justivy03
May 24, 2015
Writing Feedback / Information about the primary export commodities of Southland in 2000, 2015 and predictions for 2025 [2]
- Moving to a more detailed analysis, meat products reached its highest level at almost 10 billion in 2000 and then there will be a slight decrease until 2025.
- This type of commodity is predicted to reach the lowest at 5 billion .
- On the other hand, 2015 is dominated by dairy products export at around the same level as international tourism exports 15 years ago. As for the prediction in 2025, international tourismwill beis the highest of all other commodities.
Trias, this is another great analysis of the data given in the graph. I'm just keen on making points matter, as such when you are referring to figures, address the findings as to its unit of measurement or as to the graph entails, e.g. 10 billion or 10%, also mind the following;
- the use of decreasing value and increasing value in referring to the findings and analysis of the graph.
Keep writing
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- Moving to a more detailed analysis, meat products reached its highest level at almost 10 billion in 2000 and then there will be a slight decrease until 2025.
- This type of commodity is predicted to reach the lowest at 5 billion .
- On the other hand, 2015 is dominated by dairy products export at around the same level as international tourism exports 15 years ago. As for the prediction in 2025, international tourism
Trias, this is another great analysis of the data given in the graph. I'm just keen on making points matter, as such when you are referring to figures, address the findings as to its unit of measurement or as to the graph entails, e.g. 10 billion or 10%, also mind the following;
- the use of decreasing value and increasing value in referring to the findings and analysis of the graph.
Keep writing
Cheers!!!