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Online shopping: do the pros outweight cons? - ielts essay - estimated score and advice

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Obtaining a Postgraduate degree through a Scholarship - how to answer this question?

2 - This is basically a 2 paragraph essay response. You have to consider the first part, which is yourself, and...

Essaysevanscoffie - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
GTE to Australia study abroad

2 - I am not confident about your financial status in relation to your application. You are automatically assuming that you...

UndergraduateAnn_Bui_29 - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations.

2 - The essay is more than 300 words long, This could pose a problem during the actual test if you...

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My Electrical Engineering Motivational letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

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LettersAndern - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
data on expenditure on the needs of older people in Australia

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The miniEnterprize Youth Business Conference - UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile

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Undergraduatestudent_88 - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Financial support for poor countries

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Personal Statement GKS Master Degree Civil Engineering - Embassy Track

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Scholarshiphhksm - Jan 7, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
A personal life experience with the lessons and experience you gained from it; scholarship essay

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Scholarshiptriplej - Jan 7, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Waterloo AIF (Admissions Information Form) Response

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Undergraduateshusaku - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Hungary and Uganda - Stipendium hungaricum scholarship letter

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Scholarshiphuzaifahmuhammad - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
IELTS 16:The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

2 - The essay should be 3 paragraphs long. This writing barely meets the word count minimum, which indicates that the...

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Stipendium Hungaricum Motivational Letter - BSc Biology in University Of Debrecen

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TASK 1- PROCESS: Describe the process of the water cycle

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Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

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TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - Comparison of the number of 13-year-olds learning French and Mandarin

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Supply chain disruption - UBC Sauder commence personal profile: How you responded to a problem.

2 - This is a strong narrative explanation for the prompt. The fact that you based it in your personal experience...

Undergraduaterachelxu1106 - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 12, 2024
Peace & Justice Difficult situation in conflict resolution. How you handled the situation. (CBEST)

2 - Okay, your eventual solution was violence. That has no place in these peace loving times. Threatening to beat up...

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Write about your hero. Identify who the person is, and why he or she is your hero...... CBEST

2 - You are over dramatizing the situation. Keep it logical and based within the realms of reality. The scream of...

Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 11, 2024
Children should be banned from using their phones during the school day or not. Both views & yours

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Writing Task 1 Ielts - the inquiries volume

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LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MASTERS IN SUSTAINABLE FOREST AND NATURE MANAGEMENT

4 - @sankook Thank you so much, I appreciate your honest review. I know all this, but the word limit restricts...

LettersEmDee - Jan 3, 2024EmDee - Jan 10, 2024
Developing a YouTube automation bot - UBC Personal profile - How would people describe you?

2 - Your personal statement does not work for the prompt provided. This is not a first person opinion of you...

UndergraduateAlfie12 - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
describe your favorite place in your hometown. How does it contribute to your life experience?

2 - Your description of West Lake seems to be lacking. You are describing the roads but not the specific place....

Scholarshiphuyenan - Jan 4, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - PARSONS NEW SCHOOL - MFA Fashion Design and Society

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GraduateRIA0512 - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
Studying Public Policy - Cornell Essay

2 - The first thing you have to understand is that there are no right or wrong answers to these essays....

UndergraduateMoonlight1689 - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 9, 2024
Motivation letter for masters in psychology of global mobility, inclusion and diversity

2 - I do not feel that you have a very strong professional representation in this motivational letter. You have mostly...

LettersEduneeds4me - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 9, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2-work-based training's advantages outweigh its disadvantages

2 - Explain your opinion. What is the basis of your explanation in the earlier sentence? Give a summarized representation...

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Mindful Resilience: Integrating Mindfulness into Daily Life for Enhanced Well-Being

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