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Consumer prices drop - Economy revisited ; expositive essay

5 - Thanks!...

Essayssamuraitom - Sep 20, 2007samuraitom - Sep 23, 2007
A scary house - descriptive essay

NEW - Prompt was to describe a place. I think I did a good job with that. I tried not...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 23, 2007 -
english verb tense (simple past, present perfect, past perfect)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job with this! You are right, some of them are very tricky and,...

Grammar, Usagecolla26 - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
Short Review - reasons for attending college

4 - Greetings! No, technically, that is not a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is one which has two independent...

Essaysvolzurg - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality

2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of demonstrating the characteristics you listed! The only suggestions I...

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Sep 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
A Rose for Emily : Why Did Miss Emily Kill Homer?

2 - Greetings! Faulkner's story brings up a lot of intriguing questions. In contemplating why Miss Emily may have killed...

Essaysblackscorpion15 - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
My review of the great gatsby

3 - Greetings! I think you're doing a great job so far! You do want to be careful, as Devyn...

Book Reportsjeanelle - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
The Great Gatsby-- Essay on occasions and events in the novel

3 - This is completly brilliant 1000X's better than mine im still not happy with it and am tring...

Book ReportsWonderfulloser - Sep 18, 2007jeanelle - Sep 20, 2007
15 minutes of fame; NYU COMMON APP

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions. It was then I...

Undergraduatevishal720 - Sep 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 20, 2007
ME & My BROTHER / Human behavior psychology -Common App

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay that reveals a lot about what kind of person you...

Undergraduatemodi - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
References or journals for a pys research class

2 - Greetings! Your best friend, as a student, is often your university library. As a student, you probably have...

Grammar, Usagelindbriel - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
Hole - narrative essay(incident that happened and changed my mind)

7 - Greetings! Yes, I think that sounds good. I did like the headline idea, however. Perhaps something like "Pile...

Undergraduatesamuraitom - Sep 16, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
U.S. economy - expository essay

2 - Greetings! I think you did a great job in such a short time span! I have some editing...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
Nora becomes prepared to fullfil Pleny's request

6 - thank you...

Writing Feedbacktsj456 - Sep 16, 2007tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
Blank verse - "The Ball Poem" by John Berryman Help

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Poetrytsj456 - Sep 16, 2007tsj456 - Sep 17, 2007
Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification

4 - Greetings! Your essay has some interesting information! I have some editing suggestions for you: these Metalheads are...

Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
My Antonia-essay topic help

4 - Greetings! When I do a Google search using "My Antonia" as my search terms, I come up with...

Essaystsj456 - Sep 16, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 17, 2007
Is imagination more important than knowledge - SAT essay

NEW - "Is imagination more important than knowledge for human developement?" Even though my siblings were much more creative than...

Writing Feedbackmodi - Sep 16, 2007 -
Position Paper: Does it need to have only two sides?

2 - Greetings! Normally, in a position paper, you would take a position regarding the issue, and give your opinion...

Essaysenglinquirer - Sep 13, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 14, 2007
Memory is an attachment to our physical selves; Reincarnation / Process of memory

3 - Greetings, and thank you for your remarks Sarah. Something I would like to add, hopefully making it more...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Sep 11, 2007Rajiv - Sep 12, 2007
Need help on topic novel "Im not scared" by Niccolo Ammaniti

2 - Greetings! While I haven't read the novel, I can try to get you pointed in the right direction....

Book Reportsstudmaster - Sep 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
End of Suffering -- Essay

22 - You're welcome, Rajiv! (and I think "efforts" is the appropriate word for it in my case ;-)) Sarah,...

EssaysRajiv - Aug 2, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 12, 2007
'Breeze to find a job after graduation' - FSU admission

NEW - Hello the topic for the essay is (what is the best advice you have ever received, and why?) and...

Undergraduatedarca17 - Sep 10, 2007 -
organisation competition and environment

2 - Greetings! This is a topic which has stirred quite a lot of debate in the UK. Your paper...

Research Papersousman - Sep 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 10, 2007
I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.

NEW - Writing Problem #1 Since I was a child, I have always loved the sound of music. When I...

Writing FeedbackTimparham - Sep 9, 2007 -
Help with Question about Economic History (Australian)

4 - Greetings! I would suggest researching what types of economic development there have been, and looking for any impact...

EssaysphilipZ1985 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 9, 2007
Preparing for TOEFL IBT test - need advice on how to write better

2 - Greetings! It's always a challenge to write a good essay, but particularly so when you have to write...

Essaysphuongle - Sep 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement

2 - Greetings! I think you've crafted a very good thesis statement! I have just a few small editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackmonifah - Sep 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
World of writings; NYU - creative work that has influenced me

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Undergraduatelunasea - Aug 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
Teenage violence in schools

2 - Greetings! You give some good reasons for teen violence. Be careful, though, about making statements which are inaccurate...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
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