Writing Feedback / How the cement is produced and how to create concrete, based on the combination of cement [2]

writing task 1 IELTS 8 test 3 how to produce cement and concrete

The diagrams present information about how the cement is produced and how to create concrete based on the combination of cement. The most noticeable fact that the cement production is processed by six steps that are crusher, rotating heater, heat, grinder, and bags. Meanwhile the concrete is created by five materials which are mixed.

The process to create the cement is begun from the limestone and the clay which are crushed by crusher. The powder as result of crushing process are mixed and then is rotated in rotating heater. The next process, the powder is heated in the heater afterward the mixture was grinded and become the cement. The final process that the cement are packaged in the bags and the cement ready to sell.

In addition, the process how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes are by using the concrete mixer. There are four base materials to produce it which consist of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel. The next step that all materials is mixed and finally the concrete ready to use.

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Writing Feedback / The government tries to increase the cost of the petrol to reduce congestion and high gas emission. [2]

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Congestion and high gas emission are the hard problems which happen in the city center. The government try to increase the cost of the petrol to reduce them. I disagree with the regulation such increasing the high price of the petrol can reduce the problems which is because the urban workers choose a car for a journey based on the time efficiency than using public transport. Meanwhile, there are other solutions to reduce that problems though minimizing private cars and improving public transports.

High cost of petrol is not effective regulation to minimize congestion and air pollution in the city center. Now than, some workers using private cars for their journeys are caused by that are more efficient than using public transportation. As a result, the high price of petrol is not the best regulation to solve the problems. In 2010, the scientists in New York conducted research about how correlation between high the petrol cost and worker behavior for utilizing personal cars. They found out that 5% samples agreed that it reduce their mobility while 75% samples that regulation unaltered their choices to use private cars because it is faster than using another way. Having said that, increasing price of the petrol correlates with high price of productions and it delivers to new problems such an expensive price in public transport.

The other solutions which can be more effective to solve the problems are reducing private cars and improving high facilities in public transports. Which is because the half of gas emission and congestion are caused by using personal cars and adverse facilities in the public transport. The Indian Government in 2011 have success to reduce at 50% of traffic and air pollution by decreasing one person-one car and increasing comfortable facilities in the buses and trams.

In conclusion, increasing the price of petrol is not the best solution to solve traffic jam and gas emission in the city center. I personally believe that the problems are caused by most worker use one person-one car than utilizing public transports. The alternative solutions to reduce it though reducing the level of using personal cars and encouraging public transports in the city center.

Writing Feedback / Technology has encouraged many developed countries to advance space exploration [2]

Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort.
What extend do you agree with this?

Technology has encouraged many developed countries to advance space exploration, but the number of experts argue that it is more related to national's advantages outweigh the international effort for global citizens around the world. I personally tend to think that the space exploration presents many benefits in the certain developed country such America to dominate and control all access in the outer space such information technology while encourage the global telecommunications.

America is the one of advance countries which have explored outer space to improve information technology. As a reason is to manage telecommunication system such a glide of satellite with the intention of International advantages like high technology in communication system. In 2006, the government in America, carried out a regulation which was called "National Space policy" to manage space exploration particularly in a glide satellite in the different area in the world. In fact, the regulation has become a controversial issue in the different areas which are investigating a satellite in the outer space.

The director of Russian space agency, Allan Bright, in 2009 claimed that the NSP was a politics regulation from America to prevent the number of space explorations and satellites in the outer space particularly in information technology. "It is true that the NSP is a sneaky approach from America to rule other countries out in the high investigations", said Allan. China's space explorer, Xi Shenzeou agreed with Allan's argumentation that "I do not believe that NSP is a peaceful way to command a glide satellite system for global communications. It is more closed to a monopolistic system in global telecommunications".

Clearly, the space explorations which have been done by developed countries correlate to national prides than enhance information technology in the developing countries. I would claim that America is a sample of country which has investigated the number of satellites. These prove the evidences that they focus on giving many benefits such a monopolistic in the space investigations to the national than promoting international advantages such in telecommunications.

Writing Feedback / The changes of the headland which are caused by strong tidal, have been illustrated in the diagram [3]

The erosion in the headland (writing task 1)

The changes of the headland which are caused by strong tidal have been illustrated in the diagram. The most noticeable fact is that the power of sea in the coast contributes to erosion in the cliffs. This process consist of four main stages which will be explained specifically in the next paragraph.

In the initial stage of a headland erosion is began from water beats erode the rock and create a weak area. Over the long time period, this weak area becomes a small cave which resemble in the arch. Take one example of this case is Durdle Door in the Dorset. Eventually, the water strong affects the fall of the roof stack and divides in two pieces, the first is 'stack' and the second one is 'stump'. As a result, the tidal continues to induce the erosion and threat the headland. Also create other weak areas. Finally, the process continues as a natural process. (155 words)

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Writing Feedback / A large number of experts claim that a color gives a certain impact in the people's mood [2]

Psychologist have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to color schemes when decorating place such as office and hospitals.

How true is this statement?
How far does color influence people's health and capacity for work?

A large number of experts claim that a color gives a certain impact in the people's mood. In fact, it is suggested that we should pay high regard for color schemes with the intention of decorating office's and hospital's interior. I personally argue that it is true that particular color affects people's feel such purple color promote people's mood such peaceful, high spirituality, wise and high intimacy. Due to the fact that, the certain color like red color which reflects powerful energy and high spirit. Those are very convenient for office room interior to encourage workers energy and spirit in workplace while sky blue color ponders to decelerate the rate of pulse and enhance high concentration.

