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UPenn Supplement (academic programs!)

2 - To me, it's fascinating how the beautiful syllables of the word "UPenn" truly reflect the characteristics of the University...

UndergraduateIvy_91 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
CommonApp Essay: "I am.... born in India"

3 - I wasn't sure if colleges would like an essay describing various experiences instead of simply expanding on one single...

Undergraduateashwin17 - Dec 25, 2008ashwin17 - Dec 26, 2008
Global warming. Stanford essay. Solution? 'Working together as a society'

4 - We may drive our cars to a store four blocks away or go to another city, but the distance...

Undergraduatemember123 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Why Bates supplement any suggestion and comment is welcomed

4 - I think you answered the question nicely! :)...

Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
'Academically and Athletically' Trinity College essay help

2 - I would make the last two sentences into their own paragraph, that would wrap up your ending nicely! ...

UndergraduateKTarsa - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
UPENN page 217 of a 300 page biography

4 - Somebody else has asked this question in the past. The truth is, they probably expect you to be talking...

Undergraduatepikezander144 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
UPenn required supplement length?

6 - A little short is okay, but try to get as close to the number they specify as possible. It's...

Undergraduatepikezander144 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
"With Pressure, the Fruits of Labor Will Taste Even Sweeter" Common App

5 - There's no word limit, it just gives the question and leaves it up to the writer I guess. ..and...

UndergraduateMelafire29 - Dec 24, 2008Melafire29 - Dec 26, 2008
'girl from a foreign country had impact' - harvard common app

26 - chink i need ur help again lol after the climax " see you later big brother" should...

Undergraduatequack09 - Dec 10, 2008quack09 - Dec 26, 2008
Why Columbia (Located in New York, the hub of diversity)

5 - Located in New York, the hub of diversity, Columbia possesses one of the most diverse student bodies and award-winning...

Undergraduatealicimoo - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
'special interest clubs and organizations' - Pitzer Supplement Essay

9 - The workers that my aunt hired were always interesting, because my aunt hired workers based on their needs, rather...

Undergraduatedennyssampler - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Common short essay: Summary of activity, all comments are welcomed

8 - I taught my students Everyday English, which was not an easy task. Most of the students were very shy...

Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 23, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
"A reason to everything that happens" app essay- revision?

3 - Thank you very much!!!...

Undergraduatexsilverlovex - Dec 23, 2008xsilverlovex - Dec 26, 2008
Common Application Essay: personal/local concern and its importance

2 - Sights in India are often quickly associated with street cows, monuments, festivals and modernization, which I do not deny...

Undergraduateexperimentalist - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Rice Supplement- Cultural Essay

5 - You can cut out SOME of that 3rd paragraph to shorten it, but it is the 2nd paragraph that...

UndergraduateChiHF9009 - Dec 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Common App essay - Uniquely "Un-Asian"

5 - Yes, change it to Malaysian, so it is more specific and descriptive. Words and phrases are like employees; the...

Undergraduatelali - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
'earthquake-hit areas' - Sarah Lawrence essay about changes

4 - "You're going to study abroad? What's your major?" I knew my answer. To say, "It's undecided," was thought to...

Undergraduatevan_gogh - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Among all majors, I believe engineering helps us enhance our lives; Columbia Short Answers

4 - Thanks so much!! :)...

UndergraduateJJBrown - Dec 24, 2008JJBrown - Dec 26, 2008
'Ambiguity ' - University of Virginia (favorite word)

2 - Ambiguity seems to bother some, and this is understandable . The ambiguous nature of literature also enables me...

Undergraduatealice955 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
"integrity"; This is the idea that I would like to convey, does it make sense and read well?

3 - At, the Pizzeria however all of my effort was ignored --- The comma should be removed you focused...

Undergraduatepurple92 - Dec 26, 2008imike - Dec 26, 2008
Common app essay: Topic of your choice ("a flower vase")

7 - wow thanks alot kevin i think i kinda get it :) does the essay feel very long? if...

Undergraduatenylrej - Dec 22, 2008nylrej - Dec 26, 2008
Common Application Short Response(Activity-Cambodia trip)

2 - A little more than a year ago, I was a part of a trip to Cambodia. To contribute to...

Undergraduatealice955 - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Academic Interest (I like math, physics and economics)

3 - During my studies, I try to link what I learned from books to the problems in real life. ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Common App Essay - Topic of your Choice (My passion for public speaking?)

2 - Well, the first part of that last paragraph is good... but you can conclude with mention of how your...

UndergraduateUnicornsnowind - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Common app essay (topic of your choice) - Fly high

2 - The mention of the book is fine!! If you talked about it any more than you did, it would...

Undergraduatechocolatelee - Dec 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
FIT Essay - Fashion and Wall Street job

5 - Thanks for the feedback, everyone! Another question for you guys? Do you think the beginning of my essay...

Undergraduateblackkpearl09 - Dec 23, 2008blackkpearl09 - Dec 26, 2008
Listening to calm, soothing music; MIT short answer/ What I do for pleasure

4 - how about adding a little more detail to make it interesting? example : " listening to Bach, i...

UndergraduateSapphire - Dec 25, 2008gmanz - Dec 26, 2008
Princeton supplement (a favorite quotation from an essay or book)

4 - Honestly, I would come up with another topic and write a new essay. This essay says nothing about you...

Undergraduatenadirw - Dec 24, 2008Chink - Dec 26, 2008
Cornell CAS essay; enable me to try the impossible - dream of being a pharmacist

2 - I have dreamed of becoming a pharmacist or pharmaceutical researcher since my freshman year. The dream seemed like a...

Undergraduateluv4evr - Dec 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
Leaving everything I cherished in Thailand / "Kindness holds up the world"

5 - Yeah the deadline is nov.30......

UndergraduateForgott3n - Nov 29, 2008van_gogh - Dec 26, 2008
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