Writing Feedback / Toefl essay - Media invading public figures privacy. [3]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspaper, magazines and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figure and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

News that can be define as" north east west south" provides happening of all these four zones of the world. It is imperative to know about the world and latest happening of it. Previously news were telecasted by limited channels, however today many channels are available that unveils lot of information about world as well as celebrities and public figures. In my opinion, these new channels indeed spread awareness about the prominent figures in the public, nevertheless they must limit it to providing superficial information rather than publishing bit and piece of their life.

Firstly, many news channels currently televised news that are more about celebrities' personal life then critical matters of the world. These channels do so to gain publicity and viewers that give them attractive sum of billing. Although invading in anyone's personal life is not tolerable. Unfortunately public personalities cannot avoid media's invading attitude in their personal life. For example - Recently a Bollywood actor was going through a devastating phase of his life "Divorce". Anybody would require tranquil environment to come out of such trauma. But Indian channels didn't missed any chance to reach to the root of his divorce and fallowed him diligently. Also it fetch news channels an effortless news for months.

Secondly, few channels are specifically designed for delivering celebrities news. For instance Zoom (Indian channels) and U S weekly (USA's magazine), these channels attracts many follower. They are made to provide entertainment news to the crowd that include news of celebrities fashion lines, style, personal and professional life, with numbers of photographs. To quote an instance - US weekly televise new of celebrities fashion preferences, marriage and even family planning. By fallowing these news people tries to imitate public figures life style. It also aspires many to consider the profession of their favorite celebrity.

In order to make abundance profit and earning publicity these channels expose prominent people's life to public. And every part of these public figures life becomes matter of entertainment for the world. Everybody has right to leave life peacefully and privately as a human- public, media and also celebrities.

Writing Feedback / Toefl Essay - Historical building or new building [3]

SHOULD A CITY TRY TO PRESERVE ITS OLD, HISTORIC BUILDINGS OR DESTROY THEM AND REPLACE THEM WITH MODERN BUILDINGS? USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR OPINION.

Development in any field indicates sign of progress. Similarly infrastructure of city improves with the development of new buildings and premises. However many argue to retain the old buildings due to its historical importance. It is incomprehensible whether to remove historical buildings by building new ones as both have their distinct benefits and importance. In my opinion, it is better for cities to build new buildings to cop up with the rapidly evolving world.

Firstly, constructing new building would improve over all architecture and infrastructure of the city because modern designs and patterns would be used. For instance Dubai, a well-developed city of opportunities has recently completed construction of World's biggest mall; it has more than 1800 stores to facilitate citizens and visitors, that offer's versatile collection of clothing and International brands. Many restaurants and saloons are also included in the directory of mall. Moreover, it has become must visit place of Dubai for the tourists due to its exquisite features and having its name in Genius book of the world.

Secondly, new building would require low maintenance but provide ancillary facilities require by building owners such as parking, Lifts and escalators rather than staircases. It would also help many international companies to build their offices in the city that would enhance businesses and employment opportunities. Government would earn more revenue due to industrial and corporate developments. Adding to it, residence would get options of purchasing modern and fancy houses. New buildings would have enough parking spaces that will discourage people to park anywhere in the city.

Historical buildings have different aesthetic value but they are difficult to maintain. Also it would require healthy sum of money periodically. On the other hand, new buildings would have all numerous hi tech facilities at the cost of less efforts and resources to maintain it.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY - PERSISTENCE IS KEY TO SUCCESS - AGREE OR DISAGREE. [NEW]

THE PHRASE NEVER, NEVER GIVE UP MEANS TO KEEP TRYING NEVER STOP WORKING FOR YOUR GOALS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT? SATE YOUR REASONS AND EXAMPLE TO EXPLAIN IT.

"Persistence is key to success" is a phrase that express the importance of continuously chasing our dream. Human being is capable of achieving unachievable heights various inventions, today's developed world is proof of human's capability of wining desired results. Therefore, it can be deemed as fact that human that never gives up by working hard to achieve his goal is real hero. I concur that "Never, never give up" means to keep trying to gain our goals.

By working hard any living being can inadvertently satisfies its several desires and benefits. It inspires them to live life with aim rather than leaving for leaving sake. Many people overcome their fears by repeatedly trying to get acquainted with their fear. So many learn precious tactics to tackle the most difficult situations to survive. For instances, Defense troops on war continue fighting for the benefit of entire country in most severe, devastating condition with limited resources. Similarly human go through consternations to achieve his determinations. A Bollywood movie "3 idiot" is a good example of a poor servant boy that had great desired of educating himself, who emphasized on practical learning. And this zeal of achieving higher education provided him a degree and a business that he never imagined to have.

