justivy03
Sep 15, 2015
Undergraduate / How Just One Summer Changed Me Forever - transition from childhood to adulthood essay [3]
- ...America's idea of an adult, it'sis terrifying.
- Suddenly, being a kid again sounds like the best idea anyone can everhadhave .
- ...feeling that change could be the dayyouthey graduate...
- ..high school, or college, or getyourtheir first real job.
-ButHowever for me, the change happened (no need to add anything here) (should I add something else right here, or you know, in this general area?)
- ...suddenlybutand it also felt like...
- It seemed to happen suddenly,buthowever looking back,
Apart from the corrections I made above, I went through your essay and it seems written well.
Just be confident with what you wrote and it will be fantastic.
- ...America's idea of an adult
- Suddenly, being a kid again sounds like the best idea anyone can ever
- ...feeling that change could be the day
- ..high school, or college, or get
-
- ...suddenly
- It seemed to happen suddenly,
Apart from the corrections I made above, I went through your essay and it seems written well.
Just be confident with what you wrote and it will be fantastic.