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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.

2 - You have changed the discussion prompt and therefore, failed the Tast Accuracy section of the scoring rubic. The...

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Expenditures on food and clothes - IELTS- Writing task 1-Mixed charts

2 - The essay has too many words. You should be writing only 200 words maximum for this task since you...

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IELTS Writing Task 1 (consumption of spreads)

2 - You should use an Oxford comma when enumerating related items. You partially did this in the summary overview. Points...

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The Effects of Social Media On Developing Brains

2 - The essay drones on and on and on without actually establishing a thesis statement first. What is the whole...

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Psychology study plan GKS scholarship

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

2 - Never use references that will require the reader to look at the image. The assumption in the task...

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Computer engineering - SOP Statement of Purpose essay help

2 - A statement of purpose is the written interview that the university admissions committee members use to determine your fit...

UndergraduateKaizennk - May 27, 2025Holt - May 28, 2025
Research paper on chronic illness and stress-related disorders

2 - Since you are the best source of information in this case, you should be referring to your plight as...

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Cover letter for international software engineering internship

2 - The cover letter should fit one page using a font size of 12. You do not need to write...

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Essay about the relationship of the technology to culture

2 - The prompt restatement has 2 problems that I immediately see. It is not correctly restating the prompt. What you...

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Biotechnology - MAECI SCHOLARSHIP SIENA AND PAVIA

3 - @Holt Thank you for this advice. that exactly what I am doing, although, I don't have work experience, so...

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Research Paper on Divorce. Giving 3 areas of weakness as well as highlights.

2 - I think you should include the children of divorce as one of your target audiences for this paper...

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Research Paper: The War on Palestine and its Effect on Children

2 - The paper is suffering content wise because of the heavy reliance of your writing on cut and paste information...

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What are three weaknesses or improvements I can make to my research paper? Topic : Online Learning ï

2 - The main area for improvement that I can see in this research paper is the need to personalize the...

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My Data Engineering and Analytics M.Sc. Letter of Purpose

2 - You are supposed to write a statement of purpose. I have not read any purpose related information in your...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: REDEVELOPMENT PLANS FOR A UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE

2 - The report is over written. You should not write more than 200 words because this is only a 20...

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Writing task 1 - tourists visiting four different attractions in Scotland

2 - Your report formatting needs work. You have to present your information within 3-4 paragraphs that are clearly separated by...

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(IELTS WRITING TASK 2) Many nations have recently decreased the retirement age

2 - Incorrect vocabulary. This should be "themselves", Them is the plural form of "himself" or "herself". Self in plural...

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The Legalization of Marijuana

2 - I think that the research paper should focus more on the direct relationships between the outdated laws, the lifting...

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Why is sustainability important to you? - STEM Scholarship Program Essay

2 - Based on my review of your responses to the first prompt, you should consider combining the first and second...

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(IELTS WRITING TASK 1) ENERGY CONSUMPTION IN USA

3 - I would like you to play with the words, albeit sentences. Your writing would give you a solid 6.5....

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Changes in the library's layout and design - ELTS - MAP

3 - @Holt Can you explain more clearly for me? What should I do to improve my score in this test?...

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Can you teach me how to write and speak in English...

20 - Hi! I used to struggle with learning English too, but I found some helpful methods. First, I practice writing...

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IELTS 2: Financial and social status Vs Old-fashioned values

2 - The essay itself is too long. You only have 40 minutes to complete this writing task. You cannot write...

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gks sop - majoring in biological science

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Studies and degrees - How will this scholarship contribute to the organisation's human resource

2 - You are totally off base with your response. The question being asked pertains to your current career attachment. Where...

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Writing task 2: Extinct animals

2 - The essay is not long enough to receive maximum scoring consideration per rubic. if you want to achieve maximum...

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The Change Nerualink Can Have

2 - The first half of the paper is an empty discussion that does not move the topic forward nor introduce...

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When Choice Becomes a Crime - Abortion Paper

2 - Your introduction to the topic is a redundancy. You appear to be discussing the same information several times in...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: PEER PRESSURE

2 - This would be considered a failing essay because it altered the prompt discussion requirements. The paraphrasing is incorrect and...

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