ChristineB
Jul 20, 2015
Writing Feedback / It's more important to work at a job you enjoy , even if the salary is low. [7]
Hi, Michele. I'm going to help you with parts of your essay:
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We all dream, when we become adults, toof eventually obtainingthea rewarding job that we have always desired and that would be also rewarding with a high salary.
However mostMost of the timestime, this dream does not come true, however .
Life is complicated;and we may end up having the job we wanted, but not the high salary we desired.well paid or, on the other hand,Others end up working on somethingat a job that wethey do not enjoy at all, but that allows to leads to a high standard of living.
In my view, it is better to havehaving a job you love but with a low salary rather than a high-paying jobbeing well paid but for somethingdoing something you do not enjoyyou will be likely to hate .
I'll stop there. I hope this has helped you a little :)
Hi, Michele. I'm going to help you with parts of your essay:
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We all dream, when we become adults, to obtain the job we have always desired and that would be also rewarding with a high salary.
We all dream
However most of the times this dream does not come true.
Life is complicated and we may end up having the job we wanted but not well paid or, on the other hand, working on something that we do not enjoy at all but that allows to lead a high standard of living.
Life is complicated;
In my view it is better having a job you love but with a low salary rather than being well paid but for something you will be likely to hate.
In my view, it is better to have
I'll stop there. I hope this has helped you a little :)