Writing Feedback / TED Summary: Three Tips How to Boost Your Confidence by TED-Ed [2]

"Be more confident!", an advice comes from Kozmonot Animation studio which presents a TED-Ed animation of the three tips to boost your confidence. Therefore, it convinces us to hear the persuasion to be always confident when we face with a tremendous challenge in life where potential failure seems to lurk at every corner.

There are three factors which affect our confidence, it starts from our gen, we need a balance neuron chemicals in our brain for having a good confidence, the next influence aspect is about your social interaction of the people in your surroundings and the last is the self-controlled, decision maker and risk-taken refer to your confidence.

This animation video offers you three recommendation for having a strong self-reliance. Firstly, you have to try quick fix in your immediate confidence, the second one is always take a believe that you are valuable , work wild and capable, and strengthen your self- esteem. Head on it, turn back and take action, and the third is practice your failure and fix it. To sum up, whatever you face in life, you must be confidence that you have a greater knowledge and understanding

Writing Feedback / Elephants are in danger because of their ivory tusks, which are a blessing and curse for them [2]

Article Summary: A Legal Trade in Ivory Would Wipe Out Elephants, study finds

A researcher at the University of Aberdeen, Lee and David Lusseau stated that used population modeling to determine just how many elephants could be killed for their ivory (because that's the only way to get ivory) before their deaths start causing the population to decrease. Therefore, a study on September 15, supports this opinion that legalizing the ivory market would be able to vanish the elephants population. It discovers which the demanding of ivory is much greater than the amount of ivory that can be harvested sustainability.

Pro and cons are arisen regarding with this issue, some countries or groups who state pro and cons in regarding this issue. Firstly, one of the authors ' by Phylis Lee and a researcher at the University of Stirling in the United Kingdom says elephants are in crisis so there is no method to harvest sufficient ivory, even though, in a controlled way that will not drive elephant populations to extinctions. He gives an example that the poachers in Asia killed 27,000 elephants each year, besides, he emphasizes that they become more organized and professional.

Secondly, there are three nations (Namibia, Zimbabwe, and South Africa) support this legal ivory trade which suggest future trade will be more organized. They offers a process of decision-making mechanism which consist of sourcing ivory from existing government stockpiles of seized illegal ivory,the elephant death naturally, and intentional elephant hunts.

Finally, Lee says this points else to the need to focus in reducing demand on ivory more than anything.

Writing Feedback / Claims that the passion and perseverance contributes to a success more than a talent and IQ [2]

TED Summary: Grit: The Power of Passion and Perseverance by Angela Duckworth

Angela Duckworth is a Math educator of seventh grade students in New York public school. She tried a hard work in teaching. She did a tremendous tasks in and giving assignment or homework and scoring them directly. In fact she has found that grit which is a combination of passion and perseverance.

Therefore Duckworth predicts success more reliably than talent or IQ. In other words, IQ can measure well and life ability to learn more active. Grit is growing by the time which everyone must be winningly personal, insightful, and even life- changing. Grit is a book about what goes through your head when you are fall down and how that someone who doesn't talented or luck, makes all the differences.

Moreover she emphasizes that we need do much more effort and being in strongest values society. Her theory doesn't address these outside forces, nor does include luck. It is all about psychological achievement. She closes her performance by saying failure is not permanent condition and we need to struggle harder to be succeed.

Writing Feedback / A new device created by LouAnne Boyd at the University of California at Irvine, helps learn language [2]

Article Summary: From Autism To Chinese, A Headset To Help You With Your Language

Chinese can be an intimidating language to learn which the tones will probably enconter the most difficulties to specialize in. The rising and falling of your voice can change the meaning of a word very easily. You could end up calling your mother a horse if you are not careful. However, a new devise is created by LouAnne Boyd at the University of California at Irvine, part of the team to support the autisms in their social communication or even in language learning.

This new gadget is called SayWAT which providing live feedback via Google Glass when the autistic pronounce loudly or flat sound . This device utilize with Glass' s microphone to record speech, then displays real-time guidance on volume and tone. It shows a volume icon if the user's voice is too loud and flashes the word "flat if the users does not give different sound.

Than this sayWHAT is tested to talk with ten training employees autistic and the rest are from non-autistic volunteers. It gives a positive change in related to their volume. This system is also useful in learning foreign language, in spite of the tonal languages as like in Chinese or French. Needless to say, it is really valuable for many people and the autistic feel worthless.

Writing Feedback / TED Summary:The Shocking Truth About Your Health by Lissa Rankin (TEDxFiDiWomen) [NEW]

The most important part of life is always being healthy. As a proverb said an apple a day keeps the doctor away. We have to do much more effort to remain healthy. The first thing is about eating balance healthy diet, we can also take some vitamins, some people do daily exercise, the other concern in taking enough sleep and seeing the doctor for regularly check up. However, we always pay more attention in our body health, but ignore our mental wellness. according to Lissa Rankin, a physician and also a founder of The Whole Health Medicine Institute said that caring your body is the least important part.

She depicts that million people ignore the whisper of their body. Some complicated deceases spread among the body, such as blood pressure or even servic cancer. They go to the doctor and get some pills. They come back normal only just a few moments and come back to doctor again and ask more medicine. Unfortunately they still have sickness. What really make a body healthy? Lissa asked herself for many times as a Physician. She spent hours in studying, reading, and keep staring on computer screen to discover this answer.

After she had a perfect storm in her life which gets divorce twice and her father passed away in the same moment, finally she found and directly told her patients that caring for the mind, heart, and soul is the biggest healer. She believes that the key to have a long life is an optimistic attitude. Self healing is from the core. if you have any physical symptoms, ask yourself the real diagnosis and be honest to yourself. Just make your own prescriptions because you know yourself even better than the expert doctor.

Writing Feedback / Dad Sings Disney Song With His Daughters, Your heart explodes with cuteness. Article summary [2]

There are some ways to get strong bond with your children. One of them is singing their favourite song together. It will be acceptable if Mom does it but it becomes incredible if Dad accomplishes it. It is happened to an amazing father, Jorge Narvaez and his lovely daughters, Alexa, 11 yeras old and Eliana, 8 years old. This awesome father who does not have a maternal instinct melted the hearts of people who watched it. As the adorable duo sings " a dream is a wish " from Cinderella.

Jorge, a single father form San Diego, didn't let his own difficult childhood affect his parenting techniques. This is obviously one marvelous and adorable family. This is a really outstanding lesson for many parents in other country across the globe. As the quote said " Children need our presence more than our present". Finally I want to persuade all of the parents to perform this fun activity with our sons or daughters and we will become the best parents for our children.

Writing Feedback / Summary TED: Parenting In Modern World [2]

We are prosperous living in this prevalent world. Most sophisticated technology are created. They make our life easier and entertaining. On the other hand, if this technology is related to parenting which is known as the most mysteriuos task in a world, it will be complicated.

This recent technology should give rewarding contribution in parenting. How do we make it happen? There are some way which are suggested. Firstly, children must feel our presence in their daily activities, such as family meal time or brushing teeth. How regular do we have this moment in a day?

Based on this essay, there are two top tasks that children want to do with a happy face, for example brush the teeth and doing laundry. In contrast with these, three worst things that children are not eager to perform.They are cleaning bedroom, doing homework , and putting their toys away.

Secondly, parents have to consider that being kids is an awesome stage in life. The way to make it happen is always being happy in front of our children. When entering the house from hard work, just giving your amused face. If the world is getting worst, take a family vacation.

in conclusion, mom and dad have to create a stable upbringing into our kids life by always having much more quality time and always be joyful in daily life.