Scholarship / formal letter for applying phd position - show me the mistakes [2]

Once I completed my M.Sc. degree, I joined Prof. XXX's Membrane research centre at XXX University.

The main focus of my research has been the fabrication and modification of polymeric nanofiltration and the nano-composite membranes resulted in the publication of some attached papers.

In membrane processes, fouling takes place as the restriction of the mass transports throughout the membrane, at outside and inside the membrane, during the filtration.

The motional behaviour of the nanoparticle contaminants in the porous structure of the membrane havethe considerable effects on the inside fouling, and this subject has a great potential to experimentally and mathematically do research.

It would be so much appreciated, if I am qualified, if you give me an opportunity to be a part of your research group and to be a PhD student under your supervision.

Enclosed are copies of my CV and recommendation letter, as well as the first page of my papers.

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Undergraduate / My painting performance - applying to college [2]

My desire to gain knowledge was, ---No comma here---of course, ---or here.-- the priority, but extracurricular classes fascinated me the most.

Everything was different, but as soon as I felt comfortable in the environment, I decided to join soccer; a new sport that I happened to love. it.

I started to paint, as it was an activity that could be confined to four walls of a room.

I mean in four years of moving toliving in the United States, how well can a person actually learn to write?

I went into depression but at the same time I developed my extreme interest in writing poems.

My job was to look after kids and plays games or do creative activities together.

I know that this passion of mine as a volunteer, and my participation in sports will continue to grow as I go to Penn State and will push me to play intramural.

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Undergraduate / UVA Essay: Discuss something you secretly like but pretend not to, or vice versa. [2]

... the baby-skin-smooth texture and warmth, the whispering of the steam, and last but not least, the explosion of flavor when my teeth sink into the chewy mass.

I could hardly find anything to edit. I really like the way you write, it's funny and well worded. It shows your personality and sense of humor. Good luck with school and have fun!

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Writing Feedback / How many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities [2]

The graphic shows how many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities between televisions and computers from 2000 to present.

For an overview, in 2000, school children spent more time watchingtime on televisions more than on computers.

Then,it fell relatively to 15 hours per week in 2004 after that it fluctuated dramatically to present. ---Always leave a space after each comma.

On the other hand,schoolchildren spent 3 hours per week on computers,which was lower than televisions,in 2000.

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Undergraduate / 'Fantastic education and new stunning element' - UCF APPLICATION [2]

The first time that I heard of the University of Central Florida was in the fall of 2006 at a UCF-UF football game.

To this day, I can still clearly remember seeing Knightro and thinking what a complex fight song you had.

While I have changed my interests and preferred major, UCF has stayed my top choice.

If I had to guess, I'd say that It was that information session that really sparked my love for your university and started my fantasies of bleeding black and gold.

Good luck with school and have fun!

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Undergraduate / UIUC essay "THE DREAM LIVES ON" - tell us something about yourself [2]

You might be wondering if this must be a reality show or an ...

I felt myself proud to be a part of it.

There were students coming from all over Texas/There were students comingand from the big cities of New York and Chicago to the farthest region of Alaska and Hawaii!

The video was very engaging, and one thing that was clear was that being a doctor is a great way to help people: exactly what I want to do.

I don't think you should keep the part that says, 'I was like, where are the patients'? because it sounds kind of immature or not so serious. Good luck with school and have fun!

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Writing Feedback / 'my priorities and goals' - Meaning of life essay [2]

I believeThe world is inhabited by millions of individuals, each defining the meaning of life differently.

Corresponding to their personal activities and priorities; people choose a variety of paths inby which they can accomplish their main objectives in life.

Every event that happens has the power to change a person's life for better or for worse.

My life is a journey in which I am in a certain vehicle, and that vehicle is on a certain road headed toward a destination.

I have started on this expedition at the time that I was born.

As a young girl, I have set my priorities and goals such that pursuing them will grant me joy and happiness.

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Graduate / 'Aeronautics subjects' - SOP for SPACE TECHNOLOGY [2]

"A willing mind can reach the unreachable stars. " I strongly believe in these inspiring words.

This apartWe have also been introduced to Avionics Lab, Aircraft System Lab and Principles of management & Professional Ethics.

Meanwhile, I have undergone training Flight laboratory Experiments in Indian Institute Technology at Kanpur.

