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Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

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Chemical Engineering - Academic objective and long range goal essay

2 - Actually, your response is incorrect in the sense that you speak of your long term goals, but not of...

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How I've been a Bridge Builder in High School (250 word limit) NYU Supplement

2 - Unless you are aiming for admission as a diversity student, there is no need to mention that you one...

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Political landscape of Bosnia and Herzegovina - Chevening career plan

3 - You are writing only on UN women. I recomend you to put numerous goals and arrange them to implementation...

ScholarshipLohnpartner - 2 days agoa_sm - 1 day ago

CHEVENING: LEADERSHIP THROUGH EMPOWERMENT

2 - Remove all the references to your internship and college experience. Those paragraphs do not contain actual leadership discussions. The...

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Motivation letter for EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI - Review Request

2 - I do not get the vision that you have for pursuing the course which could have resulted in the...

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Chevening Networking Essay - Wicked Problems

3 - @Holt Thank you...

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The Innovators Club - U of T Computer Science Supplemental Question

2 - You cannot use a group setting for this response because the prompt is asking you to respond on an...

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Blue Economy (Product Owner) - Career Plan - Chevening Essay

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Get into Professional Networking (Product Owner) - Networking - Chevening Essay

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Inspiring, reliable and ambitious - Chevening leadership

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Human Behavior - Stipendiary Hungarian Essay

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Common App Essay—Grandfather's watch

7 - @vamin007 It is definitely engaging. That said, I agree with the other commenters: your essay should focus primarily on...

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My Passion for Helping Children in Need (350 words) - Boston University Supplemental Essay

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My Determination and Inspiration for Mathematics in High School (Common App Prompt 1)

3 - What I like about this essay is its simplicity. You are able to convey your love for mathematics in...

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My first personal statement: Multidisciplinary PhD Program in Biomedical Sciences at Rutgers School

5 - Thank you very much for the consideration, I will work on it....

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Relationship-building in a professional capacity - Chevening

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Biology, mathematics, and technology - academic objectives and your long-range goals

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My Vision for AI in Ghana - Leadership and Influence Chevening

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Chemical Engineering - If you are not awarded the Scholarship, what are your plans?

2 - Do not over reach with your response. Offer an explanation only for the plans as required should you not...

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The actions of humanity in polluting the earth - a reference letter for yourself describing yourself

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I gladly appreciate it...

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"Unity in Diversity" - How to become a good candidates for GLOBAL UGRAD ESSAY

2 - While your discussion about your growth and development as a community leader is admirable, you have missed out on...

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University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

2 - This is a good response but it is not an accurate response. The prompt is focused on having you...

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The importance of Preschool Education

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Mechanical Engineering to be my professional career

6 - @Pallaz The essay is generic. You need to focus on a direct career path that outlines what you want...

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ERASMUS MUDUS SCHOLARSHIPS ON EUROPEAN PUBLIC HEALTH MASTER. Europubhealth+

2 - The requirement for the statement of purpose is that you have a desire to attend 2 universities instead of...

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The Ideological and Emotional Interconnectedness of Humanity: Common App Main Personal Statement

4 - @gigi_aa Sorry if im too late! After reading this through, I really believe that this an Ivy-league tier essay....

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Why data science - personal statement (650 words limit)

3 - This essay is great, but considering that this is your Common App essay, I'd suggest focusing on a topic...

Undergraduateundvmn - Oct 30, 2024gigi_aa - Nov 2, 2024

Information Engineering - Letter of Motivation for Bachelor

3 - Focus more on skills and experience directly tied to embedded systems rather than general IT knowledge....

Lettersjashimuddin - Oct 25, 2024jasminee - Nov 2, 2024

A young Bangladeshi Muslim woman - Chevening leaders or influencers

3 - The closing paragraph could be more impactful by briefly summarizing your vision for Bangladesh, particularly how you plan to...

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