By continue hitting ourselves to not stop but toil hard develop our stamina and fighting spirit. It motivates us towards our lure. This feeling of achieving that lure keeps the flame of reaching the goal at any cost alive in us. How fascinating it is to see an infant that is so fragile that a simple touch can hurt him. Nevertheless, he learns crawling by hurting, falling and crying. Some exceptional people have set a virtue of fighters by crossing unexpected torments on the way of their goals. For instance - a men and his friend rushed towards the Alaska in 80'S in search of the gold in the inception of "Gold Rush period", he hiked mountains covered with heavy layers of snow, faced lateral storms and lost his friend during his search of gold. But all this predicaments did not demoralized him to continue collecting gold. However, he gathered abundance gold to make his further life better.

No matter what is your background - rich, poor, intelligent or average, everybody has equal chances of winning therefore one must not stop thriving. Thriving habit promise one to take him near his goal and sometime so near that it spectacularly flips all the angles of his life.

Writing Feedback / Hand work culture elimination is the 1st thing that would be cherished by human [4]

Some people like doing work BY HAND other prefer USING MACHINES. WHICH DO YOU PREFER USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR ANSWER.

In primitive days, man power was essential to perform tasks in industrial, agriculture and manufacturing field as almost all operations used to be done by hands, However advent of machineries have made work in the same industries relatively much easier. Yet today, several people believe that work done by hand is much efficient technique, so others prefer to use machines. As per my conviction, in today's mechanical world people must use machineries to save time, money and avoid errors.

Currently, machines are used in almost all the field from common men's house to NASA. Use of machineries are less time consuming, it can complete a task in few minutes or hours. On the other hand the same task would demand hundreds of people and double time. This machines are manufactured with many magnificent feature that reduce errors in processing any task. For an instance, Automatic heaters or coolers, facilitate heat in winters and cooling in summer by functioning automatically. It turns off and on by itself as it is programmed for functioning this way. Use of this machine deduce electricity consumption and charges. Machines are one time investment, which serves us multi benefits.

Use of machines requires comparatively less efforts, however requires periodic maintenance. It can be easily operated. Moreover, all the companies provide operating manual with the machines or provide demo for using machines. In primitive days, farmers had to toil hard for cultivating their crops as everything was done by themselves without any tools. But today the entire process from sowing seeds to harvesting crop can be done with the help of machines by one or two men.

Machine's use have eased the work pressure of many industries but also effected employment rates. Off late labors were required to carry out many task. With the invention of machines the labor culture is extinguishing gradually, which has promoted people to take adequate education to be employed. Use of machineries has implicitly effected industries and humans positively. Machinery manufacturing require skillful people. On the other hand, hand work does not require any pre- knowledge of performing any work. It can be learned and taught easily. For an instance Indian embroideries is done by men, women and children that can be learned without any degree or specific skill. It is still source of bread and butter for many Indians.

Work done by hand has high and aesthetic value today due to its rarity. Growth and advancement in mechanical arena has allowed world to gallops, everything done by hand can be done in way better manner by machineries. Hand work culture elimination is the first thing that would be cherished by human.

Writing Feedback / The most beneficial discovery in last 100 years - internet invention; many impacts [7]

Today's contemporary world is formed by myriad invention and discoveries in various sectors. However, internet invention is proven to be most beneficial for the world. It has change life of the people in my city too in many ways and became efficient source of knowledge. Internet is helping my city to operate rapidly and efficiently.

Internet has impacted educational industries phenomenally. It has made learning easy and facilitate many educational bodies for launching online courses. Due to this, education rate has increased as well as working people are motivated to study further. In India, Symbiosis University offer's wide range of online master courses, one of my friend is working for one of the prominent retail chain since five year, is currently pursuing Mba in retail management from the same university to gain better prospect.

In India internet was not commonly used by people due to unawareness and economic factors. However today it is used widely by my nation's populace. It has given all together different diversion to shopping channels by promoting online shopping. It made purchasing immensely convenient; from household stuff to luxuries houses. Internet is used in schools and colleges for teaching purpose. Students, companies and professionals are getting enormous information for their projects. Submitting applications and payment of bills is now mechanical and hassle free.

Easy excess to internet has also boosted industries associated with it such as mobile companies. Inexpensive availability of internet helped these companies to launch smart phones and served attractive benefits to them. People in my countries are more aware today then before few decades. Government in many state of India is training government officials for using internet to carry out their task effectively and in time. Police department will be soon using software supported by internet for lodging the crime complains.

