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2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...
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2 - Good evening. My main concern here is your mechanics; you have a good response, but I am afraid...
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|A comparative analysis with the themes of race power and justice
2 - Good morning. Good evening. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific...
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|Family history + my qualities or unique traits - UCF Admission Essay
2 - Good morning. A few things: first, the list of characteristics is a bit ostentatious; shorten it up a...
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4 - Good morning. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...
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8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...
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|"I thought long and hard about where to spend 4 years" - UCF Essays
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4 - I suggest that you definitely include the publication information (at least one source) and remove any "filler" from the...
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|"Circle of Love" - Univ of Florida admission essay review on a meaningful event, experience ...
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2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin with an outline. Write down all of the points you want to...
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|"I've been a musician for eight years.." - FSU admission essay
6 - i decided to just delete the last part. "along with the help of my role models: my band director,...
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|UCF: "How has family/culture influenced who you are?
NEW - Work in progress, just wrote this from scratch. I'm having some trouble with word choice though, and on how...
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2 - Great response to the prompt; a few mechanical errors, but overall a strong essay. Nice opening and conclusion; the...
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