Writing Feedback / ADVERTISING ; Useless & Useful depending on individual perceptions [2]

I think that everyone can divide all advertising products and services in to useless ones and useful ones.It is like looking through an information desk when you pay attention to those messages that interest you.

I dont like jewelry . It dosnt mean i dont have it at all. I have a couple of inexpensive rings as gifits from my parents.I just think, people pay too much attention to this stuff.I believe it is the result of mass advertising,Every day when i am watching TV,listening to the radio,or reading the newspaper, I notice many advertising about getting an expensive rings,chain,necklace or ear-rings.From my poit of view these kinds of advertising contaminate peoples mind.

In this case you are encouraged to buy things you dont really need.They make you believe you need such products in order to succeed or be happy.

From the other side,I think that advertisements of new detergents with up to date formulus to help you maintain your cloth in perfect conditions.

The new cars with some extra futures that make you travelling more comfortable and sports goods that make your life healthier may help you to improve your life.

Recently,My husband and i saw anadd on the internet about avery interesting and inexpensive vacation to Japan for a week.Is not it a wesome ?

we like travelling,So, now we are planning to find out more about it and maybe, make reservation.I believe that without advertisments we would be unaware about plenty of opportunities,That may make your life happier ,easier,and less stressful.

My point is that every person has his own scale of values.So, if he is vegetarian he will consider an ad about meat products useless for him.

Writing Feedback / Selecting a career is not an easy thing; How do you choose your career? [5]

Career has a great role in our life , can impacts on life of any one of us , it has negative and postive effects,So, selecting our career is a very difficult decision that we will do,every person should think carefully from indicating their career,This decision is different from one person to another one. it depends on the desire, economical situation and ability of that person,some persons dont have that ability to work hard and take some great responsibilies, and some of them came from poor background they like to have a good income they dont mind even if he or she works for a long time without any rest, vise versa, some people work just for getting high rank in the society ,they dont need money but they want to be respectful.

in addition, career has also great effect on our society , goverment should consider a policy , every person should be evaluated before getting any careers, for example, doctor has a great responsibilty because our life is under their hands, not every person can be a doctor, those person that want to become adcotor should be evaluated , and determine their ability and their skills.

in conclusion, i think selecting a career is not an easy thing, we will think carefuly before deciding which career we want to do, because our career means our life.

Writing Feedback / Let's protect our Earth; Effects of Global Warming [4]

global warming is an increase in temperature of our planet.This is a very dangerous issue that every one should be concerned about it.Because,It will have a great affect on our life in the future.Every societies should encourage their scientists to do a research on this great target, and try to find the best solution for this problem.

Nowadays, the natural disasters are occurred more than which in the past , like hurricane , flood, earthquake, and ...etc. These are the important causes of poverty in our society.In the other aspect , these changes in our planet may have a great influence on our health, it may cause creation of a different kinds of viruses and bacterias, for examples, most of people are suffered from cancer, this is a great ratio if we compare it to the past.

Some people believe that the advance in technology and civilization has relation to this problem, for example , We use car daily for transportation and burning the gasoline it causes enviromental pollution. And increase the number of factories that produce chemical products, for example utilization of cement.

In the future , If people use solar energy ,it will be a best way to overcome this dangerous issue.On the other hand, agriculture is also another way to protect our climate , each societies should care this aspect , should allocate a budget to this great issue.

In conclusion, i think , it is a task of every one of us to protect our enviroment from pollution and warming to make a good and healthier enviroment for ourself and our generation in the future.

Writing Feedback / TOURISM and its IMPACT on our society [7]

One of the most essential things for toursim to be successful in a particular place is a quality of the enviroment both natural and man-made.However tourism involves many activities that have a negative effect on the enviroment.These occur when the level of usage is bigger than the amount of caring for the enviroment.Uncontrolled tourism is threatening many natural area around the world.it can put great pressure on an area,and lead to negative enviromental impacts on air and water quality,vegetation,soil,wild life,and many other thing.

One of the most important areas of tourism is transportation.transport by air , road, rail is rising steadily because of increase in the number of tourists.One consquences of this is that tourism is responsible for a large amount of air transmissions.these emissions, as well as those from the production electricity,another important tourist need, are linked to acid rain, chemical pollution and global warming.They contribute to severe air pollution,not only in cities but in natural enviroment as well.Some of these impacts are directly related to tourism.For example, in very hot or cold conditions,Tour buses often leave their motor running while the tourists go out on excursions so that the bus is at comfortable temperature when they return.

