fauziyahtami
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Article Summary: Shadow on the South China Sea [4]
Helo erwin,
Hope you doing well, let me give you several suggest
Please kindly check it out.
==>The second is about the spacesinbetween /(of) the tiny islands and that predominantly concerns ...
==> This was no country consistently occupied or administered them(No countries stood on their area) . The bureau did not havethe means(permission) to assess the islands itself ...
In this case, maybe you can extend the summary by sharpening and deepening the main idea
Good Luck and keep fighting
Best regards, Tami :)
Helo erwin,
Hope you doing well, let me give you several suggest
Please kindly check it out.
==>The second is about the spaces
==> This was no country consistently occupied or administered them(No countries stood on their area) . The bureau did not have
In this case, maybe you can extend the summary by sharpening and deepening the main idea
Good Luck and keep fighting
Best regards, Tami :)