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Cross Country; most exhilarating experience; Extracurricular Activity

2 - Good afternoon :) "For me, Cross CountryThese are not proper nouns and shouldn't be capitalized. has been one...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
The Super Student, a person who had an influence on me - admission essay

4 - Michael Driscoll is my name. I thought I would put a little twist on the essay by writing it...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008eagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008
'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life

2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...

Writing FeedbackTMcGee - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Research paper on drug testing for athletes

6 - involve individual interests too....

Research Papershartsey17 - Nov 21, 2008mavictoria - Jan 12, 2009
Graduate Essay-Why do we need a Semiotic Methodology of Theatre? UNFINISHED

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Graduatecarlajayne - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
UC prompt 1---multiculture in school and my contribution

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Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Columbia / prudent adventurer ~~~I need suggestion~

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Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"striving to major in a certain area" - UC prompt 1 - i need help

2 - Good afternoon :) First, a mechanical suggestion: avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "wouldn't" should be...

Undergraduatekewlliljethro - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"MC in Valentines Day event" - UC transfer applicants prompt #1

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then provided some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduategalz - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
The Indian society, help with prompt #1....

4 - That sounds like it will be an effective addition; make sure that you include enough detail to tell the...

Undergraduatedatanator - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
My Team, This is who I am. Prompt two.

2 - I have edited the first section and then given you some general comments in regards to the rest of...

UndergraduateAndrewessay - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
I had my first experience in sales and merchandising ; FIT App

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Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
'recognized by many coaches' - the world you come from. UC prompt #1

NEW - hello, I was wondering if you could help me with fixing up my introduction paragraph, as well as editing...

Undergraduatejedijessy91 - Nov 20, 2008 -
' friends with African American students' - Rutgers Essay--Diversity

6 - Here's my advice: 1) Sell yourself. Sell yourself. 2) Talk about what you will bring to the program. 3)...

UndergraduateRutgersGirl91 - Nov 20, 2008fjfjfjf - Oct 15, 2010
"Ping pong is serious business" - common app essays

9 - You're very welcome. I think your tone comes across just fine; I wouldn't worry too much about misunderstandings. Best...

UndergraduateNikhil - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
essay about experience

6 - I think it's great in regards to content and readability; your organization and structure look good as well. The...

Undergraduatem5456 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
My involvement in theater - Acting was officially my new hobby. UC transfer essay

11 - The 1000 word limit only applies to the 1st and 2nd prompt. The 3rd prompt is an open...

UndergraduateWildtalon - Nov 20, 2008aljashamy - Nov 30, 2008
SENIOR RESEARCH PROJECT about Michael Jackson --HELP

12 - What is the report on? I am currently considering doing something on Michael Jackson for an upcoming essay....

Research Papersathomas1891 - Nov 20, 2008Gooner - May 1, 2010
Grandparents had spent great portion of their hard earned saving to buy house and car for their son

3 - Thank you so much for your advice. I will definitely work harder for more improvement....

Undergraduatelayaili - Nov 20, 2008layaili - Nov 22, 2008
"6th grade incident" - UC transfer. Prompt #2

2 - I don't think it's a bad example to use; on the contrary, it obviously made an impact, causing you...

Undergraduatemusiklover - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
The book Ishmael - An Idea on a thesis and introduction

8 - You're welcome :) "In the book Ishmael, written by Daniel Quinn, Ishmael consistently shows how our civilized society...

Book Reportsboonster - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
'self respecting male' - common app essay for princeton

4 - WOW THATS A REALLY GREAT ESSAY, UR DEF GONNA GET INTO PRINCETON :] GOOD JOB!!!!!!!! to the...

Undergraduateaktanuku - Nov 20, 2008quack09 - Nov 20, 2008
What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange

NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....

Writing Feedbackmissy7187 - Nov 20, 2008 -
WPI Short Answers-Need revise & critic

3 - Well, I forgot that I have already paste my second essay before. Anyway, thank you very much for...

Undergraduatehelenalqy - Nov 20, 2008helenalqy - Nov 21, 2008
Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....

Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
For advice: Account of my experience

4 - Oh, that is an interesting question! In common usage, "temperament" suggests emotion, and ability to control one's temper,...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 20, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2008
Realism Essay - the readers choice

NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Nov 20, 2008 -
I need strategies in writing an analogy

2 - Good afternoon :) An analogy is the thinking process of transferring characteristics of your source item to another...

Grammar, Usagetanty - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement

2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
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