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5 - the club you are in charge of-"you wouldn't have it any other way" <--take that part out, it is...
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NEW - The only life I have ever known has taken place in the city I will always call home, Carlsbad....
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NEW - The topic is this: Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political,...
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Book ReportsAmeliKaranTrehan - Nov 28, 2008
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Undergraduatechipmunkcrappyhair - Nov 28, 2008
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UndergraduateNOkiaTNOkiaT - Nov 28, 2008
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NEW - 1)The University values an educational environment that provides all members of the campus community with opportunities to grow and...
|UC Transfer Prompt 1- human behavior
NEW - I don't know if my essay sounds too jumpy or grammatical errors. Any kind of comment is welcomed. Thank...
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NEW - I just wrote this out for the application to UT. Though I'm graduating next year my communication skills are...
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Undergraduateshaydiegoteenaxboee - Nov 27, 2008
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4 - Cut back on the story. Do you know how many essays admission counselors read about tragedies? You...
Undergraduatevanvan513teenaxboee - Nov 27, 2008
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4 - Less story more more more reflection. Your first paragraph was magnificent! Now you don't need to say no...
Undergraduateickleohieteenaxboee - Nov 27, 2008
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Undergraduatelilibeth91760teenaxboee - Nov 27, 2008
|"my understanding of communication" - UC prompt#1
4 - Your essay is mostly story. Where is your reflection? What did you learn from this? You should have 10%...
Undergraduateksj430teenaxboee - Nov 27, 2008
|Poli Sci Major UC Transfer Personal Statement (opinions required)
UndergraduateVaheMVaheM - Nov 27, 2008
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Writing FeedbackFissionMailedFissionMailed - Nov 27, 2008
|UC essay prompts 1&2- "The Jaws of Life" Any Critique would be appreciated!
Undergraduatejojomoverjojomover - Nov 27, 2008
|'in front of a microscope' - UC personal statements #1!
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|"hope to be a vanguard of technology" -Describe the world you come from.
Undergraduateomhlomhl - Nov 27, 2008
|'success has lost its intrinsic meaning over the years' - mission trip
Undergraduatemyidisthismyidisthis - Nov 27, 2008
|A THOUSAND SPLENDID SUNS RESEARCH; CHILD MARRIAGE, EDUCATION, IMMIGRATION
3 - Gloria, thank you for the feedback. And yes, the first paragraph is unfinished. Also, this is a formal piece...
Book Reportsamoniamoni - Nov 27, 2008
|In Japanese, my name literally means straight arrow; COMMON APP
Undergraduatedorafacedoraface - Nov 27, 2008
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NEW - Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this...
|UC PROMPT; My father has played a tremendous part - me as an civil engineer
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Undergraduatehellohello - Nov 27, 2008
|the crucible-how is John Proctor presented (paragraph about him&elizabeth)
NEW - Hi, just wondering if I am answering the question with this paragraph or have gone of the point completely!!...
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NEW - I really need help on evaluating my essay. Could you please help me with the grammar, rhetorical skills, effectiveness,...
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Research PapersRA19RA19 - Nov 27, 2008
|MPH admissions essay; any topic related to why you want to enter the program 1 page long
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