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A presence in oneself -- an essay

19 - So have I! Take care! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jun 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 14, 2007
Buy Buy Buy! (essay on american compulsive shopping)

3 - thanks so much for your review Sarah....

Writing Feedbacksecondhandgod - Jun 6, 2007secondhandgod - Jun 14, 2007
Memo style answer about Alberto Gonzales for graduate school

2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job. I am not exactly sure what a "memo style answer"...

GraduatePROL1F1C - Jun 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 12, 2007
Research Paper on Poverty in Africa

3 - Greetings, Thanks for your promptly reply. I will follow your suggestions. This will really help me since i...

Research PapersjungleFire007 - Jun 10, 2007jungleFire007 - Jun 11, 2007
the Art Institute of Seattle, Scholarship essay statement?

4 - Greetings! I like what you've added, explaining your skills. One thing I might suggest: I have already...

Scholarshiparacid - Jun 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
Difference between Affect and Effect? Grammar

3 - Thank you again! It was hard for me to understand the definition of these words in the dictionary, but...

Grammar, Usagekriegle - Jun 4, 2007kriegle - Jun 9, 2007
need help for early Black-White interracial

3 - thank you so much, Sarah. That is really helpful....

Research Papersyouin - Jun 7, 2007youin - Jun 8, 2007
Fitzgerald shows in his novel that materialism causes the corruption of society

2 - Greetings! I'm not sure what changes you may have made to the quote from page 141, but it...

Book Reportscat08 - Jun 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 8, 2007
College freshman after 15 year break - first essay for this class

2 - Greetings! I have added a few more comments and included the ones I made previously: If I...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Feedback wanted for the first essay I've written in 16 years!! GULP

2 - Greetings! We always try to be gentle here! And, the truth is, you've written a really delightful essay!...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Brave New World- Huxley's message?

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is very good! I'll just make a few editing suggestions and comments. ...

Writing Feedbackpoohbear0805 - Jun 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
How we may cause natural events to happen - an essay

12 - Greetings! I agree that it is intriguing and that studying it could only prove interesting and useful. Where...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 31, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
Response to "brave new world" by Danial

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. I have just a few edting suggestions: As seen in the...

Writing FeedbackDanialls - Jun 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 5, 2007
The human cause of global warming? Research essay.

NEW - Here's the nearly finished draft. I was wondering if you could take a look at it and give me...

Writing Feedbackkriegle - Jun 5, 2007 -
Eastern thought - an introduction in three parts

24 - Thanks! She lived a good life; seven years, as is average for a ferret. I still miss her, after...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Childhood memory by anthony qcity

2 - Greetings! What a great story! Your writing is very colorful and engaging. I particularly like the metaphor about...

Writing Feedbackqcityslugger - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Running Backs: Training and Knowledge to become Successful.

4 - Greetings! I agree, you've written a good essay! I have just a few suggestions: These players did...

Writing Feedbackathiththan - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Summary of a childhood experience

2 - Greetings! The details really make the story! It's a great essay; I have just a few editing tips:...

Writing FeedbackDIPSET - Jun 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 3, 2007
Should Southerners be consider their own ethnic group? Essay

2 - Greetings! If I understand you correctly, you're wanting help writing a thesis statement? If so, you might approach...

EssaysBlue840 - Jun 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Grapes of Wrath essay correction

7 - Greetings! Sorry, I couldn't get to you before the essay was due, but I think you did an...

Book Reportscat08 - May 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Vocabulary Composition on Soccer

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I love your analysis of soccer and its relationship to politics. Your vocabulary...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Expository Essay: Important holidays for me

3 - Greetings! Congratulations on working towards your G.E.D.! I think you've done a fine job with your essay--particularly impressive...

Writing FeedbackVerde - May 31, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Replacing a Kitchen Faucet - Process Essay

4 - We'll be happy to provide it! Never underestimate how well "years of experience" can make up for "years since...

Writing Feedbackscash - May 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
Persuasive Essay on the book ''Out of My Skin''

6 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along very well! The beginning is particularly good; I do feel...

Book ReportsAsma - May 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
'Trying to adapt to this foreign country' - significant learning experience

NEW - My essay question is "Describe a significant learning experience in your life." What was it about the experience, more...

Undergraduatekikay - May 31, 2007 -
Response to Brave New World

4 - Greetings! I think your style and structure are just fine. The only suggestion I might make is that,...

Writing FeedbackANNUR - May 13, 2007EF_Team2 - May 31, 2007
Expository Essay: War, good or bad?

3 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along quite well. I have just a few suggestions for you....

Writing FeedbackmSaKooL - May 25, 2007EF_Team2 - May 28, 2007
My Biographical Essay; I was born in Peru

2 - Greetings! I think you have done an excellent job for a non-native speaker of English! I went through...

Undergraduateeljuleso - May 25, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
Help with paper on the Salem Witch Trials.

2 - Greetings! The Salem Witch trials is a fascinating topic which has been written about at length, with many...

Research Papersquarterdime - May 24, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
Virgina Tech Massacre Research Paper for my Psychology class

7 - Greetings! Your thesis will state the topic of your paper. Essentially, everything in your paper will support that...

Research Paperssammie1981 - Apr 18, 2007EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
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