After completing my graduation I was selected as Mechatronics Engineer at XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX, which is a vibrant and growing defense R&D sector in the country.

Later I joined withthe Communication Department, and began working with Telemetry system.

The agenda behind the "Erasmus Mundus" program initiated by the EU is indeed praiseworthy, and will go a long way towards creating not only technically sound engineers but harmonious and friendly relations between the European people and the citizens of the third world.

This master's degree would also go a long way towards decreasing the deficit that exists in technical skills in our part of the world.

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Undergraduate / 'Younger brother in Czech Rep / Academic and social life' - UCF Admission Essay [2]

Throughout my academic career, there have been many bumps in the road for me, both within my personal life and my academics.

When I was about seven years old, my parents got divorced, ---No comma here--- and my father remarried.

I believe I have always tried my hardest to help my mother out when it was needed.

I bring my younger brother to and from baseball practice on nights that I don't work, and I work two part time jobs to help my mother out a little with financial situations, and I am a full-time dual enrollment Practical Nursing student.

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I have always been a very indecisive person, always second guessing myself and wondering what people thought of me or my decisions. ---Here, you should mention that when it comes to choosing a college, there's no question or second guessing.---

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Undergraduate / Not easy, but worth; Common App- Travelling Bug [4]

When I was two months old I took my first plane ride the UK to visit my father's side of the family.

Ten years ago, and I still remember details like it was yesterday.

It was the trip of a lifetime and when I first caught the travelling bug.

She sent a letter home accusing me of lying and making up stories about my trip, so my own father took off work one day to come to school and show the teacher all the pictures of me and ended up giving a presentation to the students about China. ---That was awesome!

However that was only the beginning: five years later when I was twelve, my dad gave us the opportunity to move to South Korea.

I've seen the Eiffel Tower, Big Ben, The Great Wall of China, and the Korean DMZ all before I was eighteen.

Great essay!

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Graduate / "...Today is a gift, that is why it is called the present" - CASPA narrative for PA program [2]

Working with this population has taught me about patience, altruism, respect, and how inadequate healthcare continues to be a crisis for everyone.

I work in a government agency, and although the individuals I work with all receive the medical attention they...

For me, becoming a physician's assistant means being able to help those in need, despite disability, social status, ethnicity, or any other prejudice.

At times, working in my current profession can be very trying, both mentally and physically.

The physician's assistant was created to alleviate this issue---Are you sure about that?--- by delivering cost-effective services across diverse settings, rural to overpopulated and under served.

...and I feel the physician's assistant career is the correct path for me, as they are dedicated to lifelong learning, creating positive patient relationships, and community service.

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Undergraduate / Undergrad essay needs help for evaluate [2]

Some people don't believe in luck for their success.

I, ---No comma here--- personally think you need both, a little bit of luck and a lot of hard work can achieve your goals.

Hard work contains determination, devotion and commitment to stay focused on your success.

It takes times , works and consistency .

Sometimes hard work really pays off like in losing weight.

I have to be determined and commited to myself.

I have to go to the gym every day to work out and watch on my eating habits . In this case, luck couldn't do anything but hard work will help me to achieve my goal.

Sometimes life is simple but a mystery in some way.

I believe all these successful people sometimes need a little bit of luck, but a lot of hard work all the time.

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Undergraduate / Biomass letter [2]

I understand that your company wants to build a bio-mass plant in your company . ---Did you mean to write 'in your town'?

There are many values and will consent to build the biomass plant. ---This sentence doesn't make sense to me, I think you should revise it.

Biomass energy comes from plants and animals which contain stored energy from the sun, and it's renewable.

Biomass is converted into methane gas and transportation fuels that are usable forms of energy.

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Undergraduate / graphic design Massart essay; graphic designers are as skilled as other artist [3]

However, graphic design is just as valid of an art form as any other, and I believe it is the most interesting.

Using these same principles in my paintings and drawings has definitely improved them greatly.

She is such a modern person today , which has many advantages, especially when teaching students who want to work as graphic designers, a very modern form of art.

Because of my graphic design class, my teacher at myin high school, and at Summer ...

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Undergraduate / 'Years of being looked down upon have changed my life' (Personal Statement) [2]

I quickly then responded, "No Professor Lim! I'm actually 17 years old."

I was always the shortest girl in my class, and people would point fingers and laugh at me.

From being called to many nicknames such as short, midget, shrimp, or even "oompa loompa", I have learned to love and accept my height.

