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People would always choose a life without work rather than working most of the time. Agree/ disagree

2 - The prompt restatement is confusing. You seem to have suddenly changed the information presentation in the first sentence. Almost...

Writing FeedbackJohn Pham - Nov 24, 2024Holt - Nov 25, 2024
Free theme narrative story (Grim of the schools)

2 - The dialogue is wooden in nature. It is not natural sounding nor does it come across as everyday discussion...

Writing FeedbackEdukid2309 - Nov 24, 2024Holt - Nov 25, 2024
Talent vs hard wordk - IELTS 2

3 - Speaking as someone who took IELTS just a year ago, I think you could improve the writing by expanding...

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Success - What is important to you? Why? - Personal Profile

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. Is there anything else that would be worth changing?...

Undergraduatesarcasticswarley - Nov 24, 2024sarcasticswarley - Nov 28, 2024
Legal Abortion with Limits: Balancing Choice and Responsibility

2 - The essay needs to have a more interesting backgrounder. The issue of abortion must be presented from both sides...

Research Papersmichelesull - Nov 24, 2024Holt - Nov 25, 2024
Research Paper Families with Disabilities Support

2 - Since there are several forms of disability that exist among children, the essay should do one of two...

Research PapersAVS05 - Nov 24, 2024Holt - Nov 24, 2024
Smiles After Tears - common app essay

4 - I really like the style and one of voice of this essay however, I found myslef needing to reread...

UndergraduateBlahblah222222 - Nov 23, 2024sarcasticswarley - Nov 24, 2024
"Strumming: My Journey in Music" - Common App Personal Essay

3 - Hi Holt thank you so much for responding. My prompt chosen was "Share an essay on any topic of...

Undergraduatejeremynolol06 - Nov 22, 2024jeremynolol06 - Nov 22, 2024
Effects of High Prescription drug Prices in the U.S.

2 - Too much space in the paper was dedicated to the history of the high cost of prescription drugs. While...

Research Papersnadia123 - Nov 21, 2024Holt - Nov 21, 2024
Mindset for IELTS 1 (Describing maps, p.34)

2 - The summary overview is a little bit inaccurate. The map shows that the 2 versions represent the layout from...

Writing Feedbackchuduythuc - Nov 21, 2024Holt - Nov 21, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT REVIEW: Keio University's PEARL program 2025 Fall Admission

3 - @Holt Hi I've checked the PEARL's admission handbook and theres 2 essays: 1 introduction essay with 250 word limit...

Undergraduateanniechu06 - Nov 20, 2024anniechu06 - Nov 21, 2024
IELTS 1 - Bar Chart (Weekly Income Change Over Time)

3 - You can try to expand the comparison range, which involves comparing not just the spending in both years in...

Writing FeedbackTaldi - Nov 19, 2024Edukid2309 - Nov 20, 2024
Improve my Motivation Letter for Masters in Environmental Engineering

2 - The reviewer reads over a thousand applications that have students claiming to have experienced one thing or another....

LettersAbeershaykh - Nov 19, 2024Holt - Nov 20, 2024
Civil Engineering - Motivation Letter for ETH Zurich Master's Application

2 - The weakness of this essay lies in how you do not really portray your strengths as a researcher and...

Lettersarjit - Nov 18, 2024Holt - Nov 19, 2024
Review my PhD motivation letter for aligned LLM companions

2 - Since you were part of a research and development team, you cannot claim to be the single developer...

Lettersvishalk - Nov 18, 2024Holt - Nov 19, 2024
Free theme narrative story (THE RED JUICE)

2 - A narrative story is usually written from a personal perspective and uses the first person pronoun for the most...

Writing FeedbackEdukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
Personal Statement Review : Masters in Accounting and Finance

2 - These references to childhood influences should be used only for college Accounting major applications. You must go...

Graduatehelloitisme - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems?

2 - This is your personal opinion as the writer of the opinion paper. Therefore, it cannot be mixed into...

Writing FeedbackNaomie - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
Physical Education should remain in schools

2 - Since you are dabbling in the history of Physical Education, you should go to the start of the...

Writing Feedbackmartinezalex1649 - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
SOP review for masters in data science at CMU

2 - This is actually a negative statement in the eyes of the reviewer. This is not something you would...

Graduateyeshwanthg - Nov 15, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
Statement of Purpose - UCSD - Cognitive Science PhD Application

2 - This does not matter. What matters to them will be the mirroring of your research with the professors....

Graduatetts2024 - Nov 15, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
My journey through athletics - UBC - Tell us about who you are

2 - The students who respond to this prompt always make this common mistake. They always write from their personal perspective...

UndergraduateBenjiT12 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
Statement of Purpose - MS in Computer Science at EPFL

2 - The introduction does not set the stage for your interest in Ms Computer Science. You need to revise the...

Graduateshades123 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE – M.S. SAFETY ENGINEERING, XXX UNIVERSITY

2 - It will catch the reveiwer's attention better if you open with a narrative about a similar catastrophe that...

Graduateclarence94 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - MASTER IN LOGISTICS AND SUPPLY CHAIN MANAGEMENT

4 - The response sounds like you are still focused on academic development over a period of 5 years when you...

GraduateHeidi_han - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 19, 2024
ENG 102 - Fast Fashion Should Be Regulated

2 - Since this is supposed to be a research paper, it is important that you separate yourself as the...

Writing Feedbackacalado - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
AI in language learning and literature writing - Personal Statement for CLMC Erasmus Program

2 - This should go to the very top of the discussion. This is your personal motivation for studying the...

ScholarshipAshiaBibi - Nov 13, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
VEX robot - University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

3 - I believe that you should structure your response with a heavier emphasis on what you actually learned from the...

Undergraduatergdg - Nov 12, 2024highschlstudent - Nov 30, 2024
SOP for Automatic Control Engineering at Polimi

2 - You keep mentioning goals that the university aligns with on a personal basis, yet you never mention what these...

Graduateryayra - Nov 12, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
PhD Microbiology SOP University of Wisconsin

2 - Do not go so far back into your history. This is a statement of purpose. Focus on your...

GraduateEola - Nov 12, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
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