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Comparative Analysis Essay of Heroes

NEW - Hello, and thanks for your time. This is my rough draft for an essay in AP Literature and...

Writing FeedbackReprieve - Sep 16, 2008 -
St. Thomas - meaningful contribution you have made

NEW - Prompt: Describe a meaningful contribution you have made through school, church, or community service St. Louis Dream Center...

UndergraduateAndrea09 - Sep 16, 2008 -
'My boyfriend is moving' - UF: experience & affect your college experience

NEW - Little did I know that a "For Sale" sign would test my strength and perseverance. Fettered by youth, doubt,...

Undergraduatedlb1670 - Sep 16, 2008 -
Common Application Essay: Balance

NEW - Here is what I have, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! I can feel the eyes...

Undergraduatemas61691 - Sep 16, 2008 -
Preconception attitude towards writing

3 - A few thoughts that you could include to make your essay more rounded. Do you think that instructors do...

Writing Feedbackkincade - Sep 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 16, 2008
Analyze the Effectiveness of Helen Prejeans argument on the Death Penalty

NEW - I would definitely appreciate some feedback here. =] Now, my teacher did not require proper citations or anything for...

Research Papersbrittanybianca - Sep 16, 2008 -
Letter about "My most unhappy experience" - party at Jane's house

NEW - Good evening, Gloria. Please help me check this letter out. "Dear Mary, How have you been doing? I'm...

Letterssweetbitterrose - Sep 16, 2008 -
Imaging Two Poems - Essay Paper HELP

4 - As far as an introduction, I believe in writing that last. Once you have the text you can write...

Poetryamharp5 - Sep 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 17, 2008
Driving force in life - FSU undergrad essay

NEW - FSU prompt: Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life...

Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 15, 2008 -
My first summer in high school, camp counselor position - essay

NEW - The auctioneer bellowed out: "Going Once!" I looked at my Dad, he looked at me. The tension was rising!...

Undergraduateraf - Sep 15, 2008 -
More education than required at job site equals dissatisfaction? - essay

NEW - People who receive more education than they need to function their jobs will feel dissatisfaction. Do you agree or...

Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Sep 15, 2008 -
Drunk - sad story

NEW - Hi, can you give me some suggestions on this one? This is not my usual style of writing (I...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 15, 2008 -
'New York City's China Town' - Vires, Aates, Mores essay...

3 - it should be intellectually in the 2nd sentance instead of physically, and the last sentance in the first paragraph....

Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 14, 2008swooshnic21 - Sep 15, 2008
'multifaceted culture' - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission; a vibrant community

7 - By "showing" you use adjectives, metaphors, and similies frequently but not too frequently in your writing. By being concise,...

Undergraduatekotak07 - Sep 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Qualities and characteristics for an individual at UCF

NEW - first draft. need to cut it by 150 words. be as critical as possible What are essential qualities...

Undergraduatesofl - Sep 14, 2008 -
FAMU: how my name has influenced me

NEW - this is about describing how family culture/ history has influenced you I need to know is this acceptable.. i...

UndergraduateBlaqnsassy - Sep 14, 2008 -
Common App Essay: Either obstacle to overcome or Other

4 - thanks! Do you know if the common app has a word limit cause this is like 855...

Undergraduatewwr - Sep 14, 2008wwr - Sep 14, 2008
'a gymnastics routine' - FSU Admission Essay

3 - Thank you so much, I will make the corrections right now. Thanks again for your time!...

Undergraduatekdarin - Sep 14, 2008kdarin - Sep 14, 2008
Comparative Essay - Woman at Point Zero vs. Death and the Maiden

2 - Good afternoon. I would suggest beginning by finding the instances within each work that you think show the...

EssaysThe_Man - Sep 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
Descriptive Essay -my next move in terms of education

4 - Begin by brainstorming what you would say if somebody -- perhaps a younger member of your family -- said...

Undergraduatekielu84 - Sep 14, 2008EF_Simone - Sep 26, 2009
I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player

2 - Your essay is disorganized. Try taking one subject at a time, discuss it, and then move on to the...

Writing Feedbackgo cardinals - Sep 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
Writing persuasive essay -Salem witch trials

2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin by doing some research on some of the victims of the Salem...

Essaysstarsong - Sep 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
'his island of Puerto Rico' - FSU Essae

3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...

Undergraduateyenesco - Sep 13, 2008yenesco - Sep 14, 2008
Looking to entry to a competitive Public Health School

NEW - I would like share with you this essay. Please made your comments: Public Health School - Essay ...

Graduateomsued - Sep 13, 2008 -
'no intentions of stopping now' -: Vires, Artes, Mores

2 - I think your essay has good potential. I, too, am applying to FSU this semester, and right now, I'm...

Undergraduatecese09 - Sep 13, 2008rhasia - Oct 19, 2008
Boston College Essay - discussing concerns

NEW - 2 Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you Over the...

Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 13, 2008 -
'Varied cultures' - State of Maine, UNI of Florida Essay

2 - You've got a good essay here; just a few corrections. I like the basis for your essay; I think...

Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 13, 2008
Informative Speech About A Film (chapter 27)

7 - Not only did they not yawn, I got an A. :)...

Speechessilverystars - Sep 12, 2008silverystars - Jan 26, 2009
"Youth Leadership Program and more" - UF admission Essay.

NEW - I need some help with this Essay. Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and...

Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 11, 2008 -
'full custody off me' - FFSU ESSAY FIRST ATTEMPT

NEW - Please give me your input be blunt i dont mind.. For almost one hundred years, the Latin words,...

Undergraduatefloridakid - Sep 11, 2008 -
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