|UC Personal Statement - finding leeway
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|King Lear - main points of my Essay
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|Fr. Julian: Common App- influential person essay.
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Writing Feedbackdude91EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Literature response- writing like a child, need reviews
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|FSU Application Essay- "Vires, Artes, Mores" and my parents
NEW - To me, "Vires, Artes, Mores" captures the essence and character of an individual destined to be a productive and...
|I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion
Writing FeedbackAsselyaAsselya - Nov 16, 2008
|Essay about "Better communication types"
NEW - Here is another essay. It will be a very great help if you give me any suggestion or comments...
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|'Painting is my identity' - your extra-curricular activities - commonapp
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|"Art is not a thing; it is a way." - Elbert Hubbard - FSU Admission Essay.
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|(prepare for future job/increase knowledge) Why people attend college or university?
Writing Feedbackfranklampardenfranklamparden - Nov 15, 2008
|My leadership skills will benefit the university community and cause for a better society to live in
Undergraduatebballjessie23bballjessie23 - Nov 15, 2008
|Crohn's - UC essay #2
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|How the internet has improved your academic experience.
5 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...
Writing Feedbackjnix612EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|Just started working on my Ph.D.
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Dissertationsresearcher_lawEF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|"Can I get you something to drink?" - common app essay.
|help with organizing a short answer for UR
2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...
Undergraduatevolleyball09EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|'discussions and work' - Interest in Davidson/Contributions
2 - Good afternoon :) I suggest moving from the past/passive voice to a present/active voice for this piece. For...
Undergraduatebhangra369EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
|The best advance of the twentieth century - college essay prompt
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|How I help everyday people - UCF Essay 2!
Undergraduatescoffey92scoffey92 - Nov 15, 2008
|the hardest thing in this world is to live in it - Evaluate my UCF Essay
3 - Thank you evalutating my essay! The corrections really helped me. Unfortunately, I couldn't add to it with more detail;...
Undergraduatescoffey92scoffey92 - Nov 15, 2008
|'Mother's influence' / 'Larger world' - UC ESSAYS #1 AND #2!
NEW - UC #1: Topic: Describe the world you come from ï for example, your family, community, or school ï and...
|How to Write an A+ Research Paper
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|If you had a day to spend as you wish, how would you use your time? ESSAY
NEW - I am looking for any suggestions. Anything you would change, add, or remove. Any errors with punctuation, grammar, etc....
|Describe a trait or characteristic that has been passed to you by your family
NEW - Describe a trait or characteristic that has been passed along to you by your family. Tell us why you...
|Carnegie Mellon University admission essay
UndergraduatemihirmjEF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
|(moved to Florida - bump in the road) + why UCS (campus and stadium)
2 - "My self" is one word: "myself." Avoid using the pronoun "you" in formal academic writing. Try using "me,"...
Undergraduatetheblackmaria6EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
|'Helper and people lover / procrastination' - two UCF essays
2 - Good afternoon :) Mechanically, only three suggestions: first, make sure when you are making a list to include...
Undergraduatebeccaboo3290EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
|Describe a personal service experience in your high school or community
2 - Good afternoon :) Your essay is a bit technical; perhaps you can counter this by shifting the focus...
UndergraduatepixiegirlEF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
|Fort Lee school, Rutgers undergraduate essay
2 - Make sure you are using proper linking verbs and article adjectives, such as "is," "the," "a," and "are" to...
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