The people where I volunteer at were stunned by my height, which allowed me to easily connect with my volunteer advisers .

Everywhere I go, there is not a moment when someone doesn't approach me and question me about my height.

Rather than letting my height affect me negatively, I learned to look at it from an optimistic point of view.

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Undergraduate / 'scholarly warriors' - Stanford - Intellectual vitality [3]

Hundreds of high schools students from across the s tates and around the world congregated onto the campus of UCLA for the National Youth Leadership Forum on medicine; for me, it was an impressive display of talent and zeal, for learning from the country's brightest young intellects that left an unforgettable impression.

Perhaps it was the prospect of young minds searching for answers to difficult questions that caught on to me, but as I meandered...

For nearly two weeks, this group of nonconformists, a legion of scholarly warriors, banded together to overcome the a modern day epidemic...

Although I may never again get the chance to discuss neural pathways with an Alaskan girl I met, or talk about new ways to administer medications with a boy from Italy, I am genuinely excited about our future.

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Writing Feedback / 'Pursuance, never succeed in track again' - College Essay Revision [2]

For the first time ever, my life, my passion, my love for track, was fading away from me like a dream. --Nice sentence!

In the summer, prior to my track season of junior year, I was committed to training every day with my trainer and eating healthier.

To my surprise, I managed to sprint 4.76 seconds in the 40m. dash, which was awfully fast for a girl.

As time progressed, everything finally became clear .

Even though I was once blinded by devastation and hatefrustration from my failure, I finally realized my accomplishment.

I will continue to work hard inat everything I do. What ever obstacles life throws at me, I know I will be able to endure them .

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Undergraduate / Dribble, pull up, and shoot. Deeper into the Game - UC Prompt 2 [2]

I grabbed the ball and pitched it at the wall hoping that the ball would burst and give me a reason to simply go home and quit.

These are the moments where I wish my dad could support my decision to participate in sports and train me like all of my other teammates.

As a Korean basketball player, I don't necessarily receive the respect I deserve as an athlete, based on common stereotypes towards Asian people.

To psych myself up , I take a moment to remember their ecstatic faces.

... it has helped me master the art of endurance, independence, perseverance, responsibility and the most important skill I know, which is to keep heart.

It's appalling to see how something considered as just a sport could change your life forever for the better.

I've learned to go after what I want no matter how many obstacles I encounter, because my passion for the game surpasses any ability that my teammates or I show on the court and it has changed me into the person I will always be proud of being.

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Graduate / Quality patient healthcare on a holistic perspective - Western University Nursing Personal Statement [2]

This became an eye-opening experience, because for the first time in my life, I could actually engage in the operations of dental work.

This was an exhilarating opportunity for me to not only further expand my insight of the health field, but also to experience unprecedented direct patient care in a larger clinical setting.

In the two years spent rotating among different departments, (Medical Surgery/Definitive Observation Unit, Emergency Room, Obstetrics and Mother and Baby Care Unit), I had spent every shift working alongside nurses.

I performed vital sign procedures, bathed and fed patients, prepared patient rooms, sent specimens to the laboratory, obtained

Having acquired organization and maintenance skills at the dental clinic, as well as problem solving and communication skills from the internship, I am well prepared to take on the challenges associated with the nursing profession.

By combining both aspects, I am highly well-prepared for what the masters prepared nurse entails.

What many may perceive as the pressures of a job, I find invigorating and I anticipate challenges that keep me on my toes.

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Undergraduate / 'The negative stereotype' - Best advice I have ever recieved: Be Harsh! [3]

Throughout my short life, there was one piece of advice that kept reoccurring: ...

The integral meaning of "being Harsh" can be derived from the most simplistic and overlooked and piece of advice that we have all ...

My parents, being from India, didn't know much about the English language, and took it upon themselves to find the most...

Coincidentally , the word harsh in the English language is used to describe unpleasant severity, and this definition became a surprisingly large obstacle in helping me discover my identity.

As I have matured, I've discovered the triumph that was my name.

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Writing Feedback / Learning from Electronic Media: GRE essay topic [6]

Well, if you post what you have so far, we can send you in the right direction with your essay.

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Research Papers / Reviving the Victory Garden - English 102 Research Paper [2]

For some, it is a nuisance of landscape to keep up , a battlefield of toys to pick up or just the right size for a pool.

