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isai   
May 3, 2013
Scholarship / How to express financial need? - a scholarship essay. [12]

Hai !

Please read the below links...

wikihow/Write-a-Letter-Asking-for-Scholarship-Money
youthempowerment/HowTo.aspx

Please read some samples and you will get better ideas.
Regards,

Isai
isai   
Oct 15, 2012
Grammar, Usage / What is the difference between a hypothesis & aim? [5]

What is Cognitive Hypothesis and how it develops?; Ideas

What is Cognitive Hypothesis and how it develops? I am glad if anyone could help me? I read a few articles , I AM CONFUSED. ...Just a little introduction...
isai   
Oct 8, 2012
Dissertations / PhD Topic on Business Process Management and Enterprise Systems- Help [6]

Please access jstor.org...look into areas which you interested in and read the abstract, theories , model / approaches and methodology. I am very sure you will some ideas. Apart from that , look at those dissertation , refer chapter 5 future recommendations. Then you can finalise the topics. You got it what I have meant?
isai   
Oct 8, 2012
Essays / IT industry Management essay [9]

Hey ! Please look at training areas...now days ppl like on-line trainings even they are more into a Virtual Learning Environment. In fact , your professors should have topics. You may consult with them. I am pretty sure. They would help. All the best
isai   
Aug 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Reach Malaysia!' - essay check [2]

In the days of modern world 'ReachMalaysia!' has brought up a new media landscape for an easy gateway. This new modern technology helps us to access the telecommunication journey as how we access computer. ReachMalaysia Teams up with FancodeSdn.Bhd introducing these applications with spectacular features. Nowadays hand phones have become a major part of our lives. A survey showed that 60% people in USA looks for their hand phones after waking up in the morning. Not only in USA is it being widely use all over the world. So this shows how important a hand phone is in our daily life. Not just for communications we use it for our daily activities like watching TV, reading newspapers, listening to radio stations, reading magazines etc. Specially while travelling we use it for entertainment such as music, games and we even use it for work like email and getting updates of share markets. This hand phones have made the technology so fast that if u have a mail u just get it then and then through your phone by push notification service. So to make it easy ReachMalaysia brings up mobile fan pages to our applications so that social media and mobile can go together naturally. To bring added value to all our applications we are providing a direct link with Facebook fan pages as Facebook is one of the most visiting site nowadays. In the category of advertising and marketing social mobile media is one of them and so the examples are ReachMalaysia and Fancoder. Facebook is a massive market nowadays like in December 2011 there were 890 users which is almost three times the population of USA and in average a Facebook user use Facebook for 55mins daily. Normally 70% of Facebook users are located outside of US. Now Facebook is available in 70 different languages and value of Facebook is more than 75 Billion USD. Facebook have features like insights that allows you to track you fan base demographics by gender, age, location and even language education and marital status. You can also track comment that receives the most interactions. It helps you to improve you communication skills like listen, ask, plan. Implement, learn, rise and repeat. Fancoder is an agency level service provider where you can increase your Google ranking, mobile & social media, multi-channel Add campaigns, & QR code list building services.
isai   
Mar 5, 2012
Undergraduate / 'a typical engineering family' - Purdue University [4]

This is a vague essay and doesn't create any high awareness for the readers. Write your essay in the reader's position. You have to write in detail with a solid key idea, explanation, elaboration and example.

GOOD LUCK
isai   
Mar 5, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'What is Civilization?' - First essay in 15 years [4]

Dear !

This is a well-written essay. I can't check your grammar but look at your 4th Para...drill the theory into greath depth with findings. Your conclusion too long and narrow down.

Regards
Isai
isai   
Feb 20, 2012
Graduate / 'addressing violence against women' - Masters in Public Health PS [4]

Hi!

Well-written essay, however you have to narrow down. Too many words in your introduction. Try to simplify and attract the readers. I don't check your grammar but the contents were beautifully written. If you read sample essay related to your topic, would help you.

