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organisation competition and environment

2 - Greetings! This is a topic which has stirred quite a lot of debate in the UK. Your paper...

Research Papersousman - Sep 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 10, 2007
I want to be able to get as much help as possible in my English class.

NEW - Writing Problem #1 Since I was a child, I have always loved the sound of music. When I...

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Help with Question about Economic History (Australian)

4 - Greetings! I would suggest researching what types of economic development there have been, and looking for any impact...

EssaysphilipZ1985 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 9, 2007
Preparing for TOEFL IBT test - need advice on how to write better

2 - Greetings! It's always a challenge to write a good essay, but particularly so when you have to write...

Essaysphuongle - Sep 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
The organizational behavior in the Army - help with thesis statement

2 - Greetings! I think you've crafted a very good thesis statement! I have just a few small editing suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackmonifah - Sep 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 8, 2007
World of writings; NYU - creative work that has influenced me

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Undergraduatelunasea - Aug 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
Teenage violence in schools

2 - Greetings! You give some good reasons for teen violence. Be careful, though, about making statements which are inaccurate...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
"Computer or book"? Computer

2 - Greetings! I agree, I think this one is better than the other. You make some good points! One...

Writing Feedbackangeltetra - Sep 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 5, 2007
A Soft Complaint (A Formal Argumentative/Persuasive Essay, Incomplete)

2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I think you've done a very good job of striking the balance; I...

Book Reportssilverystars - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 4, 2007
how can I analyze articles better?

2 - Greetings! It's a real challenge to understand the underlying meaning of something written in a foreign language. I've...

Research Paperscolla26 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
Reading response to "Talking Up Close"

3 - Greetings! I do, indeed, have "a few editing suggestions" for your interesting essay! :-)) Reading Response to...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Sep 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
'FFA and FLA Leadership Adventures' - U of Florida admissions

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some editing suggestions for your excellent essay! :-) I discovered...

Undergraduatelinz24708 - Sep 2, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 3, 2007
In Response To "Why Don't We Complain?"

4 - Greetings! Yes, you definitely cleared up the confusion! Making the distinction clear not only makes it read better,...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 1, 2007
Essay on how well reasoned was an argument - scale of 0-5

2 - Greetings! While some of the points you made are true, for example, that it would be helpful to...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 31, 2007
Employers should observe employees - Analysis essay

2 - Greetings! I think you make some excellent points in your essay! Your reasons why interviews are a good...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
My essay on analysis of Commercialism. Scale of 0-5.

2 - Greetings! My first response on reading this was that you had not really addressed the question asked; upon...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
Essay review on an article called "Pleasantville"

4 - Greetings! Overall, yes, I think you made some good points. It's a little difficult for me to know...

Essayssarahmk - Aug 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 30, 2007
UofI Champaign-Urbana admissions essay

2 - Greetings! I think you have written a couple of great essays! The only suggestion I would make content-wise...

UndergraduateAlexJ444 - Aug 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 29, 2007
Essay on September 11, 2001

4 - Greetings! It really depends on what the assignment instructions were, as to whether it is appropriate to include...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 29, 2007
Poverty in Brazil, article analyzing

6 - You're welcome! By the way, I found one I had missed. You might want to add this correction:...

Essayssarahmk - Aug 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 28, 2007
help with research paper on legalizing Marijuana

4 - Thanks, Andrey, those are good points! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Research Paperscasey2264 - Aug 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 28, 2007
Stress - cause and effect paper

3 - I would also recommend you to use "How to stop worrying and start living" book by Dale Carnegie. A...

Writing Feedbackcasey2264 - Jul 24, 2007Andreyknure - Aug 28, 2007
my writing rituals when I begin working on writing assignments

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback on your excellent essay! When I come home,...

Writing Feedbackcolla26 - Aug 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 27, 2007
Answer format of "How X will describe you" ?

5 - Greetings! I'm not aware of any general tips for reducing word count that work under all circumstances; I...

Graduateneomethane - Aug 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 27, 2007
Smoking by-laws

NEW - 12 marks for a summary that includes two conditions that led to the change in policy-where appropriate, agreements are...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 26, 2007 -
When it comes to writing, my attitude is instinctual negative/Attitude toward writing

3 - Thanks a lot Sarah. I really appreciate your feedback, but also your time and effort. I am glad I...

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In Response To "Too Much Pressure"

3 - Greetings! I think you have written a very well-reasoned argument! You make an interesting point with regard to...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Aug 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007
200 students from Waymarsh State College - rate my essay

NEW - Kindly rate my essay(0-5) and provide feedback The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper....

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 24, 2007 -
Corporate newsletter answer - GMAT AWA essays rated?

4 - You're very welcome! Learning is what it's all about, and I know your efforts will pay off! Sarah,...

Writing Feedbackmukmuk - Aug 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 24, 2007
Sun-Sentinels journalism programs; UF campus- Significant Event

3 - Greetings! Yes, I think you've definitely improved it! I do have a few editing suggestions: Your first...

Undergraduatekylester61 - Aug 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Aug 22, 2007
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