The super occupied lives of most suburban families leaves them wanting less yard maintenance, so the solution-cover it up with a solid surface such as rock, cement or pavers.

Gardening is the process of growing any assortment of living plants which can be edible or non-edible.

Urban gardening is the same, but also encompasses using all available space...A comma usually comes before the word 'but'.

From eating organic foods to exercise,from the labor of tending to the garden is good for you .

Preserving food means canning, freezing or dehydrating food for future use.

Storing food and water is the responsible thing to do for any family to be prepared in any instant .

They contain numerous health benefits over store bought eggs such as:

There is peace of mind in knowing no matter what happens: loss of employment, a natural disaster or increasing food prices, there will...

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Undergraduate / a special ability with music [2]

Instead of talking about violence and substance abuse, he decides to use his music to in order to show how the human mind works and what people yearn forthose things for which it yearns .

When I heard my first Nujabes track I thought, "Who are these people singing?" By listening to the amalgamation of these hip hop artists, I felt a connection towardswith the lyrics and I started to say to myself "Hey, I've been in a similar situation." Because of how Nujabes' music touched me, so I was shocked when news of his death came to America. I was mortified that he had died before his music could inspire and speak to more people. I felt that he had been cheated. Such talent and innovation was wiped offtaken from the world without evenbefore it was given a chance to shine. From this experience, I initially thought that life was unfair,.butBut as I listened to Nujabes again, I started to think differently.

Letters / "flexibility" - Letter of Intent for Substitute Teacher [7]

Please accept this letter of interest and the additional enclosures as application for the Substitute Teacher position posted on EdJoin. I was particularly excited to see a position open with the Lake Tahoe Unified School District, as I would like to contribute to a mutually beneficial teaching experience within the district.

During my employment with Monterey Unified School District, I substitute taught most subjects and age groups. Adapting my teaching style and classroom management techniques to the particular classroom environment were skills that I strengthened with practice and teacher collaboration. One of my greatest strengths is flexibility. This provides the capacity to walk into an unknown learning environment, analysisanalyze and adjust to the situation, to fosterwhich fosters a productive and eager classroom. My experiences have been cross-cultural, working with multi-linguistic learners from kindergarten to twelfth-grade, in advanced placement to special education classes. My varied professional endeavors meld prioritization, effective communication and multitasking skills with the ability to thrive in a high-pressure environment.

I believe you will find me to be a dedicated, flexible and nurturing educator who is determined to provide students with opportunities to successfully learn.learn with success . Thank you for your consideration,. I look forward to meeting with you

Undergraduate / Unexpected Lesson - Common App Essay [4]




Maybe you shouldn't use half-heartedly.





Great essay! As for the tone of the second paragraph, it sounds ok, but maybe you shouldn't use the word half-heartedly. It doesn't sound like you're bitter at the vice-president, because you said you didn't want to ruin your friendship by confronting her about it. Good work!

Undergraduate / 'life's conundrums and complications' - So where is Waldo, really? UChicago [7]

Great essay! Just a few grammatical errors:


should be "After all, aren't we all"


should be "representation of what makes Waldo, Waldo?"


should be "I say would have because the closest we" No comma needed.


should be "Pioneered by Watson, Crick and Wilkin, it took years of research, international collaborations and was certainly no mean feat." Should stay in past-tense.


should be "Waldo is within us and represents our travails and tribulations; only if we choose to look at it from such a perspective."

Great work!

Undergraduate / 'a part of the band' - Common app: extracurricular essay [2]

Being a part of the band has been one of my most rewarding high school experiences.

Later, I realized that I loved being a part of the large family of friends that most people knew as "the band kids".

I had a schedule conflict my junior year, which prevented me from being in the class.---Your essay would be much more personal if you write what instrument you played.

During the other seasons, there is pep band and concerts in which I play bass clarinet.

All of these performances, along with practice, took up a large portion of my time.

I learned the importance of dedication to a team, along with time management which was crucial in order to maintain a balance.

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Undergraduate / 'I struggled with depression. It affected every aspect of my life' [2]

Because of this child, I was able to overcome my depression and make mebecome a more positive, motivated individual.

This child's name was Tiffany and she could barely hear or talk.

Every Saturday, I was always partnered up with Tiffany and we did every activities together.

Even though Tiffany didn't have what others had, which was the ability to speak and hear, she was loving, compassionate, and humble.

