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"demolishing the kitchen" - Common Application short response

10 - Okay I understand now. sorry about that....

Undergraduatechristiek - Aug 30, 2009christiek - Aug 30, 2009
A concise narrative about an important event - UF Architecture college essay!

17 - You could leave out the over-used rainbow/rain statement altogether....

Writing Feedbackmshireling1 - Jul 16, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 30, 2009
Not Becoming My Enemy? (Princeton Supplemental Essay Topic, 500 Words Max)

5 - as like, little summaries of possible essays for the quote, which of these, if any at all, work? ...

UndergraduateLoliT - Aug 30, 2009LoliT - Aug 30, 2009
Complex personality - undergrad personal statement/college essay

9 - Thanks all. I will be taking all you guys advice and i'll post the outcome in the near future....

UndergraduateSeven - Aug 29, 2009Seven - Aug 30, 2009
"The burgeoning field of Computer Science" - my Statement of Purpose

6 - The highlighted portion seems fine to me. As I understand it, parallel computing is particularly hot right now and...

GraduateM Ehsan ul Haq - Aug 17, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 30, 2009
"Divorced parents, child custody battle" - UCF ESSAY prompt 2

3 - Why did you title this thread: "UCF ESSAY prompt 2 HELP. PLEASE HELP ME PROOFREAD... 250 words max."...

Undergraduatemikefinfan - Aug 30, 2009EF_Team - Aug 30, 2009
Common App Short Response (flute teacher)

16 - Yeah I'm tlking about flutes though lol....

Undergraduateamy87014 - Aug 30, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 30, 2009
My family environment, my life, my UCF essay...

5 - Nice essays, but you could have more specific things like lessons you learned. I enjoyed them though....

Undergraduatejbrilus - Aug 29, 2009mikefinfan - Aug 30, 2009
"chances of me getting into Yale are slim" - Yale Supplemental Essay - Unique

6 - Well, since its the supplement, I think you can afford to go a little quirky...but I agree that the...

UndergraduateGabrielle - Aug 24, 2009Beautifulnights - Aug 30, 2009
"giving social services to people" - Common Application Essay

7 - thanks for the ideas. i wont be discouraged from the start :) well i live in long beach...

Undergraduatechristiek - Aug 30, 2009christiek - Aug 30, 2009
"the role of a surgeon" - A Rather Rough Essay

15 - True. I really need to work on this grammar thing... Thanks guys and gals....

UndergraduateLlamapoop123 - Aug 28, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 30, 2009
~Why I chose to attend UCF~ A Knight in Shining Armor

10 - Lol... I'm not frustrated by what you said. I appreciate your feedback. I'm getting frustrated because I don't know...

UndergraduateMieMie09 - Aug 29, 2009MieMie09 - Aug 30, 2009
UCF Admissions Essay: I Am a Bird

11 - I thought that might be the case. You'll just have to make do with the description of it, then....

UndergraduateMieMie09 - Aug 29, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
"the fast food industry" - english assignment

4 - What exactly do you need help with? As Simone pointed out, you have a clear next step laid out...

Letterssiofio - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
Topic to write on (RIC undergrad admission)

5 - You must have some sort of intellectual activity you enjoy, or specific subject matter you enjoy -- perhaps you...

Undergraduatelouiedasilva - Aug 28, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
The cruel and the heartless/ Significant risk or Ethical dilemma

8 - thanks for the criticism. I realize this wasn't as great of an essay as i thought it was, but...

Undergraduateomgitsshirleyy - Aug 28, 2009omgitsshirleyy - Aug 29, 2009
"Perseverance is failing 19 times and succeeding the 20th." Rhodes Scholarship Essay

7 - Hello Simone, Once again i am extremely thankful and truly appreciate your efforts in this regard.Thank you ever...

Scholarshipmuhammadhayat86 - Aug 24, 2009muhammadhayat86 - Aug 29, 2009
"My life full of wonderful events" - UF Admissions Essay

9 - To cut down on the word count, ask yourself what you want the essay to say about you, then...

Undergraduateionutalbu25 - Jul 28, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 29, 2009
Life's test and lesson - UF ESSAY ANALYZE!

7 - I feel you lack the explanation to how that experience will REALLY be a significant event that will contribute...

Undergraduatebmw - Aug 23, 2009ionutalbu25 - Aug 29, 2009
Shakespeare's Sonnets, Analysis

6 - The use of the first person is generally frowned upon in formal literary criticism for the reason it is...

Book ReportsNotoman - Aug 26, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 29, 2009
Major in economics - NYU supplement essay

6 - The point would be to pick somebody very famous -- past or present, real or fictional -- from...

Undergraduatesteve53 - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 29, 2009
"the count of monte cristo" - i need help on a thesis paper

4 - For what level of schooling are you writing this paper? Your thesis is fine but simplistic. In the U.S....

Book ReportsBeachBound4ever - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 29, 2009
'My management team and my prospects' - Baker College Admission Essay for Doctorate

3 - Skip the first line. Go through what you have now, editing ruthlessly to take out anything you don't need....

Graduatetinamiller1 - Aug 28, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
Personal statement fot Residency (Medicine)

6 - I have seen they like specifics as well as introducing yourself. Like you are going to an interview and...

Graduatesabinanb - Aug 25, 2009tinamiller1 - Aug 28, 2009
Spanish Language proficiency

15 - Once you have left helpful comments for two other forum members, then you can start your own thread...

Writing Feedbacksad_an6el - Aug 17, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
The relationship between an organization and environment - essay

9 - The first sentence is awkward, due to the lack of an article in front of "business environment" and the...

Writing FeedbackTarunPathak - Jun 21, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
Andover High School; My summer - Umichigan Application

10 - Thank You!!...

Undergraduatebrendali92 - Aug 22, 2009brendali92 - Aug 28, 2009
"About being American" - UC Essay Prompt #1.

9 - yeah i think the ending ideas are a good start (you basically got the idea down).. but the problem...

Undergraduatehakyo - Aug 13, 2009ninnin - Aug 28, 2009
'money and riches' - What Is the Purpose of Higher Education?

5 - If you seperate your paragaphs by an empty line then it's clearer & easier for everybody to read. In...

Writing Feedbacktho91 - Aug 25, 2009tuanlnc - Aug 28, 2009
Very short response to Brown supplement

8 - I am openly gay and I see where your going with this and I back you up. It's just...

Undergraduatehewittdy - Aug 22, 2009louiedasilva - Aug 28, 2009
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