Writing Feedback / Bad memories leaves scars in the heart. [4]

Elie Wiesel once said :" for in the end, it's all the about the memory, its source and its magnitude and of course its consequences".I agree that memories hinder one to learn past ans success in the future. Memories are odds in one's road. Forgetting is the only way to better future.

Assignment: Do memories hinder or help people in their effort to learn from the past and succeed in the present?

Essay:

Elie Wiesel once said :" for in the end, it's all the about the memory, its source and its magnitude and of course its consequences".I agree that memories hinder one to learn past ans success in the future. Memories are odds in one's road. Forgetting is the only way to better future.

Bad memories leaves scars in the heart. Germans accabled by economic sanctions, lost 15 % of their territories, remember the bitter past, then helped Nazis capture the Authority in Berlin and commit an extinction war which include genocides, Mass deportation, systematic destruction of infrastructure and led finally to nuclear warfare. And , end, by 50 millions of killed people ( most of them are civilians). This war lead to world's division into two blocks and to a half-a-century cold war which make people suffer from high-tension that prevent cultural, economic, and political interaction between east and west.

Learning from the past have never been a good idea to enlightenment philosophers who removed all the old memories of the past which include biasis, misconceptions and prejudges. They start from none the Age of Reason which help the Europe to raise from Middle-Age darkness by establishing new, scientific, political and ethical principles .What if this thinkers stick to the past? Would they reach the climb of blue-sky thinking? Would they clamber out of the dark box? Sometimes, memories and past hinder people from success in present.

None of any Chinese will forget the humiliating time of the Sino-Japanese War. During that eight-year bestial period, the whole land of China was crowded with slaughter, rape, bully and taunt. Never could a pregnant woman or an innocent child be granted a charity to escape from the evil cruelty. On the street crawled helpless people waiting for the deprivation of their last breath, and the ownership to become one of the cadavers.Such a past have made a stereotyped view toward Japanese which remains until the 20th century.

Elie Wiesel, an American-Jewish suffered heavily throught the Holocaust. He was a victim of Anti-Semitism in Nazis Germany (1939-1945). Following his liberation from Auschwitz concentration and extermination Camp, Wisel was a bitter, jaded man. He could not even write Night until several years later (a book illustrating his experience with his father in the Camp) because he lost his faith in God and Mankind. He vowed not to speak about his experience for 10 years after. A kapo saying has a huge impact on him:" here there are no brothers, no fathers, no friends, every one lives and dies for himself alone". His past haunted him rendering him passive. And even after achieving a huge success after publishing his triology Night, Dawn, Day, A sence of grief, Sorrow dominated him which explain that his melancholy memories are hard to forget.As he quoted: " one more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live"

Writing Feedback / Does a person's character determine that person's success in life ? [3]

Character plays a large role in success ; most people who are successful have certain characteristics such as work ethic and and strong moral views.

Franklin Roosevelt's long-sighted vision has given him the ability to manage the raising of world's economy after great depression in 1920's. He lead the American nation to prosperity and happiness after suffering from proverty and unemployement .

Hammurabi, the king of Babylon, he made Hammurabi's codes to organize social life and people's interactions which are the first written laws in recorded history. Hammurabi inherited one major direction for his political activity: to succeed in controlling the Euphrates waters-important in an area that depended exclusively on irrigation agriculture.He established (around 1750 B.C) the famous irrigations lines which benefit efficiently from river's water,turning southern Mesopotamia's bogs into Gardens of Adobe .The most fertile area in the world in that time.

Nixon, U.S. President, who traveled to China proving his strong-will and demonstrating his vision as a leader worth the determination. His visit helped to lessening tension between the west bloc (Capitalistic World) and the east bloc (Communist World) furthermore, he establishes the plat-form for serious economic, military and educational links between U.S. and east's behemoth.

No one also can deny that only self-reliant and iron-will are the two characters that make Thomas Alpha Edison as one of the greatest scientists of all time. His 5.000 fail experiences have never be an odd in his road to illuminate the world when he invent the light blub, searching for the gas that fit with light, Edison said when he uses the Xenon successfully:"I'm not disappointed, I just discovered 5000 way to not do it ".

