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THE VIEWS OF GIVING HOMEWORK TO CHILDREN

2 - This is an incomplete prompt restatement. You cannot just say that you will show the 2 views, you...

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Task 2: Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV

2 - An argument is not the same as a belief. The original prompt referred to the belief of some people,...

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WRITING PART 1 - PARTICIPATING IN REGULAR ACTIVITIES

2 - Is there a chance that you could write all of this information in a shorter manner during the actual...

Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - Jun 2, 2024Holt - Jun 9, 2024
[Writing Task 2] At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively...

3 - I think you should have a topic sentence in your paragraph 1 in clear, and then based on this...

Writing FeedbackTeddyDua123 - Jun 1, 2024nhim3607 - Jun 7, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

2 - You cannot complete 266 words in 20 minutes. You have written a task 2 essay in this case. You...

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[PART2] In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries

2 - The second paragraph strayed from the comparison discussion. It entered into a government responsibility discussion instead. So you cannot...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - May 31, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
Young people today don't give enough time to help their community. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - Your opening sentence is practically a cut and paste of the original statement. You did not alter it enough...

Writing FeedbackNeez - May 30, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
advantages and disadvantages of encouraging corporations moving from major cities to regional areas.

2 - You over discussed the essay without actually addressing the discussion topic properly. Therefore, regardless of the content of your...

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It is important for children to learn the difference thing between right and wrong at an early age.

4 - In your introduction and conclusion, I believe that you should state your opinion and main ideas. In addition, more...

Writing Feedbackktin152 - May 30, 2024CTA - Jun 8, 2024
My passion for justice - Personal statement as a law student applying for gks

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countries should produce food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible

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Writing Feedbackhiuhiu - May 29, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Fast food should be taxed or not? Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Hi I think you repeated the word "impose" many times, try to paraphrase it in different ways...

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WRITING TASK 1: THE DRIVING TEST PASS RATE

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - WASTE OUTPUT

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Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - May 28, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money

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Writing Feedbacklilinhxk - May 27, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
Blood of Hope (Columbia GS Admission Essay)

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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products

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Writing Feedbacknhat1303 - May 24, 2024Holt - May 28, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - technology imporoves communication and transport

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Writing Feedbackits_dylan - May 23, 2024viscaria - May 29, 2024
GKS Essay: A Vision of Educational and Cultural Synergy Major: NURSING

2 - There are several aspects in this essay where you should be discussing more of your experiences. You should add...

Scholarshipomomoh_peace - May 23, 2024Holt - May 28, 2024
Motivation Letter to Apply for Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation Grants

3 - The 1st paragraph, you miss a dot (.) here "while pursuing my studies". 2nd paragraph, you listed some...

Letterssholdril - May 23, 2024viscaria - May 29, 2024
Seoul National University Graduate Program - Social Welfare - personal essay

2 - Thanks for letting me know that you were focusing on the "risk" aspect of the suggested writing topics. I...

Graduatemkim10612 - May 22, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
My Study Plan for Masters in China

3 - You have to write details about your academic background; for example, your achivement in competition, extra curriculum,......

Scholarshiprickwayne - May 22, 2024Phuonglynnh - Jun 1, 2024
Success: Hard Work Or Luck

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Writing FeedbackOksipyzh2 - May 21, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Burmese Value and Christian Education

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Motivation letter for Masters Program on Applied Computational Mechanics at Skoltech University

2 - Sadly, you wrote an academic biography instead of a motivational statement. So the majority of this essay, except for...

LettersAli Ur Rehman - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Determination in Sports-Personal Statement

2 - I am not sure about how to review this personal statement. It does not follow the requirements of the...

Undergraduategnooch - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later

2 - I am not sure what you are trying to say with this point of view. What authenticity? The...

Writing FeedbackNghi Nguyen - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and travel. Discuss

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Writing Feedbackthuy18181 - May 20, 2024Phuonglynnh - Jun 1, 2024
Rough Draft. Enhancing Critical Thinking online learning environments

2 - You could further develop the content of this paragraph by continuing to explain what activities can be used...

Writing FeedbackVeloz73 - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
WRITE A PARAGRAPH DESCRIBE DIFFERENT TYPES OF YOUR IDENTITY

2 - There are several problems with your paragraph presentation. The first problem I saw was in the way that you...

Writing Feedbacktiengiang1222 - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
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