Another negative effect of tourism is water quality.Bushwalker can damage small streams by walking through them too many times,causing them to be muddy which then in turn makes it difficult for small fish to feed.Also, less experienced bushwalkers some times like to pursue activities such as washing their hair in small creeks and streams, sending chemical in shampoo and conditioner downstream and further damaging to the enviroment.

However, not all effects of tourism are long term. The most common impact of tourism is litter, and its effect is almost instant. Litter is a serious problem in areas with high concentrations of tourist activities and natural attractions. It can have a major negative impact on all areas of the natural environment .

Tourist destinations in the mountains often end up with a great deal of unwanted waste. Tourists on expeditions leave behind garbage, oxygen cylinders and camping equipment. In the less developed or remote areas this is even worse as there are few disposal facilities. Some of the more frequently visited mountain trails in the Andes and in Nepal have been nick-named by the locals things such as "Coca-Cola Trail" and "Toilet Paper Trail", and the Inca Trail in Peru is often referred to as the "Stinker Trail" as a result of all the rubbish that tourists leave behind.

This has a bad effect on not only the appeal of a tourist site but the plant and animal life in the area as well. Natural tourist sites need distinct pathways and signposts so as to minimise the impact on vegetation. Destroying plants is also destroying many homes and habitats of the fauna in that particular area. This can eventually lead to the loss of biodiversity.

Constant trampling of natural habitats has a negative impact on vegetation, animals, and soil as well. Large amounts of trampling on soil causes loss of organic matter, and also accelerates erosion in that area. In beaches all over the world, especially the more popular ones such as those in Hawaii, the erosion is so bad that sand has to brought in to keep the beach attractive and viable. Once again, clear signs and distinct paths are needed to minimise this impact.

Tourism has many destructive environmental effects. However, it also has some positive impacts. Tourism contributes to environmental protection and conservation by raising people's awareness of environmental values. Tourists often travel to a destination because of its quality and purity. Many of these tourists both directly and indirectly cause pollution to these places, making them unappealing to other tourists. However, the next stage in the cycle is employing local people to help clean it up, making their lives slightly easier and more comfortable. It is only when the gap between these stages gets too large that it becomes a real problem, but with good planning and having everything in moderation, this may not happen any more.

Writing Feedback / Imported fruits &vegetables can affect the home grown vegetable market [2]

Economy is crucial for our life, so each country has its own standard for importing and exporting products, it is different from one country to another. Bringing products from outside has great affect on the markets and on the home grown products, this has a negative and postive affects, on one hand , domestic vegetables and fruits in some countries cant supply the great number of people ,so those goverments should put a good system for importing fruits and vegetables from outside, surely this can have an influence on the prize of vegetables and fruits on the markets,and also on the homegrown products .

On another hand , tropical fruit and vegetables have essential commodities in the enternational markets, in some countries these kind of fruits and vegetables can not cultivate because of cold climate in those rea so importing of tropical fruits and vegetables has a great influence on the markets and home grown products, because these tropical products are very desirable people are ready to buy it even if it is expensive, in turn makes the homegrown products to be less desirable and decline its prize. Nowdays , most of people live in the urban area and are busy with their works a small number of people live in the rural area and working as farmer, goverments should encourage farmer to harvest their products and put a good economical system between importing and exporting fruit and vegetables from outside.

Finally, i believe that organic farming and products are better than those vegetables and fruit that importing and growing by chemical fertilizer in a short time just for trading , and also some time lost their nutritional content because they remain for a long time till they reach the place of useand aslo they may cause the spread of epedemic disease .each goverment should encourage their farmers for cultivate fruits and vegetables,and allocate a budget for that. and protect the prize of domestic product on a stable level.

Writing Feedback / goverment has a plan to plant trees , dose this have affect on ecosystem and water ? [2]

Ecosystem is a complex set of relationships among the living resources, habitats, and residents of an area , it includes plants, trees, birds, fishs, animals, microorganisims, water, soil , and people. Everything that lives in an ecosystem is dependant on the other species and elements that are also part that ecological community . If one part of an ecosystem is damaged or disappears, it has an impact on everything else. trees and water are part of this ecosystem they interact togeather. Each government should encourage people to plant tree making their houses or their cities greener, because plant create oxygen and absorb green house gases and promote a cycle of evaporation and rain fall such as Amazon forest is a best habitat for animal species most of the animals live in the forest ,destruction of trees may, therefore, encourage global warming and increase temperature. Cutting tree can result in loss of habitats for animal species which can harm ecosystems.

finally , because water and tree are parts of that ecosystem both have a great role in making a balance in the ecosystem, if one of them disappears it cause a great harm to that system.So plant of tree is a good way to protect our environment from warming and pollution and it has postive affect on water resources and rainfall beside that makes our cities beautiful.