Writing Feedback / What is one important "easy answer" that we should resist? what dangerous misconceptions hold? [6]

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Prompt:
The liberally educated person is one who is able to resist the easy and preferred answers, not because he's obstinate but because he knows other worthy of consideration.

Assignement:

What is one important "easy and preferred answer" that we should resist? That's what dangerous misconception does commonly hold?

One dangerous misconception that we generally subconsciously treat us as true is that the majority is always right. Blending in the crowd fosters in us a sense of security however the majority's opinions are not always right. In contrast the people who dare to challenge the majority finally find the truth.

Defeating old prejudges, biases and bible's misconceptions was the objectives of early renaissance's and age of enlightenment's philosophers and scientists.Galileo has faced several odds which led him to prison in order to spread Copernicus's heliocentric theory -A concept which consist the corner stone of scientific revolution- Toward him, biblical statement must be outbreaked because it contain a theory that doesn't fit the reality. That's why Galileo, Copernicus, Kepler and other refuse to belong to the cattle, they said "no" to dogmatism and "yes" to free thinking. This upraising includes removing the danger which threatens human kind, this scientists change the face of the world we live in.

Socrates was one of the early philosophers who criticize this behaviour. He encouraged people to emancipate and leave the cattle guided by greedy sophists who use rhetoric to persuade by people using chicanery stressed on human's desire, lust and pleasure: He call people to think wisely and individually and to avoid the mandate of others. Such struggle lead Socrates to death by poisoning, Plato also call people to reach blue-sky thinking; sum's light by breaking the chains that attach them to the blocks of illusions( The shadow of truth ) in the allegory of the cave while debating with Pretagoras

The experience of Google's co-founder Lawrence Page, illustrate that the majority don't always represent the truth. One of the youngest entrepreneurs to achieve global success, Lawrence Page is idolized by ambitious businessmen all over the world. When asked what was the big obstacle to his success he answered succinctly:" Most people's opinions" In fact shortly after he decided to start his own business most people around encouraged him to do what most businessmen do: relying on acquaintances for donation and investments. This method is considered safe and convenient. However Lawrence refused to follow the rules, instead, in the following 6 months he diligently researched information about all potential investor and how to run a company successfully in the end through hard work and aptitude Lawrence transacted the first sum of money to this company's account, this experience offered him invaluable knowledge about impress investors, how to manage income and how to rim a company. Now Google is one of the biggest search, cloud computing and software firm in the world ,earning 53 billion dollars in 2013 .

Writing Feedback / How important is to seek the opinions of others when making significant personal decisions ? [5]

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SAT Essay 2007

Assignment:

How important is to seek the opinions of others when making significant personal decisions ?

Essay:

Without question, the most vital decision one can make is for him/ her. Though others opinions may swing ones initial thought. History, politic and Literature,have exemplified the power of making decisions without others assistance.

Sometimes, others opinions are stabs toward original, innovative and creative decisions especially when it comes to politic. History depicts the efficaciousness of following one's heart. One example is that of Jimmy Carter (U.S. President in 1970's) who was the one who took the initiative, regardless from opinion polls, political analysts and western governments by reconciling the biggest opponents in Middle East: Egypt and Israel. He led the high-tension zone to peace by pushing these two nations into truce negotiations which finish by signing Camp David treaty in 1979. Audiences all-over the world applauds such step in the way of peace which demonstrate his vision, awareness and long sight: A rehab that prevent people from the vows of war until the fall of 2000. Before this intervention, leaders and communities thought that peace cannot be established anymore especially after Yum Kippur war 1973 but Jimmy Carter proves that such sensible decisions must be taken with both responsibility and boldness, regarding others opinions. Thus, history proves that he is right. Second example is that during American Revolution in 18th century, American leaders choose to set off the war against Britain Empire after drafting the declaration of independence. Authors like Thomas Jefferson and Benjamin Franklin oppose the war as absurd because Britain was in the apex of power colonizing all over the globe (East Africa, South Africa, Australia and North America). But finally, history shows that their decision is perfectly correct.

