justivy03
Jan 17, 2016
Undergraduate / "What is you favourite subject?" "Why are you interested in this program?" - UTSC Supplementary [4]
Amanda, here's the rest of the suggested modifications for your essay.
3. What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
- and developed my problem solving skills that are
- thinkuniquelyout of the ordinary ,
- me in any aspect of the business,is my ability to collaborate well
- be done, which.
- I have developed these skills through working part time .
4. Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less)
- A strength that I havefound through this past year,mastered is my ability to
- on more concise writing andfluiditysmooth transition in my sentences.
- Through this past yearin English(this is not necessary as we have established the subject) ,
- I have learned to integrate my quotes to create smooth flowingin the sentences,
- and have worked on my writing to connect all my words into coherentsentencesideas .
There you have it, my final suggestions for your essay, good luck and do let us know what happen, we'd love to hear from you.
Amanda, here's the rest of the suggested modifications for your essay.
3. What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
- and developed my problem solving skills that are
- think
- me in any aspect of the business,
- be done
- I have developed these skills through work
4. Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less)
- A strength that I have
- on more concise writing and
- Through this past year
- I have learned to integrate my quotes to create smooth flow
- and have worked on my writing to connect all my words into coherent
There you have it, my final suggestions for your essay, good luck and do let us know what happen, we'd love to hear from you.