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Balancing Urban Growth: Should Parks Make Way for Housing? - WRITING IELTS TASK 2

2 - The writer shows an understanding of the topic that was provided through his accurate restatement of the problem and...

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A driven and dedicated person - UBC Personal Profile

2 - Try to present a well rounded personality in the essay. You can do that by separating the descriptions that...

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The Severity of Climate Change and is it Opinion or Fact

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my motivation for the European Master in Public Health Europubhealth +

2 - You are making over assumptions in this case. It would be better not to make such references...

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Tufts Engineering - community essay

2 - It is important that you focus on the value of teamwork in this case. I assume that the team...

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Engineering and robotics club - KAIST undergrad

3 - Thank you! But shouldn't I show motivation for my dream? Or is it unnecessary here?...

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Copenhagen Business School MSC Digital Business / Business Administration Motivational Essay

2 - Hi, the focus of each essay is different so you cannot combine the information for each essay into 1....

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The role of househusbands in the modern world - IELTS 2

2 - This is an incorrect statement that has no basis in the original topic presentation. This created a prompt...

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Adele - about a famous person you like. Who is this person? What is this person's job?

3 - @irrverst this sentence is a bit messy: "I admire her not only because she composed my favorite song, but...

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Traditions of their society - WRITING IELTS TASK 2

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Empowering others and helping - UGRAD sop

3 - I like the way you have written your essay. Bear in mind, I am not an expert. What I...

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What are the jobs prospects for BA(Economics and social studies) (Hons)?

8 - So many career aspects. Depends on your interest. Although my major is not economics, but economics is one of...

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My Karate dojo - my response to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation (UBC)

2 - What is the relevance of this parenthesis covered phrase? The reader may not be familiar with...

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Volunteer experience in the highlands - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR COLLEGE

2 - I am not sure which of the common app topics you are writing this essay for so I cannot...

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Green finance and economy - ERASMUS PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - It appears that you have written a second version of the same essay topic. This one is supposed to...

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Final Essay: Anti-LGBTQ Laws being instated (Research paper)

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Techwomen - how you have demonstrated leadership, specifically in your chosen track.

3 - I was wrong, it is not about leadership . this is correct one : Reflect on the long-term objectives...

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Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - The rest of this paragraph is too vague to gain the interest of the reviewers. You are not...

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Bachelor of Science in Nursing - Scholarship: educational and career goals/objective

2 - Scholarship organizations tend to prefer high achieving students for their scholar programs. At this point in your essay,...

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NUS - MEDICINE UNDERGRADUATE APPLICATION

2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD Your response to the first question is not convincing. Perhaps it is because of...

Undergraduatebminh - Dec 19, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
A Story of Rebellious Child - GLOCAL Erasmus Mundus Personal Statement

2 - Rather than telling this one dimensional story that does not really help to inform the reviewer regarding the...

Graduatejakartainrain - Dec 18, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
rural people are moving to cities,positive or negative development-WRITING TASK 2

2 - Kindly remember that you have a total of 1 hour to write both the task 1 and task 2...

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stipendium hungaricum undergraduate essay for applying to BsC in biology

3 - I would recommend to specifically mention why you want to study biology in hungary. Rsearch about the market trends...

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Language Study Plan (Study plans to improve Korean/English language ability for gks)

3 - I feel that this essay can be improved in terms of coherence and clarity. Also, I would recommend to...

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Physics and Basketball -KAIST entrance - what you learned from extracurricular/curricular activities

2 - You have to edit this essay in relation to the 200 maximum word count. Unfortunately, I cannot edit the...

Undergraduatehunggamo - Dec 17, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Money was allocated to cell phones - writing task 1 (line chart)

2 - The report is over written at over 200 words. Bear in mind that you are going to be sharing...

Writing Feedbackmon1805 - Dec 17, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Psychology Motivation Letter for Behavior Change Master Program

2 - Since you already know that sustainability is not the main focus of the program, it stands to reason...

Lettersfemelements - Dec 16, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
any criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. cause and solutions

2 - I am afraid that the vocabulary usage in this essay is quite problematic. The essay does not require the...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Hoai Ngoc - Dec 15, 2024Holt - Dec 16, 2024
Dream and efforts you have made to achieve it and your future plan / KAIST

2 - You can delete the introductory paragraph and revise the 2nd paragraph to serve that purpose instead. The 2nd paragraph...

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Fostering Connections Through Communication and Leadership (GLOBAL UGRAD program)

2 - The focus of this essay is more team building related than community building. The reviewers are looking for active...

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