The American dream or The Western Dream that many immigrate chased can never be reached with seeking mother, father, relatives and even friends' opinions. Such experience depends only on your determination, your ambition, your iron-will. It has nothing to do with other. No one can feel one's misery. Opinions can be deceptive and can keep you far away from your goal. But, for many a third world citizen, this experience worth it, no matter the hurdles, he make his choice and leave his wooden neck and go to the Promised Land. Malcolm X, one of the greatest African American activists in history was in fact an immigrant from Ghana , thus he becomes a minister ,a defender of human rights especially the right of blacks for a no-segregation society. Mario Balotelli, an Italian with African roots, reaches Europe coast in a commodity boat and now he is one of the best football players in the world what can they be if they remain in Africa? Did they will reach fame? "I don't think so». Sometimes choosing one's own road without influence is better then seeking others opinions based on old clichés and fear.

It's particularly doubtful and even dangerous to listen to others without a solid judgement that guild our decision and help us distinguish right from wrong. Without moral compass we can be lured by sins such as greed, vanity and self-congruatelary. Shakespeare's play "Macbeth" illustrates this point, when Lady Macbeth convinced her husband to kill the king. Macbeth refused at first but after he follows the lady's advices, commit the regicide and strip his sanity. This act never brings him a better life because he was wretched by hallucination and sleeplessness even after being a king after killing the king Duncan. A sense of guilt invaded him and might mares haunted his sleep making him remember bitterly the murdering, Just because he followed others advices.

Writing Feedback / Ignoring what others' think and others' opinions is clearly the more successful path in life [9]

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Assignment:
How important is it to seek the opinions of others when making significant personal decision?

Essay:
Without question, the most vital decision one can make is from himself/herself. Though others' opinions may swing one's initial thought, literature, history, and in sports have exemplified the power of making one's own personal decision without the assistance of others.

In the novel As I Lay Dying by William Faulkner, the effect of making personal decisions without others' opinions is clearly illustrated. Jewel, one of the main characters, goes down his own decision path, ignoring all the outside opinions. Jewel is determined to bury his mother, Addie, in Jackson even though he is deluged with negative feedback and opinions. One of the characters, Darl, continues to try to persuade Jewel to end to journey but Jewel refuses. In the end of the novel, Jewel accomplishes his goal while Darl is sent to a mental asylum, demonstrating that not all opinions are valid for consideration.

In addition to American literature, history also depicts the efficaciousness of following one's own heart. During the American Revolution, the American leaders who drafted the Declaration of Independence and declared sovereignty were met with negative feedback and opinions. Writers such as Benjamin Franklin and Thomas Jefferson were told that going to war with Britain was straight out absurd. At the time, Britain was at its apex of power, colonizing all over the globe. However, our founding fathers went with their own decisions and as history shows, their decision was the correct one.

Last but not least, following one's decision and its success can be seen in the sports world. One exemplary condition is in the NFL. Peyton Manning, the record the setting quarterback from the Indianapolis Colts, follows his own intuition when playing football. Manning is well known for his audibles, or his changing of the play at the line of scrimmage. In one game during the 2009-2010 season, the Colts called a slant rounte one of Manning's receivers. Without hesistation, Manning calls an audible and goes with his own personal decision, not the coaches. The play was a overwhelming success, as Manning switched the play into a go-route to Pierre Garcon, which turned out to be a long touchdown.

All in all, ignoring what others' think and others' opinions is clearly the more successful path in life. As illustrated through the novel As I Lay Dying, the American Revolution, and Peyton Manning, following one's own decision ultimately leads to success.

Writing Feedback / "One more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live" [4]

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Prompt:

Many persons believe that to move up the ladder of success and achievement, they must forget the past, repress it, and relinquish it. But others have just the opposite view. They see old memories as a chance to reckon with the past and integrate past and present.

Adapted from Sara Lawrence-Lightfoot, I've Known Rivers: Lives of Loss and Liberation

Assignment:
Do memories hinder or help people in their effort to learn from the past and succeed in the present?