All the discoveries has their distinct contribution in constructed this better world. However internet has effected all field and changed the prospects of life. It has made life convenient, comfortable and luxurious.

Writing Feedback / Toefl essay - stress are relieved by people by reading, gardening, exercising. [3]

PROPEL HAVE DIFFERENT WAY OF ESCAPING THE STRESS AND DIFFICULTIES OF MODERN LIFE.SOME READ, SOME EXERCISE; OTHERS WORK IN THE GRADEN WHAT DO YOU THINK IS THE BEST WAY OF REDUCeING THE STRESS? USE SPECIFIC DETAILS AND EXAMPLES IN YOUR ANWSERS.

Stress has become one of the inevitable disease and it is suffered by humans in their life due to many professional, social, and personal reasons. Due to stress people develop man other diseases and unhealthy habits. Today's competitive world has become one of the major reason of stress, nevertheless people seek their way to calm their stress by reading books, by exercising or by working in the garden. I generally take breaks to read book for relaxing myself.

Whenever I visit a library or book stores, but it gets very difficult for me to find perfect book for myself due to the availability of wide range of books. However, I generally prefer to read non - fiction books to get relief from my stress because they are more factual and realistic. These books address enormous matter that sometime serve us solutions for our problems. Biographies are usually about the distinct phrase of person's life. Currently, I am reading autobiography of Aneri Agassi, who is one of the prominent tennis players. He has explained the predicaments he had to go through to earn the title of best tennis player of the world. He has depicted a lot about his childhood life till last tennis match he played. This book gave me hope that I can also get triumph.

It is very well said that "books are men's best friend", many time in life we encounter problem that we cannot share with anybody but urge of getting rid of it or soothing it troubles us. In such scenario I read books that can guide me or make me feel better about the life I am living. I was disappointed and frustrated to think why I have to compromise my fun time and toil hard even on special occasions and eves, when others enjoy. But when I read book "who will cry when you die" I realized nothing comes to anybody easily. Hard work always pay well. Books not only help relieve my stress but boost my enthusiasm. And it also satisfies my need of gaining knowledge.

All - embracing books has proven inexpensive medicine for my stress. It keep me connected with the reality of the world and help me invest my time in good source of entertainment rather than gossip with people to reduce my strain.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL evalution -PEOPLE LEARN THINGS FROM LISTENING OTHER, SELF- EXPERIENCE, READING. [3]

PEOPLE LEARN IN DIFFERENT WAYS. SOME PEOPLE LEARN BY READING; OTHER PEOPLE LEARN BY READING ABOUT THINGS; OTHER LEARN BY LISTENING TO PEOPLE TALK ABOUT THINGS. WHICH OF THIS METHOD OF LEARNING IS BEST FOR YOU? USE SPECIFIC EXAMPLE TO SUPPORT YOUR CHOICE.

Learning is never enough to live perfect life - every person, event or aspect has some or other thing to teach us. However, still some people prefer to experience things and learn lessons; so others some are intellectual enough to learn by listening to others. And some make their life easy by reading books. In my case, reading, people's advice and self- experience all of three has contributed for making my life better.

I prefer reading fiction books as they are realistic and believable. Reading such category books provides me great enthusiasm and give me lot of hope to make myself and life better. Reading has made me better and intellect person. I am able to handle many problems in my social life by implementing solutions which I have ever read in the book. For an instance - off late it was very difficult for me to say "no" to my friends and relatives for anything. But since I have read book "seven ways of managing relation" I am able to do so very politely without harming my terms with my peers.

Since my childhood I am inclined towards seeking advice from my parents. This habit of mine saved me from many consequences that I might have faced by doing things as per my desires. Besides experience of people serves us genuine solutions because they have already walked on that land strip. I am seeking advice from my sister for choosing college for my further study in USA as she has done he graduation form United States of America, so that I can avoid choosing wrong or not accredited college.

Lesson learnt by learning things ourselves are best among all. As it is said "experience is a best teacher". By experiencing event by ourselves, we will prevent ourselves to repeat them again. On the other side, it helps us to overcome our illusions and fears. To quote an instance, I was having public and stage fear, which I overcome by participating in mono acting competition in 9th grade. It also motivated me to participate in further activities.

In my conviction learning done through any source is beneficial. It definitely teaches us some or other meaningful tricks to live our life. However we cannot afford to commit mistakes to learn everything in life therefore I discern that we must be open to learn from any prospect let it be reading, listening other's talk or self- experience.

