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You must select your subordinate to train a new employee. How?

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Writing FeedbackPassawee - Mar 22, 2007Passawee - Mar 22, 2007
Essay on children to grow up in the countryside versus big city

2 - Greetings! I think your English is coming along nicely! Your essay has some well-thought-out points. Here are some...

Writing FeedbackPassawee - Mar 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 21, 2007
Research Paper on Perfumery and Chemistry

3 - Thank you so much, Sarah! I think I was trying to add some sort of literary quality to...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Mar 19, 2007rollagasper - Mar 20, 2007
Essay about Journal Writing

NEW - How to Write Journals? Often the purpose of assigning journal writing is to see how the student feels...

EssaysEF_Team - Mar 19, 2007 -
Essay topic -Colonization,Conquest, Commerce,Civilization,Christianity

4 - Greetings! If you look back through European history, you see one wave of conquerors coming in, say, to...

UndergraduateNINZ - Mar 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 19, 2007
Classification essay - types of pets (500-700 words)

4 - Thanks for all of the help. I did some more revisions, before I turned it in. I received all...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Feb 27, 2007amosborne13 - Mar 18, 2007
'Human beings and the sense of dictatorship' - freshman in highschool essay

2 - Greetings! Well, it is certainly a unique piece of writing! I would classify it as "experimental" writing. Since...

Writing Feedbackpythonpeyton - Mar 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 18, 2007
A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. .

2 - Greetings! You make some persuasive points in your essay! I have some suggestions for editing your essay: ...

Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 18, 2007
Rain - Richard Rive. Essay on a short story we did in my English Studies class

3 - Thank you very much, you are very helpful!! My point that I'm trying to make about the obscurity...

Writing Feedbacklandi - Mar 17, 2007landi - Mar 17, 2007
Resume International Grad Student

3 - Thanks so much for your reply. I find your suggestions very appropriate. I really appreciate your help through this...

Lettersrangel4 - Mar 16, 2007rangel4 - Mar 16, 2007
Do Song Lyrics Affect the Brain?

3 - Greetings! You are looking at having to do a rush job on both research and writing. Fortunately, we...

EssaysNick_04 - Mar 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Essay about a young woman

2 - Greetings! What an excellent and compelling essay! I love the dramatic opening! I think you did an outstanding...

Writing Feedbackjhon_lam - Mar 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
history or mathematics?

3 - Greetings! You make some good points in your essay! It just needs a bit of tweaking. I've made...

Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
ANALGY; Composition class

2 - Greetings! I think perhaps you got off to a bad start with your essay's opening and it somewhat...

Writing Feedbackgoombaking209 - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Community college student essay - asking for a little feedback

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here, with lots of important information! Your opening sentence is good; it...

Writing FeedbackTinyjn - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
"Human Trafficking Today's Modern Day Slavery"

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Writing Feedbackrh07391 - Mar 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 13, 2007
Orwell's prejudice against the colonized is inexcusableI; Multi-Source Essay

2 - Greetings! I think you do an excellent job of relating the three essays to the theme of prejudice!...

Writing Feedbackrusshen - Mar 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
Two different methods of losing weight

2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here! I just have a few suggestiosns: My father suggested me...

Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
'Hamlet delays his revenge' - Another Hamlet essay

8 - Greetings! These are very good questions! Passive voice doesn't have to do with first person vs. third person....

Book Reportsaznpoo - Mar 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
All Quiet on the Western Front - Comradeship

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to make a few editing suggestions to your excellent essay! The distinction of...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Making a Good Public Speaking Essay

2 - Greetings! Yes, I do remember your fine speech! :-) I am not exactly sure what your teacher means...

Speechestgs_miki - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Undergrad Application - Waterloo, Canada

2 - Greetings! You've written a fine essay! I have just a few small suggestions for you. Your essay...

UndergraduateRitika - Mar 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver

2 - Greetings! You do a good job of capturing the proper tone for this sort of report. If your...

Writing FeedbackShergill - Mar 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"

2 - Greetings! I think you have done a very thoughtful analysis of the poem. Good job! I have just...

Writing Feedbackmkatts19 - Mar 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Unless guided by knowledge and insight, power will destroy us - how to start?

4 - Both of these books show a lot of human nature. How we would do anything to gain power...

Essaysjag2411 - Jan 29, 2007aznpoo - Mar 9, 2007
paper on cause and effect (shall I use the metaphor?)

3 - Hey, yeah that helps a lot. I did not think of putting it into two sentences but that...

Essayspandolfi91 - Mar 8, 2007pandolfi91 - Mar 9, 2007
Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding

2 - Greetings! The thing that stands out the most to me is that you use the thesis statement, "Emperor...

Writing Feedbackwolface - Mar 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
"The English Language" - wonderfully rich and eclectic

9 - Finally, English language has turned the word into a global village through the spread of trade and commerce. Many...

EssaysAsma - Mar 3, 2007Asma - Mar 7, 2007
Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...

Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?

4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
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