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Some people say that it's better to work from home than work in an office. Do you agree or disagree?

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Computer Science - applying for ODYLP: Vietnam

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The 5th Industrial Revolution - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

2 - You appear to be academically qualified for the scholarship but, have failed to include true motivating factors that would...

Letterssaddamprayogo - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
Focused Study vs. Multidisciplinary Learning-IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - The prompt clearly states that you should state your opinion on the topic. The requirement for stating your...

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Searching Beyond the Surface- Common App Essay

2 - Grace is not really relevant to the rest of the story so her inclusion at the beginning is...

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Becoming a doctor - STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM MOTIVATION LETTER

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3 - It would be better if you could extend and clarify the character development to make a better profile...

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Academic and Giving back to the community activities - KAIST undergraduate

3 - @Holt Thankyou so much for the feedback. Seems like I got a lot to work on. Do you mind...

UndergraduateNoTeCh - Dec 30, 2024NoTeCh - Dec 31, 2024
Imagination and Design - Supplementary Application Essay - UOFT

2 - There is too much emphasis on the past in your essay. You have solidly established your background in design...

Undergraduatej2easy - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 30, 2024
Focused intention and effort - the UWC values / personal challenge

2 - This is an interesting response to the question provided. However, I believe it is too abstract for the reviewer...

ScholarshipZoeeoz - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
My final match - College Application Question

2 - The response that you have provided is good, but not aligned with the requirements of the prompt. A more...

Undergraduatedoomar321 - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
The Dual Crisis of Gun Violence and Rights: A Mutual Understanding

2 - The first edit you have to make to this research paper is in the introduction + thesis statement. You...

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A Chinese language teacher - Motivation Latter- Stipendium Hungaricum 2025

2 - Your motivation to study Languages as a masters course needs to be better focused on the study of languages,...

LettersChiaoChiao - Dec 28, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
"Impact of sports on my life as an asthmatic" - CMU Prompt

2 - The opening scenario is quite dramatic but is not followed through on by the rest of the essay. A...

Undergraduateazheng2006 - Dec 28, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
Afghanistan's challenges - My Career Plan for Chevening

2 - While your career plans clearly state the motivation for your desire to help Afghan women, it is not properly...

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Should punishments be fixed or based on circumstances and motivation? - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - Always start with paraphrasing the given question....

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Balancing Urban Growth: Should Parks Make Way for Housing? - WRITING IELTS TASK 2

2 - The writer shows an understanding of the topic that was provided through his accurate restatement of the problem and...

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A driven and dedicated person - UBC Personal Profile

2 - Try to present a well rounded personality in the essay. You can do that by separating the descriptions that...

Undergraduatewdeng592 - Dec 27, 2024Holt - Dec 27, 2024
The Severity of Climate Change and is it Opinion or Fact

2 - The title is not grammatically correct nor properly formatted as a title. You could probably try to say...

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my motivation for the European Master in Public Health Europubhealth +

2 - You are making over assumptions in this case. It would be better not to make such references...

GraduateCJB20223 - Dec 26, 2024Holt - Dec 26, 2024
Tufts Engineering - community essay

2 - It is important that you focus on the value of teamwork in this case. I assume that the team...

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Engineering and robotics club - KAIST undergrad

3 - Thank you! But shouldn't I show motivation for my dream? Or is it unnecessary here?...

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Copenhagen Business School MSC Digital Business / Business Administration Motivational Essay

2 - Hi, the focus of each essay is different so you cannot combine the information for each essay into 1....

Graduatejebb1e - Dec 23, 2024Holt - Dec 24, 2024
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2 - This is an incorrect statement that has no basis in the original topic presentation. This created a prompt...

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2 - What is the relevance of this parenthesis covered phrase? The reader may not be familiar with...

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2 - I am not sure which of the common app topics you are writing this essay for so I cannot...

Undergraduatechauchau1901 - Dec 21, 2024Holt - Dec 22, 2024
Green finance and economy - ERASMUS PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - It appears that you have written a second version of the same essay topic. This one is supposed to...

Graduatehabibraza22 - Dec 21, 2024Holt - Dec 22, 2024
Final Essay: Anti-LGBTQ Laws being instated (Research paper)

2 - I feel like the essay is too broad in terms of field of discussion. It has to be narrowed...

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Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - The rest of this paragraph is too vague to gain the interest of the reviewers. You are not...

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Bachelor of Science in Nursing - Scholarship: educational and career goals/objective

2 - Scholarship organizations tend to prefer high achieving students for their scholar programs. At this point in your essay,...

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