Regards
isai   
Feb 20, 2012
Essays / (preparing to attend your 10-year reunion) An Interesting Way To Approach This Essay [2]

Hi,

You may share how your life was during your Uni time briefly. After Graduated what was your first job? Did your studies contribute for the job? Did your qualification enhance your career prospect? Share your first working experience? Basically you may talk the qualification which you obtained and how does it help? Pls visit my friend Mr. Google...

Regards
isai   
Jan 6, 2012
Undergraduate / 'the international communication' - Georgetown Related [3]

Dear !

As a writer you must impress a reader and always put yourself into reader's position. If a reader comments , your courses not unique there is a reason behind. You must talk how the course which you intend to study helps in your career , community and so on. U must have a good objectives of doing this course and what are the learning outcomes after finishing. Try to concise , produce clarity and completenes in your sentences.

Regards
Isai
isai   
Jan 6, 2012
Research Papers / HUMAN RESOURCE MANAGEMENT: ethics, hiring process; Research paper [57]

Dear Friend !

To be frank HR is huge field , there were lot of research have been done on HRM. You have access ...im quite bored with the same excuses given by the students.

Look at these questions ? BEFORE YOU START ANY RESEARCH READ SOME RESEARCH AND GET SOME IDEAS...

What is the ROLE of HR in an organisation ? You may specifiy about the training and development , staff evaluation , staff appraisal...a lot dear...

Regards
isai   
Jan 6, 2012
Essays / Organisational Behaviour Essay (how to approach this essay?) [2]

Greetings and Good Day to you !

Critically Evaluate means compare those motivational theories, talk about strengths and waekeness or advantages and disadavantages of the theories relate to the topic. Find some articles related to the topic ,and I am sure you will get it. You may look at Maclow's Hierachy theories , Frederick Herzberg theories and so on.For me I would say Money Motivates employee...if you referring to Masclow Theories.Money is a reward ( Bonus for the emloyees given by Employer) You must have a good Introduction , what are advantages of the employer gives bonus to the employee and and disadvantages for not giving. Compare their performance before and after....some organisations ended up with the empty barrel. What are the consequences?

2020skills.com/asts/Money%20and%20Employee%20Motivation.pdf

READ THIS ARTICLE , YOU WILL GET SOME INFOR...

Hope it helps...
Regards

Isai
isai   
Dec 7, 2011
Scholarship / Summary of Education and Proffessional Goals- For SMART Scholarship [2]

This is very simple ...just express your intention of you doing this course, how do you contribute to community after finishing this studies...why do you choose this field? . Write a simple essay and based on their requirements. You write and post it here. There are many over here to comments. Basically , when you want to apply for any shcolarships, there are requirements ..find sample from google...im pretty sure you can do it seems your written english is good. What are you waiting for? Good Luck...
isai   
Dec 7, 2011
Letters / Principal letter ('kindly address the check to my name') [4]

Dear Madam ,

REF : CHANGING OF NAME ON THE CHEQUE.

The security fee cheque which you issued under my husband's name, Mike Parker. Due to certain reasons, I would like to request you address the cheque to my name.

I have attached a copy of NIC for your further reference.

Your immediate attentiopn and cooperation in this matter is very much appreciated.

Thanking in Advanced

Yours Sincerely ,

Linda Parker
isai   
Dec 7, 2011
Research Papers / (Essay ideas) Why Islamic banks more tolerant to financial crisis than conventional? [5]

Dear !

Visit my friend Mr. Google ! Find the sample essays and journals. Try to put some efforts on reading , thus yo will get some ideas though.

erf.org.eg/cms.php?id=publication_details&publication_id=1319

nazahamarkets.com/2011/03/22/video-have-islamic-banks-been-more-resist ant-than-conventional-banks-to-the-2007-2008-financial-crisis/

Regards
Isai
isai   
Dec 7, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS essay if children should be sent to school at an early age? [6]

These are my general comments on your essay...

- Few mistakes in grammar, Mistakes arise from more unusual/complex language use
- Some variety in sentence structure
- Some width in vocabulary can convey shades of meaning
- Relevant points.
- Some coherence in paragraphing
- Points are organized in paragraphs
- Essay is interesting

PLEASE RE- READ YOUR ESSAY AND DO THE NECESSARY AMENDMENTS BASED ON MY COMMENTS.