Writing Feedback / Global water scarcity - a Global concern [2]

Global water scarcity has risen world wide concerned. Natural ecosystems require water for the survival of humans, plants and animals that live with in them. This ecosystems help to regulate water quantity and quality.

As the world population continues to expand peopel are overusing water and destroy many natural resource. Human consume water, poisnous it, waste it , without considering the consquence. Supplying enough water in the right quantity at the right time and in the right place has always been a concern. All of life depend on water. It is as important to life as air, food, and sunlight. For this reason water has always played an important role in civilization through out history. The problem with water is that there is the same amount now as there was in pre-historic times and no way to make any more of it.

The potable fresh water which the human race need is declining, Some try to turn salt water to potable fresh water which is generally known as desalination. This technique is time consuming and expensive we cant depend on it for treatment of global water shortage.There are so many causes such as global warming , cutting down forest, seasonal change, these have great impact on water sacarcity. Our live on the earth depends on water so everyone should concerned about this great natural source of life , and we should decrease consume of water and protect our environment from global warming.

We will concerned abou our future genration , because scarcity of water is the main cause of world war, and may change the life of human in a negative way, and also decline of potable fresh water is the cause of spreading water borne disease such as diarrohea and also is the major cause of poverty such as in Africa .we will try to safe water and protect water from pollution , and also protect underground water.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL; Food is now easier to prepare than ever; Specific reasons & examples [7]

Nowadays, with the invention of the microwave and with the popularity of fast food restaurants, food has become easier to prepare than ever. Do you think microwave ovens and fast food restaurants are beneficial to society? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

...Nowadays, because most of people have work and they do not have time to prepare food at home , they depend on fast foods and using microwave, of course both of them have a positive and a negative affect on society . Fast food is an enormous chain of food which is affecting our society and is having a huge impact on our environment, economy other factors.Over the years now fast food has become more and more popular, because it is twice as cheap as any other meal and it is extremely quick. Therefore having a huge impact on society and the way we live. Numerous people are now using fast-food as an excuse because it is an easy way out of cooking and saving money. Whilst recently fast-food has been widely discriminated because we are now aware of the impacts and the factors involved in fast-food, we are now more aware of what impact fast-food has had on our society. more people going out to eat other than making food at home, plus the pollution the trucks are putting out to supply all the fast food chains with the food like the burgers, fries etc. Along with the pollution the restaurant is giving off itself whilst making the food. Health problems are probably one of the most known problems that fast food does to you because in general, fast-food is extremely bad for you, because they basically fry everything and the large amounts of fat and salt added to make it easier to cook all add up. These large amounts of fat and saturated fat can lead to heart attack (cardiac arrest) plus the cholesterol which clogs up your arteries, plus many other diseases like diabetes and Kidney Stones from all the soda which they offer you. This then can lead to more people going off work and larger amounts of money having to be spent on hospitals and health.

No one can deny that the microwave oven helps save time on food preparation. People of all ages are trying to balance their work and personal activities. The home has become a shelter for people to get away from non-end stressful life. In this way, the microwave oven is important because family members can spend less time in the kitchen and more time in the living room. After more than 50 years in use, microwave ovens have held their place on kitchen counter top . The microwave oven helps save time not only for families but also for the fast food and the food service industry. In such a fast-paced world, people require more fast services, instant foods and quick meals. Without the practical role of microwave oven, none of the above could be done. Time, money and energy have been saved, our society is benefiting more and more by the industrial application of microwave ovens. Nowadays, we live in a technological advances world we are surrounded by waves, microwave are a type of energy that is absorbed by the food particles inside an oven, that waves may have a bad affect on human health.

In conclusion, i think that fast food and microwave have play an important role in our life, we will partially depend on them , because their disadvantages will be more than advantages if we depend on them everyday.

