We think the same

truly treasure the kind of closeness

As cliché as it sounds, we sorta complete each other.

When I was in my senior year of high school, I had the privilege of holding the position of student body president in my school's student council. A traditional role of being student body president is giving a talk during the grandparent's day event held at the school.

I was grateful for this opportunity to speak to two thousand grandparents about the instances that influenced my life. With this rare opportunity, I felt lead to speak about the influence that my great-grandfather had on my aunt's Christian faith. The ability to discuss the lessons he taught about leaving a Godly heritage for your family extended not only to the grandparents, but also to my fellow students as a result of being enrolled in the chapel practicum class at my school.

Being enrolled in this class allowed me to speak to my fellow students during our daily chapel about the important things that God has put on my heart to share with them. I have spoken to them about such things from finding light in darkness to their identity in Christ.

each one play

as you're not just adding words to make your essay longer

Nowadays nobody can imagine life without modern technology. It develops very fast, with new features appearing every day that make our daily tasks much easier.

You have to be one of the most fun essay revisers(?) I've worked with.

I can handle it and actually do much better than when someone tries to be "nice."

Should I attempt to take a different angle on it

(I actually laughed at the parts where I was blatantly being exemplified)

An introduction has to introduce some points that will be addressed in an essay.

I m not convinced why considerably is redundant.

I understand the true adult concept of putting someone else's happiness before my own.

Topic:Children can learn efficiently by watching television. Should children watch television regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

Topic: Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substitutes. A vegetarian diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.

Sorry if I appear to be dragging my feet; the pre-writing process tends to be a painful one for me. I'm one of those people who jots a few ideas down and just goes, and then I end up doing multiple drafts. This may be why. Thank you for your help :)

Yes I have: I got a 5 on the AP Language and Composition test

I'm not an average senior in High School.

epitome of people

the war and it's

I'm a seventeen year homosexual

safe, until

made me acknowledge with a fact that I was aware of but was also in denial of

safe, until

person who I'd always

Thank you so much for the help. I will post the next two paragraphs by tomorrow. Would you please, proof read paragraphs too?

Hyphenate "seventeen year" and than add the word "old."

Enrolling in to cosmetology is a biggest accomplishment for me that I am proud of

Right after high school I entered the work force not really thinking about the future.

I have spent the past couple of years thinking about my passion in life and always come back to cosmetology.

As I got older I started wanting a career.

​I am pursuing a career in radiologic technology because while working at Temple University Hospital, I have had the opportunity to observe multiple radiologic procedures as well as being treated as a patient for a shoulder dislocation.

​I am pursuing a career in radiologic technology because while working at Temple University Hospital, I have had the opportunity to observe multiple radiologic procedures as well as being treated as a patient for a shoulder dislocation. I am very intrigued with how the studies reveal the anatomy and physiology of the human body

While working at Temple University Hospital, I became intrigued with the human anatomy and physiology.

Please describe the factors and challenges that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How have these factors caused you to grow?

We had calefaction problems

Everyone of us needs to make tons of decisions throughout our lives . Most of the decisions are easy to make , while a few of them require much more careful considerations. Choosing the university major is definitely the hardest decision to make , as very often people are faced with two options - the major that interests them but provides a less bright future, and the one that has a better future prospect yet is less interesting. The reasons for this are thatpeople are concerned about money, social status and their own abilities.<---Why waste space and time writing something you're just going to repeat? I know...everyone does this. Check out the average essay score on ANY standardized test before deciding to do what "everybody" does.

First, the major that we are interested in may require a larger sum of tuition but less financially rewarding in the long term than other option. Consider my own situation, I was wondering whether to study biochemistry or medicine (which is offered as an undergraduate course in my country) during my college application. Becoming a scientist and conducting research is my childhood dream, but being a doctor can enjoy a higher job security and salary. Besides, to study science in the best place in the world - the US, requires more than $50k a year, which is a couple times more expensive than to study medicine. This sad reality makes me wonder if I should pursue my dream as a scientist.

Second, one option of college major may lead to a career that has a higher social status than the one people really interested in. Take studying law and literature as an example, the former is usually more respected by people, because professionals are usually perceived to be more successful. Those who study literature might be looked down by society, unless they become Nobel Laureates in the future. Given the potential low social status, people may find it hard to decide whether to do the things they enjoy or go and seek a higher social status, which is the concern of many people.

Third, people may be uncertain of their abilities in more advanced study if they choose the major they are interested in. What we study in high schools is just introductory stuff, while the materials covered in college or even grad schools may require more natural talent. For instance, students who become fascinated by physics and aspire to become physicists after studying Newton's Laws in high school may re-consider their ambitions again after they discover that many undergraduates fail to comprehend the more advanced theories in college. They doubt their own abilities may not be sufficient to handle the major they really like.

Most people are told to choose the fields that are interested and passionate to study, but in reality the decision does not depend on one's interests only. Therefore, when faced with the options of interests versus future prospects when applying for college, many people find that making the appropriate decision, which can have profound impacts on their latter lives, very difficult.

Because i do not want a repeatation of the word "negative" so i try to use another one