poisonivy
Dec 28, 2009
Undergraduate / "Alzheimer" QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS - JHU major essay [21]
@ekfoong
With "all the other answers I'm looking for", what I am doing is practically refer back to the fact I mentioned before:"It is ironic, however, that even now I am not able to fully answer my childhood question." and to all the other questions I list afterward.
About the part: "I once thought that I had one foot in sciences and one in humanities and that I would eventually have to make a choice between the two. Today I have realized I have already made my choice - wonderful enough to blend my two inclinations in a perfect direction: Neuroscience." I have said that because earlier in the paragraph I mentioned that I do all that because I love people - which has to do with humanities. So the mix of science (that i talked about during all the previous paragraphs - biology) and humanities (love for people), lead me to Neuroscience. I hope its clear now (otherwise I guess I have made a mess)
Thank you very much for your feedback. Hope we both get admitted! :)
@ekfoong
With "all the other answers I'm looking for", what I am doing is practically refer back to the fact I mentioned before:"It is ironic, however, that even now I am not able to fully answer my childhood question." and to all the other questions I list afterward.
About the part: "I once thought that I had one foot in sciences and one in humanities and that I would eventually have to make a choice between the two. Today I have realized I have already made my choice - wonderful enough to blend my two inclinations in a perfect direction: Neuroscience." I have said that because earlier in the paragraph I mentioned that I do all that because I love people - which has to do with humanities. So the mix of science (that i talked about during all the previous paragraphs - biology) and humanities (love for people), lead me to Neuroscience. I hope its clear now (otherwise I guess I have made a mess)
Thank you very much for your feedback. Hope we both get admitted! :)