justivy03
Nov 27, 2015
Undergraduate / 'overwhelmed with emotion' - Transfer Applicant - George Washington University [10]
Daisy, I read through your essay, the revised one and it seemed as though you modified it only for the sake of saying you modified and
did some changes.
Now, writing is not an easy skill, it takes a lot of time and dedication to the craft ad this is why the admissions panel will give you a room to improve for.
They will pretty much realize that you are trying hard to make your essay as good as possible and
as what is asked to the prompt and this is what you have come up with.
I just hope that after this essay you will be able to dedicate a few hours of your time everyday to practice
and hone your skills in writing, and oh, read a lot, this helps enhance your vocabulary and will give you a whole lot of pool
of new words that you can use in your writing.
Daisy, I read through your essay, the revised one and it seemed as though you modified it only for the sake of saying you modified and
did some changes.
Now, writing is not an easy skill, it takes a lot of time and dedication to the craft ad this is why the admissions panel will give you a room to improve for.
They will pretty much realize that you are trying hard to make your essay as good as possible and
as what is asked to the prompt and this is what you have come up with.
I just hope that after this essay you will be able to dedicate a few hours of your time everyday to practice
and hone your skills in writing, and oh, read a lot, this helps enhance your vocabulary and will give you a whole lot of pool
of new words that you can use in your writing.