Writing Feedback / Toefl essay - CELEBRITY OR ATHLETE - WHOM DO YOU WANT TO MEET AND WHY? [3]

IF YOU COULD MEET A FAMOUs PERSON ENTERTAINER OR ATTLETE, WHO WOULD THAT BE AND WHY? USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR CHOICE.

Today meeting and personally seeing celebrities or athlete has become a matter of prestige. If anybody get to meet his favorite entertainer, indeed he would feel as if he is on cloud nine. Likewise them, I would feel great ecstasy in case I get to meet Mr. Amitabh Bachan. He is prominent Bollywood star and quit cherished person of the entertainment industry.

Firstly, I have fallowed his "Kaun banega crorepati" show, it's an Indian daily show. On the basis of his performance and interaction with participant, I tend to adore his personality and his humble behavior. However, to assure whether his behavior is genuine or is it only because he is paid for presenting himself that way for the show. I want to meet him and spend a day with him to observe his attitude and authentic behavior with other people. I can make my assessment by comparing his attitude by seeing his ways of treating his helpers at home or at his work and how his behavior is with aristocrat people of his industry.

Secondly, I believe he would be an appropriate person to ask certain suggestion about tackling fear, praise, failures and victories. In my understanding stars that has infinite number of people fallowing them, live with lot of strain to maintain their expectation abreast performing every other regular obligations. Few year back he was bankrupted and his stardom faded, he went through most devastating phrase of his life. But this audacious men pulled himself together and again shined on Indian entertainment industry. He said that he made few good friends and lost countable and realized what is the value of single rupee? Since then he is trying to live life of common men than of star.

Mr. Bachan has experienced life of 80's as well as 20's, I hope that my meeting with him will help me to learn facts about every junction of life, how to resolve disastrous problem of life and provide me tips for rising back after diminishing.

Writing Feedback / Toefl evalution - God is too large to fit in one religion [5]

"God is too big to fit into one religion" do you agree or disagree this statement. Provide your explanation about it.

World has evolved phenomenally from fashion to technology but one thing which is still same is distinct religion and people's faith in it. Globally people believe in various religion and worship their authentic god, so other people believe "god is too big to fit in one religion". I concur that rather than worshiping god in different ways and dividing him into distinct religions we must believe in his noble messages.

Firstly, nobody have ever seen god except their imagination, probably that is the reason god is worshiped in the form of idol, images, or various other fiction form. The discrimination of worshiping god has lead mortal to fight, curse or slit each other. No religion of the world permit or advice to harm any life in order to proclaim their belief about god superior then others. This attitude of various religion promoters has given birth to religion war among humans. Unfortunately, they all have time to pronounce their god/religion better than other but do not have time and sanity to believe in god's message of "LOVE"

Secondly, all religion has same motive, care, lessons, and emphasize on mercy, humanity and love. However, human who has been most rational creature of god is behaving alike most cruel animal. Rather than fallowing the god's instructions of "valuing all life", they do every nasty action in the name of their religion - For instance, in primitive day in some religions, widow women were advice to burn themselves alive with their dead husband to dedicate her life for her husband because after marriage husband is her god and she must not live life without him. How unrealistic and hostile these societies self - constructed rules are? In these situation they are not promoting or respecting their god rather forcefully killing somebody in the name of god. Nevertheless, today, people has changed their unwise approach of performing any lethal rituals. And I hope people will soon start believing in the power that move this world rather than presenting their hypothesis of god and religion.

People in this world must believe in one religion "humanity" rather than fighting and hurting their own species.

Writing Feedback / ToEFL EVALUTION - government money grant for arts or enviornment safety. [7]

A government is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment .which do you think the goverment should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Healthy environment is necessary for inhabitant, considering the fact that currently our planet has been contaminated due to distinct pollution, natural disasters, and other ecosystem damages. It is essential for government to provide adequate living condition to people rather than spending money on arts.

Pollution is major cause of today's damaged environment due to carbon emission from chemical factories and vehicles has polluted the air. Similarly, water which is a basic need for survival is contaminated due to human activities such as - dumping trash in water bodies. Forests has been eliminated for industrial and personal purposes which has made our environment even more vulnerable. Natural disasters are another point of concern due to which many lives and environment damages occur; for an instance - recently due to government laxness an entire apartment community was destroyed in Seattle state due to landslide, resulting into human and animal deaths and devastating destruction of properties. Despite localities pleading state government of Seattle has not worked on the down slopping landslide happened few years back due to heavy rain in the area near which this apartments were located. Government's ignorance could cost heavy damage to innocent lives.

