tal105
Aug 8, 2009
Undergraduate / 'Corruption in schools curriculum' - Issue of importance - my history teacher [35]
^^ you do know it is almost impossible for teachers to get fired :P
^^ yup. maybe use this:
I'll never forget the next day when I showed her the opposition of what she had said the day before, her response was that CNN was biased and was not a reliable resource. She only read information from MBC or it had to be from a government website. In addition, for three days we held a classroom debate, where the class was separated between democrats and republicans. I was on the democratic side with two other classmates; my history teacher sat across from me with the republicans. If I had mistaken her as biased before, it was definitely clear now
and then after then use this as an example to talk about u and how ur character managed to tackle this :D
good luck!
Ok stop right there. Your essay is just one big complaint about a bias teacher. There is nothing in here about you. Is this a college essay? You could submit this as a complaint to the school board to fire her or something
^^ you do know it is almost impossible for teachers to get fired :P
My advice is, take an example of how your teacher is bias. Tell the story. Show what kind of an impact it had on your thought process/ actions.
^^ yup. maybe use this:
I'll never forget the next day when I showed her the opposition of what she had said the day before, her response was that CNN was biased and was not a reliable resource. She only read information from MBC or it had to be from a government website. In addition, for three days we held a classroom debate, where the class was separated between democrats and republicans. I was on the democratic side with two other classmates; my history teacher sat across from me with the republicans. If I had mistaken her as biased before, it was definitely clear now
and then after then use this as an example to talk about u and how ur character managed to tackle this :D
good luck!