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Reading Stories; its impact on my perception of Sexuality (Common App)

2 - This is a wonderfully crafted look into your personality and why it would make you stand out as a...

Undergraduatecadearoos - Sep 30, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Medical Field - Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter

2 - This is more of a personal statement than a motivation letter. Specifically, this is not an essay that was...

LettersNandia20060709 - Sep 28, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Space Boys NFT - My College Application Essay

2 - While the prompt you chose for this narration seems to be applicable on the outset, a deeper reading will...

Undergraduateyonathan2121 - Sep 29, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Navigating Change: Lessons from Birds in Flight - US College common App

3 - @Holt We wrote this for Common App Prompt 1 Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that...

Undergraduatejunkcsr - Sep 28, 2024junkcsr - Sep 28, 2024
Only educating students to learn academic knowledge to pass exams or teaching them essential skills.

2 - Kindly remember that there is a 40 minute writing limit for the task 2 essay. It will be impossible...

Writing FeedbackLapis - Sep 28, 2024Holt - Sep 28, 2024
History is valuable or not. Discuss both views, give opinion

2 - Even as the essay is overwritten at 326 words, the response format presented for the discussion is incorrect. This...

Writing FeedbackLananh277 - Sep 28, 2024Holt - Sep 28, 2024
Some people think that it is good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries

2 - I am afraid this essay will fail right from the very start. That is because you only wrote 186...

Writing Feedbackbuihanhthao - Sep 27, 2024Holt - Sep 28, 2024
Art-based subjects as compulsory subjects - topic advice

2 - I am not sure what sort of advice you need with regards to this topic. There are no right...

EssaysEdukid2309 - Sep 26, 2024Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Development Impact Part 1- Cybersecurity / Commonwealth Scholarship

2 - For the global part of the essay, try to find a more specific cybersecurity threat that you feel will...

Scholarshipjitu_kamaliza - Sep 25, 2024Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Finance and Business - UT Austin Transfer essay/Statement of Purpose

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! So to clarify, I should mainly at the start expand on my experiences...

Undergraduatecarlos0524 - Sep 17, 2024carlos0524 - Sep 26, 2024
The usage of "this" and "it" in a given example

2 - In this case, the word "this" is used to refer to the single and uncountable nouns. In this case,...

Grammar, Usagerubinguyen - Oct 19, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2024
Ensuring healthy lives of people - Chevening essay on career plan

2 - The main consideration for this essay should be how you will assist the DFID in their healthcare programs related...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 24, 2024Holt - Sep 25, 2024
IELTS Task 2: Advantage/Disadvantage on longer life expectancy

2 - There is always a specific format that should be followed for optimum scoring potential with every task discussion requirement....

Writing Feedbackmmatmmee - Sep 24, 2024Holt - Sep 25, 2024
In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both the pros and cons of

4 - Hello Daves, I have some input on the essay i guess the essay meant to write the pros and...

Writing FeedbackDaves - Sep 22, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
Personal Statement for Master of Science in Anesthesia

3 - I think acronyms like CAA could have been better explained,Since your reviewer might not be a person in the...

Graduateedumanzo - Sep 22, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

5 - "curical part in people' live"-crucial part in people's lives....

Writing FeedbackBui Quang Dung - Sep 21, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why? This is posive or negative?

6 - "Using phone to study with friends through google meet or zoom that make people don't feel alone and increasing...

Writing Feedbackmaryngohuathu - Sep 21, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, others not

3 - I think To recap should be To summarise/To conclude, that would make the tone more formal...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Duc Kien - Sep 23, 2024mmatmmee - Sep 24, 2024
Health and Public service - why you have selected your chosen three university courses

2 - The essay is direct to the point and presents the barest reasons for your choice of university. It is...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024Holt - Sep 24, 2024
Qualities of survival - Chevening leaders or influencers in their home country

2 - Influence is a part of leadership qualities, but is not applicable to this prompt. Rather, influence is something that...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024Holt - Sep 24, 2024
Task 1 The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school

2 - For the summary overview, the number of images must be indicated since you are going to be representing 3...

Writing Feedbackhoang73dnh - Sep 23, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Perfectly Imperfect - personal statement | International Relations

4 - Merged: Personal Essay / International Relations / PERFECTLY IMPERFECT Personal Essay Share an essay on any topic...

UndergraduateHaiha0205 - Sep 17, 2024Haiha0205 - Sep 23, 2024
The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria

4 - your writing task 1 is really good at some points however there are some sentences with poor formation in...

Writing FeedbackHwiiiiihii - Sep 16, 2024Haiha0205 - Sep 23, 2024
Proportions of workers in three different fields in South Korea - TASK 1

3 - i think this essay has a basic structure, starting with an overview and moving into more specific details about...

Writing Feedbackconroy - Sep 23, 2024Haiha0205 - Sep 23, 2024
TripWithCommunity / Tourism - Chevening leadership and influence

3 - Thank you very much for this feedback and I will improve it....

ScholarshipMiranass58 - Sep 22, 2024Miranass58 - Sep 23, 2024
Is This a Good Motivation Letter ? to Master Program Transport and Geinformation Technology at KTH

3 - Thanks for your review @Holt I have written another version based on your valuable comments. Do you think...

Lettersmhmdazmi - Sep 22, 2024mhmdazmi - Sep 23, 2024
IELTS Task 2: Work for the same organisation all their working life VS different organisation

2 - Do not sensationalize the discussion. There is no supporting evidence for that point of view in the original...

Writing Feedbackmmatmmee - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Civil consultant - personal statement GKS-U

2 - The information about your name, what it means, how to pronounce it, who named you, their rank in the...

Scholarshiphaidin - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Technology has made our lives too complicated, the solution is to live a simple life without it

2 - Uh, the essay is lacking 40 words to meet the minimum TOEFL word count. There is a writing minimum...

Writing Feedbackangela odile - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Learning My Limits (College Essay)

4 - If there was one piece of advice I could share with the world, it would be to embrace mistakes...

Undergraduatezbilly06 - Sep 20, 2024zbilly06 - Sep 22, 2024
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