It is generally believe that the color influence people's mood such purple which reflects high spirituality, wise and intimacy. Since, the purple color presents psychological messages such a non-verbal communication for people who look it. The psychologists from Colorado University conducted research in 2009, carried out that there is a high correlation between purple color and emotional symptoms. The people who wear clothes purple color influence their spirituality while the indigo children which always relate to purple have an emotional trend in wise, peaceful and high intimacy in their relationship.

Consequently, most experts hold a meticulous consideration when they try to decorate particular rooms such as workplaces and hospitals. Most psychologists suggest that red color is convenient for office room while sky blue for hospital. Which is because red color presents special mood like powerful energy and high spirit and sky blue affects to decelerate of pulse, high concentration, peacefulness. Giving special decoration for office and hospital will influence the workers to enhance their performance in the workplace and the symptoms patient's deceases can be reduced.

In 2010, Anna Waitford from Curtin University pointed out that there is a high correlation between the colors room's decoration and people behavior when they keep in touch in the areas such red color can increase employer's performance in the workplace. Having said that, another improves patient's health and reduces the level of deceases. "I have proofed that many hospitals and offices color schemes correlate to specific behavior like as I mention before" Said Anna.

Clearly, I would argue that there is a correlation between particular colors and people's feel. As a result in the certain area such office room and hospital need to be consider in their color's decoration. Which is because reflects people's emotions and behaviors.

Writing Feedback / The number of plants and animals species in the tropical forest which closed to extinction (WT 1) [2]

A breakdown which presents in the graph displays a prediction between 2000 and 2100 in the number of plants and animals species in the tropical forest which closed to extinction while the main causes of the extinction are displayed in the chart. The most noticeable fact is that the proportion of disappear species in the initial years is the lowest while in 2060 is forecast, It will reach a peak. Also, the main induces of the disappearance is caused by human impact.

A more detailed look at the graph reveals that in 2000, the quantity of extinction was in 5,000 species while from 2020 to 2040 onward, the proportion of disappearances are foreseen will growth significantly and will reach a boom by 45,000 figures. Meanwhile, in the 40 years future, the total number of figure will drop dramatically by 21,000 species.

When we look the main induces of the species extinctions, the human impact is the highest contribution to the disappearance at 81.3% while natural events donates at 18.7%. The proportion of treats which provide the highest donation to plant life is agriculture activities in 18.7% while the lowest contribution is plantations by 14%.

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Writing Feedback / Some young people are omitting or forgetting to learn many basic skills because of modern technology [NEW]

Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or forgetting, many basic skills.
To what extend is this true? Are people becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do something without it?

Advance technology such the Internet has affected modern people to rely upon the all parts in their life. In fact, some young people are omitting or forgetting to learn many basic skills particularly in housework. I personally tend to argue that it is true that modern adolescents, depending on technology such special machine are failing to take over basic skills in housework. When it comes to making a prediction, if the teenagers over-dependence on the machine to help their work such launder clothes or plates, it will create some adults who cannot conduct certain assignments without it.

In general opinion, modern technology has supported many housewife to make their assignment easier and simpler. However, in order to produce many benefits, there is a consequence that a large number of children are failing to learn basic skills especially in housework. Which is because most of them over reliance on the particular equipment such washing machine than try to learn this basic skills. Due to the fact that, most of children cannot doing any house assignments.

In 2012, a survey conducted by behavioral psychologists from Curtin University, Marrianne and team carried out that 50% teenagers who was born between 2000 and 2005 chose particular tools to finish their assignments in home than try to do by herself. As a result, most of them omitted to accustomed to doing a basic skill in the home such washing clothes or plates. In addition, Anna Mulberry, educational psychologist from Ohio State University, in 2013, claimed that "this condition a harmful effect which affects teenagers ability to survive onwards".

Mulberry said that "if most of them do not change their behavior, I can predict that most of them will be a large number of adults who longer able to do a basic work". "It is reasonable when I argue that they will be lack of self-determination". As per Mulberry said, the adolescent's behavior which over-reliance on the special equipment such washing machine influence their capability to develop their self-determination when they are adults.

Clearly, I would claim that over-dependence on the modern technology such as washing machine to support housework to be efficient and effective will affect people capacity to do basic skills especially in adolescents. Most of them are failing or forgetting to learn when they was child. Consequently, if this condition continues, they will become the adults who do not take longer ability to do something.

Writing Feedback / The number of student's accommodations (WT 1) [3]

The graph provide a breakdown about the number of student's accommodations which calculate on the percentage as per the four different types between 1960 and 2000. The most significant fact to emerge is that room in share house or flat with other students and paying guest with a host family were the favorite accommodation in the initial year. However, in 40 years onward the first figure increase rapidly in the proportion of student's housing and another showed a plummeted immediately.

At the beginning, most of students chose sharing housing and paying guest is the best type accommodation which show the equal number at 35% while other figures such student hall of residence and stay at home with own family launched by the same number at 15%. Even though, in the following 40 years, both of them presented a significant changes, while sharing housing increased sharply and reached a peak at 70%, the number of students who chose paying guest with a house family fell intentionally by 65%.