Essay:

Elie Wiesel once said :" for in the end, it's all the about the memory, its source and its magnitude and of course its consequences".I agree that memories hinder one to learn past ans success in the future. Memories are odds in one's road. Forgetting is the only way to better future.

Bad memories leaves scars in the heart. Germans accabled by economic sanctions, lost 15 % of their territories, remember the bitter past, then helped Nazis capture the Authority in Berlin and commit an extinction war which include genocides, Mass deportation, systematic destruction of infrastructure and led finally to nuclear warfare. And , end, by 50 millions of killed people ( most of them are civilians). This war lead to world's division into two blocks and to a half-a-century cold war which make people suffer from high-tension that prevent cultural, economic, and political interaction between east and west.

Learning from the past have never been a good idea to enlightenment philosophers who removed all the old memories of the past which include biasis, misconceptions and prejudges. They start from none the Age of Reason which help the Europe to raise from Middle-Age darkness by establishing new, scientific, political and ethical principles .What if this thinkers stick to the past? Would they reach the climb of blue-sky thinking? Would they clamber out of the dark box? Sometimes, memories and past hinder people from success in present.

None of any Chinese will forget the humiliating time of the Sino-Japanese War. During that eight-year bestial period, the whole land of China was crowded with slaughter, rape, bully and taunt. Never could a pregnant woman or an innocent child be granted a charity to escape from the evil cruelty. On the street crawled helpless people waiting for the deprivation of their last breath, and the ownership to become one of the cadavers.Such a past have made a stereotyped view toward Japanese which remains until the 20th century.

Elie Wiesel, an American-Jewish suffered heavily throught the Holocaust. He was a victim of Anti-Semitism in Nazis Germany (1939-1945). Following his liberation from Auschwitz concentration and extermination Camp, Wisel was a bitter, jaded man. He could not even write Night until several years later (a book illustrating his experience with his father in the Camp) because he lost his faith in God and Mankind. He vowed not to speak about his experience for 10 years after. A kapo saying has a huge impact on him:" here there are no brothers, no fathers, no friends, every one lives and dies for himself alone". His past haunted him rendering him passive. And even after achieving a huge success after publishing his triology Night, Dawn, Day, A sence of grief, Sorrow dominated him which explain that his melancholy memories are hard to forget.As he quoted: " one more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live"

Scholarship / What's your opinion of the claim that sometimes censorship is justified? [3]

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Assignment:

What's your opinion of the claim that sometimes censorship is justified?

Essay:

There's valid ground to assert that censorship, supervision and inspection are the tools of oppression in different forms. Observations, history, literature qualify its harm on both individual and society that's in my perspective I think that censorship can never be justified.

The primary reason why I hold this opinion is that censorship restricts the rights of the individual and personal development. Based on real-life Observations, for example, management during one's childhood may misguide his or her ability to discern outside world. The words "DO NOT PICK FLOWERS","DOGS MAY BITE YOU" make child confused and even worried about whether he or she should stand close to this beautiful but"dangerous"nature.Similiarly,students in middle school would lost their ability of creative study if they are totally controlled by the monotonous standards. Moreove,too much rules in a company may make the enthusiastic staff lose momentum in laborious business when they are punished for having been late or examined to prevent some public-owned proporties from stolen. These Observations from social life qualify how restrictive censorship is.

In addition, throughout history, Censorship has never been justified. Only authority practises censorship to ensure its own longevity and profit and then justifying dictatorship and tyranny. When it comes to totalitarian regimes Censorship can be assimilated to propaganda. Joseph Gobbles, propaganda Minister during Nazis Germany (1939-1945), asserts that Media has the final say in both cold and real war. That's why Nazis maintain heavily all means of Media and then speared its poisonous ideas into the crowds, making central Europe fertile soil anti-Semitic genocides across extermination camps ( as Auschwitz). German Propaganda justify its censorship by providing protection and security to its nation from outside-invasion, while the reality is that this strong censorship turn people into dogmatic, stereotyped and racist creatures. Even Children were taken from families and forced to enlist into barbaric brain-washing programs known as "Hitler Youth". As a conclusion, history proves that Censorship has devasting consequences.