In many developing countries 50% population are not living in appropriate living area such as Bangladesh, Malaysia, and India. Gutters are kept uncovered due to which many diseases develop then they spread all over. People in this area have to consume water from dirty ponds or streams, where they wash their clothes as well. For an instance - in India people living under poverty line are living in slums that are full of insects and diseases. Government must build economic houses with basic facilities for people who cannot afford better living condition due to lack of finances to avoid epidemics and further damages to environment.

Art is useless if it is present or displayed in unhygienic environment. However investment in art might benefit few people but investment in maintaining our delicate environment will help infinite number of lives. Therefore, Government must invest money on protecting environment rather than wasting its money on not required pieces of art.

Writing Feedback / Toefl evalution - STAYING IN A PLACE WHERE SEASON CHANGE OR IN A PLACE WHERE IT DO NOT. [3]

Some people prefer to live in place that have same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and example to support.

Distinct seasons bring myriad changes in the environment due to which places that undergo seasonal changes evolves beautifully. But weather remains same in some area of the earth. Nevertheless, I adore staying near nature and place where season change because that would give me an opportunity to feel nature closely. For two reasons I would prefer to stay in such place to enjoy new climate in every season and vegetation would be better in that place almost entire year.

I am residing in Seattle state of United State of America and I love this place due to its fluctuating weather. Summers are beautiful and scenic here, during summer flora and fauna of this city is spectacular. People from west course of America prefer to come for site seeing and summer vocations in this city. On the other hand, winters are not dry or barrel, greenery of this place remains stable in winters. Adding to it, snow, rain and mist make the dense green mountains even more captivating then summer views. However, monsoons are little wet here but it allows me to smell the fragrance of soil. I eagerly wait for this seasons merely for enjoying the aroma of unique smell of soil. Places where weather changes are more colorful.

Major reason of my preference of such category places is high vegetable availability and chance of exploring lot of different activities. In every season, you would have special fruit or vegetable to taste. Also many farmers keep fruit picking festivals for seasonal fruit in its particular season.. For an instance cherry picking is prominent fruit picking event in USA that can be done in July to Sept. In such event people get chance of wandering the cherry farms and plucking fresh cherries. It becomes kind of adventurous outage for the people residing in urban areas. Besides that lot of activities can be done in all the seasons such as para -gliding in summer or in spring, Ice - skating or skiing in winter, wine yards browsing can be done in any season except winter. Assembling all advantages of area where weather are not alike in all seasons, I can deem such places as heaven of earth.

Changes are necessary for everybody human, animals as well as for nature. In my understanding without change earth would be monotonous site to live in. Changing weather embellish the earth beauty and provide new energy to me in every season. Therefore, I would prefer to stay in a place where season change.

Writing Feedback / Toefl - Is technology creating single world culture? fights for culture & belief [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reason or example to support your opinion.

Modern Technology has provided human better world to live in. And easy availability of technologies globally have brought the world together. Technology has now become like a change that cannot be inevitable. Likewise today people cannot imagine their life without the use of technology. The best part of technology is, it not limited to one or two people but a single technology is used my numerous countries, and citizens of it. Therefore, I concur that modern technology is magnificently creating a single world culture.

Technology has evolved as global phenomena. Every country of the world want to top this sector. It is most powerful weapon of today's world. Why it is powerful? Because it is widely accepted by the people of the world. Technology's growth is unstoppable, it is bound to grow and make others grow due to its merit. For an Instance - Solar energy use was initiated by America and now is adopted by many countries. It has allowed many countries to use same technology to save revertible natural resources. Adding to it, many countries are now joining the race of inventing better prospects to save natural resources. Fortunately, it is generating healthy competition by prompting this world to fallow one culture - "Use of Technology ".

Technology has spread awareness in the people and united them together. One countries invention or discovery is used by many others for the betterment. This cooperative use of technology is spreading awareness about diverse technologies in the world and collaborating the world. For an instance - Since World War - 2, Russia and United State of America were sharing rivalry term. But Invention of Nuclear power has bought these countries together to enhance the research of Nuclear power. Similarly many developing - countries, in which education rate is low. Technology is playing a role of teacher for an instance - Smart phones (I - Phone ) is invented by American company Apple but allows people from entire globe to operate it efficiently without any prior information. I am comfortably able to talk to my brother who is in India through facetime (video call app of I - phone) being in America also. Technology is inviting everybody to be benefited by it.

Distinct countries of the world are fighting in order to proclaiming their cultures and beliefs better than others. And these wars are costing them numerous live and immense amount of resources. But culture of fallowing same technology is wholly benefiting this world. Therefore I believe that modern technology's producing single world culture is better than war igniting cultures.