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What discovery in the last century has been most beneficial for your country?

4 - In the last century, My country, Romania, had passed through many changes and regimes that influence its history in...

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[Essay]The Best and Worst aspects of being a Teenager.

3 - Give some more help to other members -- thoughtful, substantial help, like you might give to a younger sibling...

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" Rising divorce rate"- Cause and effect essay

9 - Hi Kevin and Sean, I appreciate ur valuable help! ^^ I learn a lot from you. Thanks again for...

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Essay for FSU (From Belgium to New Jersey)

6 - You're on the right track. I would point out, however, that you probably don't mean this: "The Vires and...

UndergraduateCalinecat7 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 24, 2009
'Schools are nestles of education' - Essay on Violence in schools.

13 - Thank you very much for trying to understand me and what I try to say. Your help really is...

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'Inequality is wrong' - The novel "A Thousand Splendid Suns" by Khaled Hosseini

2 - You have a nice writing style, but I think that some changes in formatting would help it to flow...

Book ReportsTejpal - Apr 14, 2009Notoman - Apr 24, 2009
A mistake i learned from - narrative essay

2 - The pleasant man from the phone call was actually the head coach of the basketball team. He told me...

Writing Feedbackgacesaa - Apr 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2009
Religion is good for the people - does it touch on the line of poetry?

4 - There is always a certain amount of fun in engaging with a new language. What's your first one? English...

Writing FeedbackProt - Apr 22, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 23, 2009
letter of concern (human cells) - investigate the facts

2 - Well, libraries are great places to conduct research. If you don't have time to wait until the library opens,...

Lettersgacesaa - Apr 23, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 23, 2009
Personal Objectivity of James Joyce- research paper

3 - This is going to be a great paper! You weave together the information very well. I only found two...

Writing Feedbackhevyhomie - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2009
Written Literature....a recent development?

6 - I suspect that the question refers to the long period of human history during which it was not recorded....

Research Papersjaz1234 - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2009
Another school in Washington Personal Statement[transfer]

4 - Kofi Annan was the Secratary General of the UN, so don't just call him a diplomat. Maybe you should...

Undergraduateanella - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2009
English Comp. CLEP essay - "guns outnumber the population"

4 - Therefore , his proposal is an adept way of limiting the damage done to society through.. (Above) Technically,...

Writing FeedbackSairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2009
TOEFL Essay - Parents are the best teachers (Devotion and penetration)

8 - You might want to "exhort" parents to spend more one-on-one time with their children. That is one way to...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
We can't negative wholly benefit from nuclear technology

5 - Of course, the mod's are spot on, but I'd like to add that while reading your essay, I was...

Writing Feedbacksecret1302 - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
GED Practice essay: Do you think people learn from their mistakes?

7 - Your concluding paragraph could use some beefing up. And I think if you gave some examples of people learning...

Writing Feedbackspczmb - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
Essay: Are exams necessary? Yes ... they are!

5 - It's a good idea to find a couple of examples where exams aren't used and compare them to examples...

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English Comp. CLEP - "Discontent is vital to growth and development"

7 - Thanks for your help! LOL... seems to be a popular topic! (either that, or we are both studying from...

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'Some empires refused to learn from history' - English Comp. CLEP - practice essay

3 - In the first paragraph, you'll start out stronger if you write, "can be taken to mean" instead of: It...

Writing FeedbackSairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2009
New Personal Statement [transfer], University of Washington Seattle

4 - Thank you so much! I will go back and look through it....

Undergraduateanella - Apr 21, 2009anella - Apr 22, 2009
Growing housing bubble ignored by ecomomists

3 - Why are we<<Avoid the use of editorial we, us, or our in academic writing when referring to general humanity....

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My father sacrificed alot in his lifetime ; Someone Who Has Influenced My Life

10 - Is this supposed to be a five paragraph essay, or a 4? For a standard, five paragraph essay, this...

Writing Feedbackcboggs0027 - Apr 3, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009
Basic Introductory Structures of Academic Essays

NEW - Introductions generally consist of four main elements: - A hook - Background information, including definitions of your...

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narrative essay- giving birth, its not graphic

2 - Hyphens: It was two-thirty in the afternoon on a gorgeous sunny, fall, Tuesday. My favorite day of the week....

Writing Feedbackpurfec8gel - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2009
Thesis Statement about the most influential people in your life

3 - Great idea... and it helps to come up with a single overarching theme if possible -- so that the...

Essayscraig - Apr 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Statement of purpose / design (student exchange program)

3 - Also, I experienced the foreign cultures and met diverse people during the travel. Oh, I see that Anna corrected...

Undergraduatejjinvvang - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
The Good Earth, Pearl S. Buck

4 - The concept of women and women's rights has not only been a struggle for the American culture but also...

EssaysMelanie Rose - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
What is the right stuff essay

5 - Instead of "arrogance," you could just say that they needed a robust ego, and let the reader decide for...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Apr 18, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 21, 2009
The Concept of Courage as Illustrated by Different Characters

3 - According to Atticus Finch, an honest lawyer in Harper Lee's novel "To Kill a Mockingbird", teaching the children that...

Writing Feedbacktak7171 - Apr 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2009
Aphorism essay - "A Better Tomorrow"

5 - Thanks...

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