I think this is coming along fine! Good luck with school and have fun!

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Undergraduate / What work of art, music, science, etc has surprised, unsettled or challenged you? UVA [2]

The violins added their voices , singing a sorrowful tale of which only our minds and hearts could conjure.

I heaved a sigh, embarrassed by the tear I shed in this emotional roller coaster ride.

You are an amazing writer, descriptive, emotional and interesting. Good luck with school, though I don't think you'll be needing it!

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Undergraduate / 'So many students wanting to go to college' - QUESTBRIDGE- ESSAY #1 [2]

I live in Bakersfield, California, the hottest city I have ever lived in, and attend school in a dwelling that contains students who care nothing about their future except making "big money" when they grow up, but without actually thinking about how hard they'll be willing to work to get that "big money".

Once I got there I was like, "Wow! I didn't even know there was this muchwere this many students that actually wanted to go to college."

As I walked around passing by each table and squeezing throughbetween people, trying to catch up to my sister, I heard a lot of people ask, "Where are those flag thingies?!"

I, and few others barely gathered any information, if any, because of all the other students who were just there to ask for a pennant.

... Bakersfield, my parents never dared to go to college, my mom dropped out of high school and my dad barely...

Good luck!

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Undergraduate / 'when someone gets hurt...' - Questbridge application essay [2]

When I was eleven years old, my youngest brother fell from his bike and hurt his head pretty badly.

This, and other events have led to my growing interest in the brain, and how it works.

Like most people, when someone gets hurt, it becomes a moment that gets hurt, it becomes a moment that you remember for long time.

From when I scraped my knee in Nigeria, running around the unpaved roads by my grandparents house., to when I hit my head while playing tag half a decade later. ---This is an incomplete sentence.

Over a year ago my sister accidentally cut her toes with garden shears, and went to the hospital to get it fixed.

Becoming a doctor will not only provide me with a stable income , but will also give me the knowledge I need to help my family, the people in the United States, in Nigeria, and anywhere the wind takes me.

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Graduate / "One must strive to be a shepherd" - CASPA Personal Statement [2]

It was his way of encouraging me to become a leader amongst followers.

TheMy desire to work in the medical field became magnified from then on.

My determination to succeed continued when I joined New City Volunteer Ambulance Corps in August of 2011, hoping to get glimpse into the unfamiliar world of patient care.

...to be someone who could provide extended care for a patient after the initial EMS assessment, as a physician's assistant would.

Through volunteering in the emergency medical services, I realized that the qualities I was searching for are in my profession of choice.

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Undergraduate / 'personal and professional fulfillment' - Common App reasons for transfer [2]

Fast Forward to today, and I find myself nowhere near the origin of my journey.

I am out of school and working full time, and although I slightly digressed from what I thought was my original plan, I have learned life lessons ...

Fast forward to today, and I find myself with a new perspective and a much clearer vision of what I want my future, both academic and personal, to look like. and

I feel equipped to take make strides toward turning my vision into reality.

Since then, I have developed an affinity with sociology, and I want to convert it into my life's work with the resources and programs offered at XXXX UNIVERSITY. I am now ready to become an active contributor to an academic...

Looking back at my summer in 2008 and the events that have led up to where I am now, I realized that I was not prepared to...

This is coming along fine! Good luck.

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Graduate / 'Oil & Gas industry' - MSc in Petroleum Engineering [2]

<University name> has internationally top ranked faculty members and great facilities for conducting a research in the growing and rapidly changing field of Petroleum Engineering.

The oil & gas industry has changed our lives through the recent few decades, and I want to play a major role in this change.

Being a Saudi from the Eastern Region of Saudi Arabia, where the most important oil wells in the world are , has influenced my decision to become a Petroleum Engineer.

...I have studied business minor that consists of 6 business classes, to understand the major concepts of ...

So, I nominated myself for Web Chair of the SPE KU Chapter and was elected by the students to take the position with 100% win.---This is great!

All I wanted was to be one of the top 5 students that professors have direct contact with and I made it.

In addition to that, I was chosen to work as the grader of Reservoir Engineering class by Professor <name>, who was my adviser , in my undergraduate studies at the University of Kansas. I had direct contact with him and I was the student that he trusted the most.

Your essay ended rather abruptly. You should add a closing sentence or two, like '..so this is why I think I would fit in well at...'.

