justivy03
Oct 4, 2015
Undergraduate / Why U Chicago - polymath education for an aspiring critic [6]
Hi, I would like to further the help you receive from other EF contributors, I hope this helps.
- In order to sculpt myselfinto theand be a critic...
- I know I have the potential to become, what I need, above all, isone and a..
- ...UChicago education is what would need .
- An education that lets 'knowledge grow from more tomoresubstantial .'
-butand more importantly,
-I have boundlessthere is no boundaries for intellectual freedom...
- ...dimensions,- something the fundamentals to becoming a critic.
-More importantly,Furthermore UChicago
- issome where I belong.
- As a third culture kid,( I'm sorry but what do you mean by " a third culture kid" )
- It'sisalways hardgoing to take a while to elaborate to describe the best - minds of their generations of UC .
-YearsSooner or later, when people...
Well, becoming a critic is something very interesting, a challenging role that requires expertise in almost all aspects of life unless you have expertise which I believe yours fall in the English language or literature and this by the way needs to be established in your essay, because if I were to conduct an admissions process, I suppose you will have a major at least. Overall, it's well written, good enough for admission however for future reference, make sure that you use words that are conversational and not to make your readers guess what or where the essay is leading to.
The best of luck to you and do let us know how it goes!!!
Hi, I would like to further the help you receive from other EF contributors, I hope this helps.
- In order to sculpt myself
- I know I have the potential to become
- ...UChicago education is what would need .
- An education that lets 'knowledge grow from more to
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-
- ...dimensions,
-
- is
- As a third culture kid,( I'm sorry but what do you mean by " a third culture kid" )
- It'sis
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Well, becoming a critic is something very interesting, a challenging role that requires expertise in almost all aspects of life unless you have expertise which I believe yours fall in the English language or literature and this by the way needs to be established in your essay, because if I were to conduct an admissions process, I suppose you will have a major at least. Overall, it's well written, good enough for admission however for future reference, make sure that you use words that are conversational and not to make your readers guess what or where the essay is leading to.
The best of luck to you and do let us know how it goes!!!