ChristineB
Jun 13, 2015
Research Papers / Hillary Clinton Research Essay: experience, presidential run, moderatism and widespread appeal.. [3]
Hi, Zhou1801. I'll address some parts of your paper:
In our nation's history, there have been few elections that narcissistic politicians have not dubbed, "The most important election in history."
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Although the upcoming 2016 presidential election is perhaps not going to carry as much historical weight as thoseis not the election of FDR, Kennedy, or even Lincoln, its importance should not be understated.
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Correspondingly, this begs the question,"Who?".Who?
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Clinton's potentially historic status as the first woman nominee by a major party,combined withher near ubiquitous name recognition,amongand her many other qualifications make her an undeniably attractive candidate for the 2016 nomination by the Democratic Party.
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Hillary's decades of experiencebeginbegan even before her years as an author, Secretary of State, presidential nominee, and New York Senator; they date back as far as her years in the White House under the first, and hopefully not last, Clinton administration.
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As first lady, Hillary took an unprecedented role in policy reform, the gender equality movement , and international diplomacy.
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One women's empowerment magazine essayist even suggests that, "Hillary Rodham Clinton has been acknowledged to be the most openly empowered presidential wife in American history, save Eleanor Roosevelt" (Rajghatta). (I am not yet knowledgable enough about citation styles to confirm that you did this one correctly. Some require dates and page numbers - you may want to ensure that this one is compete, as is).
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LikewiseIndeed , Clinton took on multiple roles in government beyond those of herthe traditional duties of a first lady .
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Appointed headtoof the Task Force on National Health Care Reform, Clinton was tasked with nothing less than "creating a national healthcare reform plan" ("Hillary Rodham Clinton") ,.(Again, check that your citation style is OK. I'm not sure.) Hillary gained first-hand experience in leading national policy, making and creating reform at the highest levelslevel of government on one of thea key issuesissue which still facefaces the nation today.
I'll stop there. I hope that helps you a bit!
Hi, Zhou1801. I'll address some parts of your paper:
In our nation's history, there have been few elections that narcissistic politicians have not dubbed, "The most important election in history."
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Although the upcoming 2016 presidential election is perhaps not going to carry as much historical weight as those
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Correspondingly, this begs the question,
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Clinton's potentially historic status as the first woman nominee by a major party,
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Hillary's decades of experience
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As first lady, Hillary took an unprecedented role in policy reform, the gender equality movement , and international diplomacy.
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One women's empowerment magazine essayist even suggests that, "Hillary Rodham Clinton has been acknowledged to be the most openly empowered presidential wife in American history, save Eleanor Roosevelt" (Rajghatta). (I am not yet knowledgable enough about citation styles to confirm that you did this one correctly. Some require dates and page numbers - you may want to ensure that this one is compete, as is).
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Appointed head
I'll stop there. I hope that helps you a bit!