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Critical essay about Persepolis.

2 - Persepolis is such a wonderful book! I'm glad to have this opportunity to review an essay about it. I...

Writing Feedbackannedoherty - May 29, 2009EF_Simone - May 29, 2009
Journal essay (welfare state)

3 - Hi Geoff, Kindly find my help below; If I was Head of State of any given (state...

Writing FeedbackGeoff - May 28, 2009justivy03 - Apr 9, 2015
People want stay healthy. Health is must to enjoy the life to the fullest.

7 - Notoman, That is such excellent advice!! Thank you for participating so actively in peer editing. That's what makes this...

Writing Feedbackbiggestv - May 28, 2009EF_Simone - May 29, 2009
Scholarship Essay: Graduate Education in Chemical Engineering

7 - Thank you Sean...

Scholarshipcalyx - May 28, 2009calyx - Jun 1, 2009
Simple ways of improving my writing and structure.

8 - For metaphors, the key is to draw on words that already have strong symbolic associations. So, if you just...

Grammar, UsageIanUk - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
Australian Gold Rush: Introduction writing

16 - Hey Notoman, thanks for mentioning the plagiarism detector. I knew such software existed, but I didn't know there was...

Writing Feedbackjgv115 - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 14, 2009
Speech on Finding a Job After Graduation

5 - Yes, one must remember that audiences are often bored by long lists of numbers. However one strong or shocking...

Speecheslenzo537 - May 28, 2009EF_Simone - May 29, 2009
Research Paper on Life situation

4 - Anecdotal evidence is the very core of sociology, so you should be on solid ground referencing your own experiences,...

Research Papersflawless 23 - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? (TOEFL essay)

10 - Bear in mind too that the TOEFL isn't a one shot deal. If you don't do well the first...

Writing Feedbackbiggestv - May 27, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
Personal Essay/Personal Statement, "connection between me and science"

10 - Okay, but you see how the original phrasing was confusing. Simone and I each interpreted it differently, and we're...

Undergraduateadanne1990 - May 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
UC Personal Statements: Suggestions for revising?

6 - You know, in Sociology there's a "Front and backstage." People would rather not hear things which make them...

UndergraduateTachy - May 27, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 10, 2009
King Lear naivety and inability to control his emotions (ENG4U class)

17 - And, Romeo -- Don't forget to pay the favor forward by helping others with their essays!...

Book Reportsfallin_romeo - May 26, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 10, 2009
"To Understand and Be Understood" - Why do you want to pursue a career in the medical field?

14 - Thanks very much for all of your help. EF Simone: I will gladly critique other's essays on this website....

UndergraduateDancingDoc - May 26, 2009DancingDoc - Jun 8, 2009
Perseverance essay in relation to ice hokey

7 - You mention that Orr lived at a time of war, and that this complicated his life. You might want...

EssaysGeoff - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Personal Essay - Something I've learned through a personal experience

6 - Great essay. I love the way you cross-cut your experience learning the bass guitar with your volunteer experience. The...

ScholarshipTheAnswer - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Fraternity Interest Letter

6 - Your letter is a bit vague. Try adding some specifics to make in more interesting. What qualities specifically do...

Lettersambitious1 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 2, 2009
Essay on Early Years Social Policy

4 - Since you have already researched the two acts, why not write up a list of differences between them, and...

Essaysmaextra7 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
SOP - Ph.D in Environmental Engineering is the foundation

8 - A couple of minor fixes for your intro: "Engineering is the foundation on which humankind builds its world...

Graduatehiren1982 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
Essay on the legal drinking age

6 - Your essay come up with a very different way of presentation. I loved it. I will use it...

Writing Feedbackkokujampo - May 25, 2009biggestv - May 28, 2009
'Economics in Chengdu' - Letter of motivation to University of Amsterdam

13 - However, the word "foreigner" is not in and of itself pejorative, as certain ethnic slurs are. If it has...

UndergraduateFederico - May 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 3, 2009
Causes of Global Financial Crisis

3 - While moderating here, I have often found myself recommending three books over and over again: Stechen King's On Writing,...

Writing Feedbackferocious12 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
Essay "The Library is a Shed of Knowledge"

4 - I would like to read how someone can find a book at the library or how the library is...

Essayssepti - May 24, 2009bubuvio - Jun 10, 2009
Firmly believe it is the best university for me; U Ryerson; Why apply?

12 - That's a good suggestion even if your interest is sincere. When writing an application of any kind -- job...

Undergraduatenuri - May 25, 2009EF_Simone - May 29, 2009
WPE --The minimum wage in the U.S.

5 - Yes, that's the one. You know that there are reasons to increase minimum wage (protect workers from exploitation)...

Writing Feedbacksapst21 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
American Summer Camp in Kayrakkum, Tajikistan

4 - Well, why do you want to attend the camp? Is it to broaden your mind? Meet new people? Experience...

UndergraduateShade45 - May 25, 2009EF_Sean - May 31, 2009
[TOEFL ESSAY ] Should the Government Provide Free College?

4 - Thank you sooooo much. It helps me a lot. :)...

Writing Feedbackrjsdndi - May 24, 2009rjsdndi - May 25, 2009
energy towards college, family personal statement/diversity statement for Law School

4 - Hi JVS, instead of asking people to email their essays to you, please just browse around in EssayForum to...

Graduatejvs2764 - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
Personal Essay (the college of Medicine)

3 - Simone, I'm so glad you mentioned "indecision." I could not find the words to express what I wanted to...

Undergraduatesammour - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay

8 - Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter your message....

Scholarshipmishmon - May 24, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
How can I describe this graph?

7 - I'd say the number for the Master's degree is off. The bar clearly stretches to the $60,000 mark, so...

Essayssoha - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
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