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Food Stands Vs Eating at Home = Convenience Vs Quality

8 - there are more and more people now choosechoosing food stands or restaurants instead of home when having a meal....

Writing Feedbackfearistheenemy - Jul 22, 2009ruonan59 - Aug 1, 2009
The intellectual benefits of attending a university - advice my second GRE issue

17 - Thank you, Noto. I can understand the difference between great discoveries and the greatest discoveries. Your revision of the...

Writing Feedbackmathsam - Jul 27, 2009mathsam - Aug 1, 2009
Ielts essay: living and studying overseas

6 - Thanks both. I will avoid using those pronouns....

Writing Feedbackorlando - Jul 29, 2009orlando - Aug 1, 2009
My best friend in elementary school; Friendship forever

4 - I think the essay can be longer....

Writing FeedbackLibra - Jul 23, 2009designingsally - Aug 1, 2009
Mini-Research Paper (Autism)

5 - Interesting last sentence. So, you are saying that research might break the connection between autistic and non-autistic people, so...

EssaysDiiyah - Jul 22, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 1, 2009
Essay on A Prayer for Owen Meany

18 - This is just so wonderful. Yes, by all means, talk about this in your essay, if you have...

Writing FeedbackTottenham125 - Jul 31, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 1, 2009
I will forever be nostalgic for the summer of 09 - PENN STATE essay

4 - sometimes its hard to understand the critiques of others as a writer, but i agree with what liebe has...

Undergraduatedjl5252 - Jul 20, 2009tal105 - Jul 31, 2009
World I come from essay prompt, how's the idea?

4 - you should also divide the essay in to respective paragraphs....

Undergraduatesunshine101 - Jul 30, 2009mbjaya999 - Jul 31, 2009
SOP- MS Human Computer Interaction

2 - You have a very strong background with a great deal of relevant experience. In order to make sure that...

Graduatedesigningsally - Jul 30, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 30, 2009
Social Work Theory, Skills and Methods Assignment

6 - Post the essay you submitted originally, and the comments you got back on it. That way we can give...

Writing Feedbackelzbietabielec - Jun 21, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 30, 2009
"Living in America converted me into new person" - essay for common app :)

20 - Yeah, you rely too heavily on weak verbs: "The school was nothing like my expectancy. It was comprised...

Undergraduatedlrhksgud4 - Jul 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 30, 2009
The story of two eagles-- common app

8 - OH, THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUGEESTION. I will consider your suggestions and make the revision according to some of...

Undergraduatetiantian12 - Jul 30, 2009tiantian12 - Jul 30, 2009
Correct and rate my essay essay. Its on laws being rigid or flexible

5 - Laws shape the country [omit comma] and the economy ....

Writing Feedbackdesigningsally - Jul 30, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 30, 2009
Hills Like White Elephants by Ernest Hemingway

4 - If the question involves the story "Hills Like White Elephants" and symbolism, start by making sure you know all...

Book Reportsyonman - Jul 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 30, 2009
Characteristics of a good friend (which friend would you choose)

6 - You can talk about unreliable, fair-weather friends before delving into reliable friends, to make the impact more meaniningful and...

Essaysfearistheenemy - Jul 23, 2009Ond - Jul 30, 2009
Need help on my admissions essay - Art Institute, San Francisco

14 - It is very endearing! I smiled the whole time I was reading it....

Undergraduateashtonrounds - Jul 21, 2009Notoman - Jul 29, 2009
research paper on drug legalization

5 - Depends on drug Marijuana legalization is easy to find info on Heroin and other "Serious" narcotics you may not...

Research Papershelpmeplease - Jul 24, 2009thegerman - Jul 29, 2009
I chose to write about my orchestra experience playing the violin - CommonApp activities essay

11 - Thanks, Notoman! I'll use the semicolon. :]...

Undergraduate2010nbailey - Jul 21, 20092010nbailey - Jul 29, 2009
'long-established tradition of academic excellence' - Yale's Secondary: School of Medicine

9 - I am fervently interested in pursuing my degree of Doctor of Medicine at Yale University because of its long-established...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jul 27, 2009Liebe - Jul 29, 2009
UF application essay. 461 words. Critiques? Comments? Good/Bad?

NEW - Prompt:In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment...

UndergraduateDeadpool013 - Jul 29, 2009 -
How my gay father, family and community have shaped who i am today - uc prompt

6 - I have to say that I was really impressed by your story. However, I think you put in it...

Writing Feedbackx country 001 - Jul 22, 2009Janie Tine - Jul 29, 2009
True Friendship Essay (living without friends)

12 - I think your revised essay is quite good. However, I am really confused with this. You said,"As we grow...

Writing FeedbackAlexbig - Jun 29, 2009Janie Tine - Jul 29, 2009
[TOEFL] Global events

7 - "Nuclear" is an adjective. "Money crisis" ought to be "monetary crisis." Sometimes people do use a noun as...

Writing Feedbackjohn6503 - Jul 28, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 29, 2009
"BALLS UP," his voice echoes through my ear canals ; Essay on tennis

6 - I actually wrote it as a college app essay on my dedication to tennis....

Undergraduatevip747 - Jul 27, 2009vip747 - Jul 29, 2009
Krannert and the Purdue - SOP for Phd in Finance

7 - Well, I want to add some transition words to make paragraphs more coherent....

Graduatecinderellaaa - Jul 28, 2009cinderellaaa - Jul 29, 2009
[TOEFL] Being creative rather than planning.

16 - Right: Susceptible. Look it up....

Writing Feedbackjohn6503 - Jul 27, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 29, 2009
"Pursuit of knowledge" - My SOP for Software Engineering

8 - Start by saying what aspect of software engineering you want to research, and then narrow it down from there....

GraduateMahabub - Jul 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009
GRE essay: Sadness and happiness

8 - This sort of essay perhaps calls out for a discussion of the principle underlying the prompt. The prompt is...

Writing Feedbacksoarer - Jul 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009
Illegal Aliens and Their Quest to Stay in the United States

3 - You also need to set up some background in your intro. So, for instance, why not just grant everyone...

Writing Feedbackswatson - Jul 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 29, 2009
motivation letter (engineer in mechanical engineering)

4 - Upon reading this letter I began to wonder if English not your native language. Yup, your University is in...

Lettersmohamed22 - Jul 28, 2009kenziii - Jul 28, 2009
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