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Mar 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task2 Types of music albums purchased by people in Britain [5]
Hi IZKK,
This task requires you to report a summery of the trends and comparisons of data. So your writing tone needs to be sort of reporting. For example;
Three bar charts illustrate the types of music albums bought by males and females in the UK. Your next line (2 lines) should be the most obvious observation. Then move on to describing trends with more details with figures. Also include a line or two for comparing data. Finally write one line on your conclusion.
You can get some idea by reading good writing samples.
Hi IZKK,
There are three bar graphscharts that illustrate aratetypes of various kinds o f music albums, which were sold in Britain.
This task requires you to report a summery of the trends and comparisons of data. So your writing tone needs to be sort of reporting. For example;
Three bar charts illustrate the types of music albums bought by males and females in the UK. Your next line (2 lines) should be the most obvious observation. Then move on to describing trends with more details with figures. Also include a line or two for comparing data. Finally write one line on your conclusion.
You can get some idea by reading good writing samples.