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Aug 30, 2014
Undergraduate / I gave my hand to a helpless man - Common App Belief essay [5]
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This fantastic work! The essay is ready for submission :) The content, the vividness of the description, the end result of your actions, and your sense of accomplishment and maturity definitely comes through very clearly and solidly in this essay! Even your choice of words shows that you have placed great thought and consideration in the way it will affect the overall content of the paper. This answers the essay prompt perfectly. It is obvious that you took our suggestions seriously and applied it to your work. At this point, all I can advise you to do is keep practicing and try to gain even more control over your use of the written English word.