Moreover, literature warns of the danger of censorship. The censor on literature and art is maybe the worst form, because books make people think, analyze, challenge and criticize. So, without books, it's hard to build a free society because books are like a window onto the world. In this way, people without books turn into pacific, easy manipulated and obidient puppet in the hands of government. Ray Bradbury illustrate censorship on literature in a dystopian novel which present a future American society where books are outlawed and fireman burn any that are found . Fahrenheit 451 (the title refers to the auto cognition point of paper) forces, explicitly, on the threat of books' burning in suppressing dissenting ideas which refer to McCarthy Era (1947-1957).This fear comes from "The Great Purge" campaigns in Soviet Union (1934-1940) which is a political repression orchestred by Joseph Stalin. This operation include large-scale purge of the communist Party and Government officials, repression of peasants, imprisonment and Arbitrary executions among even writers and poets. The goal was ensuring allegiance among people. Although, maintaining loyalty can never justify oppression and violence.

To conclude, I can assert that in world that prides its blue-sky thinking, it's a shame to accept any form of censor which is certainty a veiled neo-tyranny.

Writing Feedback / "leader is like the captain in a boat"; what is the most important qualities of a person who guides? [2]

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Assignment:

What is the most important qualities of a leader?

Essay:

During centuries and from the dawn of civilization, leaders were the ones who take the burden of their nations their concerns, their ambitions and their dreams. That's why a leader must have vital qualities in order to deserve such a high position like Thatcher, Kennedy, Churchill and Truman.

A leader must be trustworthy. A trustworthy leader is loyal to the people of his country and beholden in political and economic favors to no one. He must clarify situations and never betray his people who have trusted him to lead them. Franklin Roosevelt was frank with American Nation during the great depression in 1920's; an era when the United States was looking for a solid and trustworthy leader to guide the country out of a financial mess. This reform prevents U.S. from falling into the abyss of dependence. His strong and clear handling of the situation proved that he was a true leader who was an expert in sound governance

A leader must be faithful. He must be a person with a conscience that will help him be strong in the face of corruption. Corruption can destroy nations through civil war caused by economic problems and a rise in terrorism when the governance of a nation is weak. . Corruption may consume the growth which must be, potentially, conveyed to low-income families and middle class in order to create weather, happier and more equal society and thus reaching prosperity. But, with Corruption growth rate cannot be materialized on the ground. Which lead to suffering among working class, manifested in poverty and um employment. This situation is an enough reason for revolution; Riots will topple the corrupted leaders which is not worthy of authority. Arab Spring is a case in this point when Ben Ali, Quaddafi, Selah and Mubarak fall apart just like domino in front of enraged youth in 2011.

A charismatic leader knows how to turn any leadership disadvantage into an advantage. They know how to turn enemies into fragile friends or silent opponents. George Washington and John F. Kennedy are examples of successful charismatic leaders who helped bring peace to their nation and built the image of their nation as a strong leader in the international community. .

A leader, finally, should have iron-will and never give up. On October, 29th, 1941 Winston Churchill went to his hometown of Harrow after a school was bombarded to deliver a speech and encourage pupils there to remains strong optimistic and never give up despite German warfare in order to build U.K. after the war.despite German warfare in order to build U.K. after the war. People think like throwing in the towel but Churchill was the one who never lost his vision toward his nation .This character is highly needed when moral is at stake and the nation is already sinking. Other famous speeches from Winston Churchill like " We Shall Fight them On The Beaches" remain graved in Briton's minds giving them a push to resist the woes of the war. History proves that this character is central to maintain a solid UK during the war which finally leads to Allies Victory in 1945.

To conclude, a leader is like a captain in a boat, unless he has the trust of his crew and passengers, has faith in himself and the people around him, and is strong willed and charismatic enough to get his ship the help it needs to get to shore.

Writing Feedback / Which is a more powerful force of social change: Power of patience? [3]

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Assignment:

Which is a more powerful force of social change: Power of patience?

