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"1990's and what happened" - intro and conclusion help

2 - Greetings! I think the conclusion is pretty good now, although the last sentence could be a bit stronger....

Essaysher_heart - Feb 23, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2007
Personal information, interests, etc. - Resume and cover letter

6 - Thank you a lot, Ms Sarah Best regards for you Ha...

Letterslth_econ - Feb 21, 2007lth_econ - Feb 23, 2007
'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits

3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 21, 2007Timcago - Feb 23, 2007
Money is one of the greatest tools in life

5 - Yes I do, but I coudn't think I'm not good at writing essay I've been here for 1 year...

Writing Feedbackaljur - Feb 22, 2007aljur - Feb 22, 2007
American events in a specific year -introduction, thesis & conclusion

3 - i dont think my introduction makes sense or has anything to do w/ my topic or my cobclusion.. i...

Research Papersher_heart - Feb 21, 2007her_heart - Feb 22, 2007
Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice

4 - thank you both :)...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 21, 2007kendra - Feb 22, 2007
My motivation to do graduate work

2 - Greetings! I'm sorry, it is not possible to answer posts privately. I'd be happy to give you my...

Graduatempur - Feb 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
My "suicide note"! (suicide poetry)

2 - Greetings! Yes, definitely, I could tell it was suicide poetry (I hope for an assignment! :-)). Probably the...

Poetryaznpoo - Feb 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2007
Spending a million dollar - an introduction for my essay?

7 - Greetings! Here is the edit: Most of us want to be wise when it comes to money, while...

Essaysaljur - Feb 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
Time in Terelj - descriptive essay

4 - Greetings! I think your opening paragraph lacks cohesiveness. It's rather "all over the place." The first sentence sounds...

Undergraduateokuna - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade

4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...

Writing FeedbackMagstar0202 - Feb 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction

10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...

Writing Feedbackaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...

Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
parenthetical citing help

4 - Greetings! How parenthetical citations are formatted depends on whether you are using APA, MLA, or some other form...

Grammar, Usageeltron - Feb 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other

3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...

Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
Essay about the disappointments you faced in life

3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Feb 7, 2007aznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
I know personally how enriching studying abroad can be.

4 - Thank you so much Sarah. Having a pro review my essay and give me feedback is absolutely priceless. ...

Undergraduatepash_fashion - Feb 17, 2007pash_fashion - Feb 18, 2007
Summer in a Mongolian place

3 - What you need is a motivator to capture the reader attention, sure it is great you went to all...

UndergraduateSergelen - Feb 11, 2007aznpoo - Feb 17, 2007
What specific goals do you hope to achieve? - Scholarship Essay

NEW - The question is, What specific goals do you hope to achieve at Western Oregon University to help you succeed...

Scholarshipedtrussell - Feb 16, 2007 -
A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
The Last Minute: How to Write Good Essays When Time is Short?

NEW - Almost everyone who has attended high school or university has found themselves staring down a deadline that approached them...

EssaysEF_Team - Feb 15, 2007 -
What is needed in an analytical essay?

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! Here are some elements normally contained in the analytical essay: 1. Summarize...

Essaysjesusalreadywon - Feb 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
8-paragraph compare & contrast essay

5 - Thanks so much for all the help. KingTiger...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Feb 10, 2007KingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
[working in series, painting] - SAIC statement of purpose

2 - Greetings! I think you've written an excellent essay here! I think you do a fabulous job of describing...

Undergraduatevegetablenazi - Feb 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay

NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...

Writing Feedbackjhogan - Feb 10, 2007 -
College Journal - English Class / Society Living

NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...

Writing Feedbackryan - Feb 10, 2007 -
The big difference - book report

2 - Greetings! First of all, take a de-e-e-e-p breath!! You're going to be just fine! :-)) The difference...

Book ReportsMarieBee - Feb 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2007
China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"

NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 4, 2007 -
Comparison of past thirty years of special education

5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
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