gaining various
experiences . In this time span, students can gain
experience for manage themselves in adult life.
The last reason that I believe motivates people to attend university is increasing knowledge. Human being has desire for
learning more, and always tried for that. In addition, in today's world with the mass of
information , in order to expanding communication with worldwide people, every day we have to know more than yesterday.
Attending to university performs an opportunity for
learning new matters, such as cultures, literatures, various cults, religions, and a variety of popular subjects. Therefore,
I am sure one of the reasons ofattending to university is having thirsty for absorbing new
information .
From my point of view, people have three main reasons for
joining to universities , which are gaining
experiences , career preparation, and increasing knowledge. Today, people think they can obviate these needs by
attending to university . Therefore, most of the young people or even Middle Ages are
studying in universities or wish to study. [/quote]