Writing Feedback / Benefit of supermarket and how it affects on small buisness [4]

Nowadays, supermarkets are an integral part of modern-life. The corner shop are being squeezed out of the market by supermarkets and large rivals, shopping become a part of our everyday life, we can fit shopping in to our busy schedules we are not even restricted by opening hours, so many supermarkets now open twenty four hours. The price of a lot of product is very low, and the competition of the supermarkets is very good for customers. It is a very convenient way of shopping because you can choose the product you want form a large range and you have the possibility to get to know the new products. You are served in a very polite way no one makes you hurry and an adjacent car park where you can wheel your trolley to your car. A part from goods you can find there a restaurant ,cafe and , a special place for kids to play while their mothers are shopping. we will not forget that some time there is a sales and specials offers "buy one get one free" ,Beside these advantages of supermarkets it has some disadvantages for example, sometimes we buy unnecessary things, we buy things that we did not plan to buy earlier. This is called impulsive buying. For many of us the major disadvantage of shopping in the supermarkets is that it is time consuming it takes a while to get there and back.

Big stores are also quite dangerous for all small shops owned by private people. And those shops may be the only source of living of them. Those people that living away from cities center it is difficult to do shopping in the supermarkets daily , some of them they do not have car, so the small shops are very important specially at edge of the cities and sometime in the cities center for example , when you are hurry you need a thing you can buy it in a corner shop near your house you do not need to use your car.

In conclusion., supermarkets and small shops both of them have a great role in our daily life, each of us need both of them, government should have such a good plan to protect the large and small businesses in a good economical standard.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL - Do you like comfortable living or large amount of money? [4]

When we are considering options for a major field in college, the counselor often mention the amount of money that we can expect to earn if we make that career choice. Then it is up to us to decide whether it is important to make large amounts of money or whether we are satisfied to earn a comfortable living . Certainly , there are good reasons for both decisions.

If we make a lot of money, it will be possible to provide a better standard of living for our families. We can live in better home, our children can go to more prestigious schools and participate in activities or take lessons, we can go on vacations and have experiences that would be impossible without the financial resources that a high- paying job produces. We can enjoy what the material world has to offer because we can pay for it. Beside supporting our personal lifestyles, we can afford to give generously to charities.

In contrast, if we make a comfortable living, the advantages are less visible but nonetheless important. We can participate in a healthy lifestyle because we will be less pressured. A job that pays less may have a slower pace and fewer responsibilities. Less stress may allow us to sleep better.There may be fewer demands on our time so we can exercise more and have more meals at home, contributing to good health. The extra time can also be spent with family members instead of at the office . We can be at the ball game when our child hits the home run.

In making personal decision, i am opting for a comfortable living instead of the high-powered job with a large salary. As the daughter of a successful executive , I remember expensive vacations that my father paid for but did not participate in because he was too busy at work. I prefer to spend time with my children instead of spending money on them. I plan to be at the ball game.

Writing Feedback / People do many different things to stay healthy. 'not skip our breakfast' [6]

Nowadays, the life style of human have changed because we live in a technological world. Most of people have a busy schedules , they do not have time to care their health. There are so many simple things we can do to stay healthy .

simple way to get healthy is that we will not skip our breakfast, it is full of dietary fiber it gives us energy a long the day . If we do not have breakfast we remain starve for a long time then our appetite increase it makes us eat more and this has a bad impact on our health. for instance, i remember when i was a student at the day of examination i could not eat my breakfast because of stress but, when i finished the exam i ate more because i was hungry sometimes i got abdominal pain. Another thing to we should do to remain healthy is " drinking water" water is involved in every function in our body, we will drink at least right glasses of water a day. We will eat healthy diet is an essential components of good health . Vitamin deficiency in our boy can produce disease such as, vitamin C deficiency causes Scurvy. Humans are social animals. Connecting with other people and forming bonds of communication and intimacy nourish our emotional and spiritual health. In this day and age, people can become increasingly cut off from others, leading to increase in prevalence of depression and feeling of isolation. The increasing use of internet , allowing us to connect with other via email and chat groups while remaining in the isolation of our home. Furthermore, we will express our emotions appropriately, inappropriate expression of emotions which leads to physical and mental symptoms. For example, inappropriate expression of anger is thought to affect the Liver. We will also eat fresh fruits and vegetables daily. Fruits and vegetables supply many nutrients that are important for our health. Spending at least 30 minutes outdoors is another way to get health because sunlight is so good for our health it produces vitamin D. However, many of us don't get nearly enough activity to stay fit, due to sedentary jobs and lifestyles, busy schedules, etc. Walking is one of the best forms of exercise and almost anyone can do it.

Finally, i believe that people will think from his or her health before everything . If humans stay healthy can do their work in a better way. unhealthy life style can also have a bad effect on society in an indirect way.