Regards
Isai
isai   
Oct 28, 2011
Writing Feedback / 'congratulations by FTMS to all graduates' - Press Release [NEW]

Example Press Release

Congratulations to the FTMS College Graduates who have successfully completed their studies and was awarded a scroll at the 19th November 2011. This year FTMS has produced a total of 300 graduates from different fields of Intensive English, Foundation, Diploma and Bachelor Degree. Convocation was held at JW Marriott Hotel Bukit Bintang

FTMS established in 1986 and this year is a unique year as FTMS is celebrating 25th Annual Convocation this Year.FTMS College, is certainly proud to be able to add yet another group of successful students who chose to pursue their ambitions together with Silver Jubilee.

FTMS College has collaborated with ARU (Anglia Ruskin University) and UEL
( University East London). This college is overwhelming with the foreign students from 45 countries as well as local students.

This year, the total (number of Students) graduates who excel academically have received a special award at the convocation. This award is determined based on outstanding achievements in their respective courses. Hence, FTMS graduates showed a significant increase compared to the number of graduates at the convocation in 2009. These developments show that FTMS has been able to produce graduates of high caliber and quality that have the characteristics needed in today's job market and be proud of by the society in national and international level.

The Managing Director Mr. Blair Sings said that "I believe this event has great significance to the parents who have a lot of sacrifices to ensure their children get the best education. Seeing the success of our children today, of course, we all feel overwhelmed and grateful for the achievements they have accomplished. Indeed, in the hands of our children is the future of Malaysia lies the fate of loved ones".

FTMS would like to express highest congratulations to the graduates of FTMS that will receive their degrees in a moment. After a long hard struggle for the graduating brothers and sisters now seedling harvest was made. However, this achievement is not a full stop work; it is only the beginning of a journey, to forge a success.

(A graduan's name), "All our hard work over the years shared in a ceremony that will be memorable for our family," he told reporters here today. He plans to pursue higher knowledge in an International Business Management

For (A graduan's name), she is committed to continue their studies at the university even though busy managing the business. "Busy work does not break the spirit of study and even education, I want to be an example to their children," he said.

Meanwhile, (A graduan's name), said, she was glad to get a degree and more meaningful when it was shared with her parents. He said the perseverance and tenacity they provide the impetus for the more successful in any field who will venture later.

The Graduation ceremony concluded with the wishing of congratulations by FTMS to all graduates. Families and friends were witness to this emotional and proud moment.

Reference: essaycoupons.com/research/press-release-writing/
isai   
Oct 11, 2011
Dissertations / PhD topic in Soft Computing Application in ECG [5]

Greetings !

Please find the sample research database related to your topic. I am pretty sure. You would get some ideas. It is not an easy to compile the topic for the phd. Readings are required.

Regards
isai   
Sep 21, 2011
Essays / Rephrasing Research Topics; Need advice [5]

Greetings !

Could anyone help me to rephrase the topics?

These are the topics ...

1. The effects of teachers' linguitics qualification on students' achiement in the exam.

2. Does the language profiency qualification enhance the students' to study abroad?

3. The effects of proper pronunciation of Malaysian Secondary Students.

4. Does the placement test determine the student language profiency level.


Regards

Isai
isai   
Sep 15, 2011
Research Papers / Topics needed for english comp 101 / advanced writing skills [5]

THE APPLICATION OF 4Cs ON WRITING SKILLS AMONG INTENSIVE ENGLISH ADVANCED STUDENTS

Dear All ,

This is my research Topic. Would mind helping me for this topic. Is the topic narrowed ?

THE APPLICATION OF 4Cs ON THE WRITING SKILLS AMONG INTENSIVE ENGLISH ADVANCED STUDENTS

I.Clarity ~ Word choice, unity, and coherence
II.Conciseness ~ Limit repetition, eliminate excess words, emphasize verbs, and use active verbs
III.Completeness ~ A message is complete when all information necessary for a reader to understand is included.
IV. Correctness ~ Spelling/Grammar / Punctuation

Kindly Express your view.

