|personal essay about me, MELANIE ROSE ZUNIGA
2 - Good morning. As the prompt and/or instructions for this essay were not included in the posting, I can...
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|'Accountant dream' - How has The Macaulay Honors College changed you?
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|'I have flat feet'. Elaborate on activities (extratricculars, work activities..etc)
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|[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines
4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...
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|"The art of living is more like wrestling than dancing"- need help UF essay
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|"Music has become big impact on my life" - FSU NEW ESSAY
NEW - The connection between Vires, Artes, Mores exemplifies not only the morals, values and intelligence a well rounded person has,...
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|Essay about my weekend activities
3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...
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|'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?
8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...
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|My strengths, talents, and interest - why do I wish to attend UHart?
2 - "I am hoping to garner higher..." In regards to the content, I think you're on to something here....
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|Personal statement...how i became an adult in the past 2 years.
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|Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities - my statement
NEW - Diligent and perseverance are the most important qualities that are necessary for me as a student. For the past...
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|IT achievement - University of Miami Admission Essay
2 - Good morning. My mechanical suggestions are as follows: First, make sure that you are capitalizing only proper...
Undergraduatelfmasieri - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|help on the play Doctor Faustus by Chritopher Marlowe
4 - Good morning. I suggest beginning your research by doing an internet search using the keywords "Marlow" and "Faustus"...
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|UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound
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|"Congratulations! You are going to be a mother!"
9 - OK, I'm assuming the above is the new conclusion. One suggestion: "...talented, a natural leader, and overall...
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|"College was the best time of my life." -UCF APPLICATION ESSAY
3 - thanks!!...
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|Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE
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|how does Penn make a perfect match for you?
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with
5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...
Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life
4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...
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|teleporting mentally to a different world
4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...
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|FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?
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|"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay
3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...
Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.
2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...
Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?
NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...
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|this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay
2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...
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|How to safe the Earth + Personal reflection of my presentation - Essays
4 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...
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|how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay
NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....
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|my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation
2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...
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|Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers
NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...
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