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The proportion of part-time employees in four countries

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Global warming - an environmental problem or event

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folic acid addition to flour

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It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for youth.

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Writing FeedbackPhAhn - May 18, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Reading and language skills - WRITING TASK 2 - ACADEMIC

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University of Toronto Engineering Essay: Extracurricular Activities

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Undergraduateakmaster101 - May 17, 2024Holt - May 21, 2024
Pollution problems cause damage to the environment today. Do you think the problem can be solved?

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Development in urbanization - TASK 2 - ACADEMIC

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Letter of Recommendation for undergraduate college / commitment and consistency

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Lettershxddsu - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language

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[Writing Task 1] Reasons why people moved to capital city of a particular country

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Students should learn all subjects at school, not the ones they like. Do you agree or disagree?

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Writing FeedbackThao Bui - May 16, 2024akmaster101 - May 17, 2024
Many people now like living in the countryside because they think there are many good things there.

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Writing FeedbackRosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Research Paper on Rape Culture

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Research Papersbanana18 - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Write an essay about advantages and disadvantages of the Internet on teenagers in modern life.

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( WRITING TASK 1 DOUBLE CHARTS) THE NUMBER OF FOREIGN TOURISTS VISITING XCOUNTRY IN 2019 AND 2020:..

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i am accustomed to the atmosphere here, it is a bit chilly and cool but the landscape is great

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Grammar, Usagesunyy - May 14, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
There are more challenges and risks than benefits to new technology.

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Writing FeedbackNghian - May 14, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010

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Writing FeedbackEcec243 - May 13, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why?

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Writing Feedbacknpaa11k27 - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries

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Writing FeedbackNhatquangg - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later

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Persuasive Research Essay Petitioning Against Street Circuits on the F1 Race Calendar - Review

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Research PapersJDMoyer - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Some countries have more youngsters than older ones.

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Help writing a motivation letter for scholarships

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LettersMalaknasser_07 - May 10, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Research paper regarding AI-generated art

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Writing Feedbackroonilwazlib13 - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Asian countries in terms of the proportion of population living in cities - [Ielts cambridge 18]

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Writing Feedbackloitoiphoi - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Cinema attendance : by age group in Great Britain

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Writing Feedbackan68 - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
How can an organization effectively address a major employee relations issue?

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Writing Feedbacktessabob - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Women who were employed in four countries - A REPORT DESCRIBING THE INFORMATION

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