Regards

Isai
isai   
Sep 7, 2011
Grammar, Usage / What are the differences between Simple past and Past Tense ? [6]

What are the differences between Simple past and Past Tense ?
As far as I am concerned TENSES ..such as

PRESENT TENSE / PAST TENSE / PRESENT CONTINUOUS / PAST CONTINUOS / PRESENT PERFECT / PAST PERFECT / PRESENT PERFECT CONT/ PAST PECT CONT , FUTURE / FUTURE CONT...

Please guide me ...

Regards

FROM EF_Kevin:
THREAD TITLE RULES - Good Topic Subjects
isai   
Aug 7, 2011
Writing Feedback / FTMS Student Services Department event essay [NEW]

With the blissful lights and the orderable decoration with theme of FTMS Staff Get Together & Breaking fast took place during this Ramadan month. This event was organised by FTMS Student Services Department with the help FTMS Management .The objective of this event to strengthen our FTMS staff relationship in the month of Ramadan by physically, spiritually and, mentally.

Our staff stopped winks their eyes for a moment after entering the event's hall. The hall was decorated with the natural beautiful flowers, amazed backdrops and excellent physical arrangement. I assumed that those flowers smiled and welcomed the FTMS staff with wholeheartedly.

The session started with the prayers for Muslims for fasting break followed by the FTMS Staff presentation. That was an excellent presentation, presented by Mr. Joey and Mr. Azahari. The credit goes to them.

This gathering mesmerised with the photo session whereby the respective department members were involved in this photo session. The photos will be put in our FTMS diary as a remembrance.

The waited session was food, GOSH!!! , unexpectedly the organisers provided us with the yummy heritage meals as we were trapped into those dishes. Our staffs were busy enjoying the meals, their jaws and hands were very busy at that point until we could hear the spoon and plates were fighting each other.

Well, we can organize this gathering as our annual event and we hope to meet again in the presence , if more than this year.

The event concluded with the blessing words.
isai   
Aug 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / Concealed Carry- do you agree or disagree. [5]

Greetings !

Well , this is a good piece of work. However , your conclucion slightly vague. Try to relate to introduction and conclusion to see the topic sentence.
isai   
Aug 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / follow fashion trends or dress in personal style?----IELTS practice [5]

Greetings !

Introduction....too many words..trim down some words

dlsweb.rmit.edu.au/lsu/content/4_WritingSkills/09linkingwords.htm ( check your linking devices)

Furthermore, people with inadequate aesthetic knowledge or poor originality develop their own senses of fashion when treasuring the latest fashion information. Without following fashion trends, such people would have a hard time choosing and matching clothes, let alone forming their own dressing styles. ( lack or elobration)
isai   
Aug 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Music is a well-received art form" - IELTS - Music [3]

Greetings !

( Sentence fragment) And despite the pace of cultural integration, the importance of traditional music will remain its statue. Please refine your sentence.

overall...good work
isai   
Aug 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / a single international language or not?------IELTS Practice [4]

Greetings ! Well-written and argued essay. I would suggest you to prove (international language plays a pivotal role in global economic cooperation) I mean any supporting documents whilst (intensify the transnational cooperation) try to use suitable linking devices ... dlsweb.rmit.edu.au/lsu/content/4_WritingSkills/09linki ngwords.htm
isai   
Jul 24, 2011
Letters / Need a cover letter, application writing for the postDoctoral position (science) [3]

Greetings !

Basically , you need to indicate ....re interested in that field , write a research proposal based on the uni requirements. I am glad if you could talk about your educational background , past accomplishments, miscellaneous activities/ past involvements.

There are may samples on google.

setiopramono.wordpress.com/2009/02/22/cover-letter-sample-for-a-phd-position-application/
careerdevelopment.brown.edu/phd/resumes_cover_letters
itchybrainscentral.com

Regards
Isai

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