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UBC Personal Profile - Various perspectives

2 - Avoid the reference point "I" in the descriptions from your parents and friends. You need to make sure that...

Undergraduatemdamissu - Jul 28, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The future of the automotive industry

2 - I realize that this is a draft which leaves you plenty of room for improvement. I would probably start...

Writing FeedbackRcD - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?

2 - There is no need to justify the reasons why people would still look into art when you are trying...

Writing Feedbacklmaok - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Are famous celebrities 'role models' for young generations?

2 - You should avoid presenting information that removes the focus from the actual discussion. There is no need to...

Writing Feedbackwslgods - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Competition or cooperation in our society - IELTS 2

2 - The essay fails to use pronouns to reference the point of view being discussed in the body of paragraphs....

Writing FeedbackHoangminh06 - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day

2 - The summary overview is missing important reference information that has made it very difficult for me to understand the...

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Software engineer - Motivation Letter for CERN Technical Studentship

2 - Your desire to be an inspiration to the students from your village is admirable. However, that should not be...

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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Tables, Exports by Michael

2 - I found myself confused by the summary overview presentation. What taxes? What nations? What years were covered? There is...

Writing FeedbackMichaelc - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Motivation letter for PhD at University after M.Sc. in Biotechnology

2 - You need to reference the current work of the professor as well. Create a relationship between his research, and...

Letterslibrarymyth - Jul 25, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
the merits and demerits of taking a gap year and your own opinion

2 - Well, there is an inaccuracy in your presentation because this topic is not really a contentious issue. It is...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Essay about doing an enjoyable activity with a child and reading books

2 - The topic restatement is faulty. You forgot to reference that the activities are to be done with a child....

Writing Feedbackeddypham - Jul 24, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Essay about the proposed new town plan

2 - I am not sure if there was only one picture provided for this analytical paper. Normally, a task 1...

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IELTS Writing Task 2: A majority of nations are striving forward to economic growth

2 - Your second reasoning paragraph has strayed from the social values discussion. Those are not really values or cultural norms...

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The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime.

2 - There is no need to indicate how the news is accessed. It is not a necessary part of...

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The Impact of the Cost of Food on Obesity in the US

2 - The research paper seems to be a mix n match of information, without any proper direction. You may wish...

Research PapersWilliam2025 - Jul 23, 2024Holt - Jul 26, 2024
It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks.

2 - Kindly remember that you have to clearly format the essay using the expected paragraph presentation. You need 4 paragraphs,...

Writing FeedbackRamona07 - Jul 22, 2024Holt - Jul 26, 2024
IELTS Writing task 1 - Production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

2 - First of all, let me clarify the word count number for this task. You cannot write more than 200...

Writing Feedbacknhungcoi - Jul 25, 2024Holt - Jul 25, 2024
The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops. (Dis)agree?

2 - This essay meets the word requirement, but not the formatting of the page. There should be spaces between paragraphs...

Writing Feedbackthutran - Jul 22, 2024Holt - Jul 25, 2024
Problems with overfishing and the Environment that is impacted

2 - You have too much going on in your head that tries to translate itself onto the paper. The first...

Writing Feedbackjak001 - Jul 22, 2024Holt - Jul 25, 2024
Ielts writing task 2: To what extent has the internet made life more convenient?

2 - This is your personal opinion as the writer of this essay. It is not referred to in the...

Writing FeedbackMintlev - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 25, 2024
Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

2 - This is an automatic failing essay since it only has 247 words in it. The main word requirement is...

Writing FeedbackQuangTa - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
Writing Task 1: Daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004

2 - Please remember the basic rule when it comes to writing a sentence. A sentence is composed of 1 idea...

Writing FeedbackYashainu - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
ENG102 Research Paper - Dog Breeds and why it's Important That you Choose the Right Breed!

2 - You need to follow the correct MLA formatting in specific instances for the research paper. The fault of your...

Research Paperskhowdyy2088750 - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

2 - The summary overview needs one more sentence, that would help the paragraph achieve a 40 word presentation, to qualify...

Writing Feedbackleehyy - Jul 21, 2024Holt - Jul 24, 2024
The Impact of Divorce on Children and How it Affects their Childhood Development

2 - The presentation is mostly based on theories and academic studies. What we actually need more of in this presentation...

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Many think that in today's world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

4 - Your essay does not meet the requirement of 250 words in Ielts Writing task 2 and try to improve...

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DSM-5 (Depressive Disorder) English 102 research essay

2 - The first paragraph is always the introduction to the topic. That is the place where you can give a...

Research Papersamarieonn - Jul 20, 2024Holt - Jul 20, 2024
Personal statement. Major: fashion design for embassy track undergraduates gks 2024/25

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ScholarshipMaryan3 - Jul 9, 2024Maryan3 - Jul 20, 2024
Study Plan/ SoP for Canadian study permit

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Letterscccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024cccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024
How convincing is my narrative for my motivation statement for CERN's administrative student program

2 - This is supposed to be a motivational letter, It is not a paragraphical form of your work related experiences....

Letterswannabdiplomat - Jul 19, 2024Holt - Jul 19, 2024
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