Essay:

It's totally human to fight for one's right no matter how. Some people tend to use power that lead to war, anger and foolishness others use wisdom and patience, a pursuit that make people go willingly rather then giving up with force.

One compelling illustration that patience is a more powerful force of social change is demonstrated in the Civil Rights movement. In 1955, Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat for a white man on the bus when the driver asked her to do so. Although she was arrested and jailed, her bravery inspired the Montgomery Bus Boycott that lasted for over a year. During the boycott, black people refused to use the public bus as a non-violent protest against the discrimination in America. Martin Luther King was also influenced by her action and became one of the most inspirational figures during the movement. He arranged hundreds of non-violence protests and even gave an unforgettable speech entitled "I have a Dream". And because of all these long lasting peaceful protests, their patience finally paid off and the Civil Rights Act of 1964 was finally passed, which officially ended the discrimination against ethics, race, religion, etc. in America.

In India, also, patience has the final say in independence conflict. In fact, Mahatma Gandhi the leader of Indian struggle against Briton's occupation is mostly known by his tolerant pursuit to detain freedom marked by patience and wisdom. By pushing his nation into social movement to express in tolerant and peaceful way, he saw the grains of union among people. He believes that by resisting with wisdom and patience and no matter how violin fly oppressed he can reach high scale thinking and since with is strong then power and violence, so that patience will defeat barbarity. Enhancing these values, as patience is, so, more effective tool to change society rather than bloody, filthy and powerful ways.

An example that proves that power is not a force of reform is the battle of the kingdom of Israel. Around 500 years B.C, Philistines were in a huge political and military conflict with Israeli which led to on-the ground battle. These two armies were separated by a deep valley and as no army dare to go down, the status stabilize the tension and create a situation of no-war and no-peace. Although, Goliath, a huge fighter armed with heavy shield, go down the valley and call Israeli to send their strongest fighter to challenge him so that the winner will win the war and takeover the land. But, since he was big and strong, no Israeli dare to fight him, expect David, the little Shepherd boy, who go to the battle field armed with a stick, 4 stones picked patiently from the brook and a sling. When David decided to fight neither Israeli nor Goliath expected that he will resist. Goliath undermines him and say:" Am I a dog that you came to me with a stick". In fact, Goliath thinks that his power will lead him to an easy massive victory but David remained patient and morally strong as Goliath cannot see. The little shepherd boy , experienced in protecting his cattle from wolves and wild beasts, takes brook's stone and throw it with the sling. Despite being small, the stone has a huge momentum with a velocity of 100 miles/hour .When hitting Goliath's head , Goliath fall immediately. David was glad , he couldn't believe himself that a little patient kid can beat huge and powerful fighter. In word, patience is the most powerful arm to social change when facing a Leviathan.

Another example that emphasize on the shortage of power is the movie "Avatar". In the movie, humans went to another planet called Pandora and tried to take over the home of the natives by destroying everything there. Although the natives did not have advanced technologies and weapons like the humans do, they were outrageous after they lost their families and home to the humans. As a result, they unite together and fought against the humans using the geography and the animals to their advantage. At the end of the movie, the humans were defeated and were forced to go back to Earth. This example clearly shows that power cannot bring social changes to society because people, as debilitate as they might seem to be, will eventually rise up and fight back and the whole dictatorship will collapses.

In a conclusion, historic and literary examples show how effective patience is to solve the problems and to bring social change contradictory to power that lead only to warfare and violence, a pursuit that run against human nature as a wise creature.

Graduate / Do artistic endeavours enhance our understanding of reality or provide escape from reality? [4]

Assignment:

Do artistic endeavours such as music painting, literature and drama enhance our understanding of reality or provide escape from reality?

Essay:

Artistic endeavours such as literature, painting and comedy provide a realistic view toward the world, its dreams, its concerns, its ambitions and its aspiration.

