MiaCuthbert
Jun 18, 2014
Writing Feedback / [IELTS] Classmates' impacts on children's performance at school [11]
Hi :) From my part, I just want to say that your essay is excellent! But one thing is that you use some over-academic words. This does not matter but the purpose of the essay is to be read by your examiner. To speak the truth, some native speakers can not always understand every word the students use in their essays. My native teacher always says that understandable essays are better than academic ones. I know when you read this, you may want to punch me in the face. Don't be mad, you're good and above is just my personal opinion. Dear!
Hi :) From my part, I just want to say that your essay is excellent! But one thing is that you use some over-academic words. This does not matter but the purpose of the essay is to be read by your examiner. To speak the truth, some native speakers can not always understand every word the students use in their essays. My native teacher always says that understandable essays are better than academic ones. I know when you read this, you may want to punch me in the face. Don't be mad, you're good and above is just my personal opinion. Dear!