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Undergraduate / UIL Urbana-Champaign Undergraduate Essay #1 [2]

I learned how to use a saw, hammer and drill at a young age, and continue building wood projects up to present day, including a half-pipe I built from scratch in my backyard during Sophomore year.---Sweeet!

It was also my surroundings and how I interacted with them, that shaped me into who I am today.

Through this process, along with learning about some rudimentary structural engineering, I learned the idea of trial and error and ...

Today, I've found myself becoming very fond of Engineering and Computer Science, mainly via the FIRST Tech Challenge and through programming my...

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Undergraduate / Diligence. I was given a lot of opportunities that have influenced who I am [2]

I have accomplished a lot in high school academically by maintaining a high GPA throughout, high school, attending a community college during my junior year, and achieving Presidents Honor Roll at the college during the first two quarters.

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I was given opportunities to help my community, and the financial stability to get me through my childhood, ---no comma here--- and receive a very good education.

... I believe this because I have experienced the consequences of living life the wrong way.---This seems to contradict all that you have written so far.

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Scholarship / My significant event: learning English experience [2]

First, always capitalize English...or any other language.

The soft squeak of nurse's shoes filled the lobby as pink uniformed nurses dallied about amongst the fumes of disinfectant.

I really didn't want to be here.

I had made myself that way.

Paper cuts --two words -- would never compare to the emotional gashes made by xenophobic children who teased me for the accented rolling of my Spanish tongue.

Mother sought to erase my solidarity , however, and eagerly snatched me out of my sanctuary, offering my services at a home for seniors.

A nurse eventually took mercypity on me and guided me through the barren halls towards the room of my first companion.

Avocado-colored eyes pierced my own. I nervously walked towards her, unsure of how to interact with this woman--a woman who has known English all her life. A woman who has never doubted a single phrase, a single pronunciation. Her magnetizing gaze gripped my body and locked me into place. I felt her rough, wrinkled hands gently cover mine. ---This is some excellent writing, you definitely have a better vocabulary than some people who were born in the US. I like the way you write, so descriptive and personal.

　
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Undergraduate / 'What I do is more than just a job' QB Achievement essay. [2]

Even at this young age they can understand, this could kill me.

From the kid who went from screaming in anxiety for his mom, to watching him successfully glide through the water, I find accomplishment.

Sharing that moment, however brief, always boosts my enthusiasm, and continues to provide the motivation for me to push myself to become a better coach.

Throughout the entire process of teaching and learning, I believe that I am learning more than the student is .

The dynamics of communicating with the nervous child in the water and then the ever watchful parent challenges my interpersonal interaction skills.

For me, going from being the girl who was too shy to even ask to borrow a pencil, to being able to conduct a lesson and then give genuine constructive feedback to an adult, is a huge step.

Every day ---2 words!--- is an achievement for me, as every day I see the fruits of my efforts in the accomplishment of the kids I teach.

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Graduate / 'Our inspiration often comes from others' - Physician's Assistant's essay [2]

The blatant optimism that this young girl conveyed in spite of the fact that she was fighting one of the hardest battles of her life, at such a young age, was simply inspiring.

This was the exact moment that I knew I wanted to make a difference in others lives, just like this young girl had made in mine.

From that day forward, I took my new found motivation and set along a path that has led me to a crucial point in my life.

My drive to become a fundamental figure in medicine originally began with intentions of becoming a medical doctor.

It wasn't always easy, but my passion for medicine kept me going.

Great ending! Good luck with school.

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Undergraduate / Favorable and unfavorable sides of being an employee or a business person [2]

Bearing this in one's mind, turned an individual, in particular, a newly graduate to pay attention about making the decision of which path in the career world to enter.

The employee is an individual who works for someone whomis usually called the boss of a company.

One could be either a regular or part-time employee, as long as he was working under the management of a person with higher position and the one who started and profited from the business.

In connection with these professions, people who are looking for a career must choose to be one of these.

There are many advantages to being an employee.

There's no one who could fire him. Moreover, risk-takers are individuals who can enjoy the challenge of plan-making, development and realization of one's business.

One may also feel he or she is uncompensated for the work he has done.

In conclusion, it still depends on the personality, capacity and experiences of an individual as to how he can achieve the success in the field he chose as his career.

Although, a risk-taker person may enjoy being an entrepreneur, there ...

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