Throughout history, literature's works are infinite creation that derive their value from reality. American classic literature is marked by An-In depth analysis of reality during 1920's great depression. The grapes of wrath tell the story of an immigrant family from Oklahoma which is the victim of dust bowel obliged to leave to California "The promised Island". Out the family's trials and its repeated collisions against the hard realities of an American divided into haves and have-nots evolves a drama that is intensely tragic and stirs human dignity. The novel yet is a portrait of the conflict between the powerful and the powerless, of women's stoical strength and of man's fierce reaction to injustice. This account of Great Depression's Era gives American a wise understanding of reality to raise sensibility and to sustain impact on people's morality. The Plague by Albert Camus is a gripping tale of human unrelieved horror, of survival and resilience, and of the ways in which humankind from the doctors, to vacationers to fugitives, confronts death. The Plague is a parable of ageless moral resonance, profoundly relevant to our times. In Oran, a coastal town in Algeria, the plague begins as a series of portents, unheeded by the people. It gradually becomes a omnipresent reality, obliterating all traces of the past and driving its victims to almost unearthly extremes of suffering, madness, and compassion.In a word, literature "shapes the geography of conscience "as Don Delillo Quoted.

Painting also describes reality with simplistic yet deep way. Drawing, Water works, Graphic works illustrate human's tragedy. Van Gogh early painting as "The potato eaters", "A pair of shoes", "The sewer" were inspired only by expressive stabs at effectively depicting working-class in realistic way. Van Gogh numerous painting portrays his obsession to deliver real-life voice bitterly with muted and dark colours which stress on the melancholic aspect of life. Delacroix's painting "Liberty Leading the People" depicts human's aspiring to emancipation. Another realistic aspect of human's eternal struggle to achieve freedom: Revolution. By commemorating July 1830 Revolution, Marianne's figure, portrayed as a women personifying Liberty, is viewed now as the symbol of France, free France. As a conclusion, Trough these painting, Van Gogh brought real life as a soil for for performing by illustrating miserable life. When it comes to Delacroix, He gives to people a clear understanding of the present through past's upraising.

Comedy also takes part of human's. Moliere's unique style to criticize 17th Century Masculine society, through "The School Of Wives", brought people to think and capture the reality from an objective perspective, especially through Arnolphe personality who fear from the intellect woman as many a man in Europe in that Era that's why he try his best to encapsulate her out of real world. The play is bold enough to require thought process. Implicitly, the play aims to correct man's prospect of woman, power and society. So we can conclude that Comedy enhance our understanding of life's notions.

To capitalize, Art is a source of awakening as its roots come from life. It's human's best intuition to face reality ,analyze it and then understand it .

Undergraduate / "My journey from dark to light" - an accomplishment or event [6]

Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.

My journey from dark to light.

Years before writing this essay I was completely out of the way laying miles away from my innate goal, lost in human maze as a typical Third-World Teenager .In this period of time between 13 years old to 16, I lost my vision and I felt like I am in the middle of a long maze. A bitter sense inside my heart says that I will never see Dawn.

My hunger to science especially physics was early, long before, since childhood. All my life was (and still) physics weeks, days and hours are filled with physics and nothing but physics. I was breathing physics and living with physics. In fact, When I was 14 I designed a mechanical system that distribute perfectly the irrigation water in our land, then, I propose it to the peasants unfortunately they refuse it far from reality regarding the money and scientific experience. Maybe it seems that this period of life is paving my way to success but it's not... Projects are dreams. These dreams are far from materialization in a half- illiterate society where people can barely write not to mention understanding physics notions. I end up finally by giving up thinking that it's my fate. I finish dramatically by neglecting English, focusing on physics, turning into a goalless person.

Suddenly a huge bomb exploded in my life razing my old beliefs, disillusions and fear. I came across a famous books informing about US Universities, their ability to hold a community for all over the world, their pioneer researches programs and their high level of studying. I found that as a panacea for wounds, so, I decided to apply for Universities where dreams came true. It seems like winter has passed away from my life and my heart started to bloom. But, after little moments of joy, Drama starts again. I realized that I am weak in English and so it's impossible to achieve the dream of admission in prestigious US Universities. For me, it was an optional language and I didn't pay it too much attention.