EF_Stephen
Oct 26, 2009
Undergraduate / death is only way to happiness? U of M essay 500 words [8]
The third paragraph is the main one, but it is too repetitive. You mentioned several times about leaving home vs staying. You can simplify this by just logically mentioning it once. that will help your word count, too.
The third paragraph is the main one, but it is too repetitive. You mentioned several times about leaving home vs staying. You can simplify this by just logically mentioning it once. that will help your word count, too.