kiki23
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / 'Sophisticated wearable headset'. Undoubtedly, it is tricky to learn tonal language nowadays. [4]
Hi! I have some advice for you:
it can tell the user this sentence is the fact so use simple present and it shoud be
it tells the user
for autistic people and people who have speech disorder this sentence explains about the disease so you need to mention them instead of the people who owned it and it should be
for autism and deafness
However, according to the inventor, the feedback of the pitch has different outcome because of the specific feedback., according to the inventor.
Hi! I have some advice for you:
it can tell the user this sentence is the fact so use simple present and it shoud be
it tells the user
for autistic people and people who have speech disorder this sentence explains about the disease so you need to mention them instead of the people who owned it and it should be
for autism and deafness
However, according to the inventor, the feedback of the pitch has different outcome because of the specific feedback.