qomoco
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / NYU Sups. Why Business, Jackie CHEN!, and summer. [7]
I change Jackie Chen to Hilary lol
I change Jackie Chen to Hilary lol
qomoco
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / NYU Sups. Why Business, Jackie CHEN!, and summer. [7]
saygoodbyevince
thanks, but you aren't harsh enough! lol
Chan and Chen is the same word in Chinese. I guess I should have used Chan.
anyway, I was sayiny, as in my dad's case, education isnot neccessary. BUT I'm sure it would helped him a lot if he had education.
and I was trying to catch reader's attention... guess that /failed...
about the summer,
Does NYU only wants to know one thing I did and then explain it? or they want a list of things I did...
saygoodbyevince
thanks, but you aren't harsh enough! lol
Chan and Chen is the same word in Chinese. I guess I should have used Chan.
anyway, I was sayiny, as in my dad's case, education isnot neccessary. BUT I'm sure it would helped him a lot if he had education.
and I was trying to catch reader's attention... guess that /failed...
about the summer,
Does NYU only wants to know one thing I did and then explain it? or they want a list of things I did...
qomoco
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / Angel's Decision (Seeking Death?) NYU limerick [7]
Shall I compare you to light or fire?
For I'm the pertrified moth in desire.
Light? Is that you? Unlikely,
Fire? Is that you? Likely...
But(Though) I still search, for my straits are dire.
changed the first one a bit, do you guys think it's better? and should I use though or but?
I'm not good with syllables, how many is the last line (has to be 9-10)...
Shall I compare you to light or fire?
For I'm the pertrified moth in desire.
Light? Is that you? Unlikely,
Fire? Is that you? Likely...
But(Though) I still search, for my straits are dire.
changed the first one a bit, do you guys think it's better? and should I use though or but?
I'm not good with syllables, how many is the last line (has to be 9-10)...
qomoco
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / "The Forbidden Apple", 2050 Movie of my life. NYU [5]
A boy from an underdeveloped island in China emigrated to America, lived by himself, and attended college, where another new world awaits him. Finished college in three years, with some help of his father, he expanded the family business and made it international. Eventually, he became one of the world's top business leaders. Of course, somewhere along the line, he fell in love.
how about now? some feedbacks plz
A boy from an underdeveloped island in China emigrated to America, lived by himself, and attended college, where another new world awaits him. Finished college in three years, with some help of his father, he expanded the family business and made it international. Eventually, he became one of the world's top business leaders. Of course, somewhere along the line, he fell in love.
how about now? some feedbacks plz
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / Academic and social communities in the University of Pennsylvania [11]
one question, are you sure this is not over one page?
one question, are you sure this is not over one page?
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Essays / points on how to write an essay about myself; give me a sample [12]
are you hardworking? smart? funny? etc...
I honestly don't know what kind person you are lol
you are the one that holds the answers, then just let your imagination run wild! and write!
are you hardworking? smart? funny? etc...
I honestly don't know what kind person you are lol
you are the one that holds the answers, then just let your imagination run wild! and write!
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Poetry / NYU supplement essay: haiku , poems, limericks e.t.c [5]
if it's possible I reccommend you choose another topic perhaps? cause everyone talks about will power.
if you can't think of anything else like most ppl, then stick with it, the second doesn't make sense to me, if you stand above others, hwo can it suddenly become an puzzle that's missing?
anyway, about my UPenn community essay, it's still not clear even after I added
"Among the contributions I will make such as diversity and ideas to the larger Penn community, the best contribution I will make is to actually use what I learned from Wharton. Also I will pass down the knowledge to generations after. Inspired by Why Wharton: What is business? Business is Building Your Own Company - Ari Meisel Interview."
if it's possible I reccommend you choose another topic perhaps? cause everyone talks about will power.
if you can't think of anything else like most ppl, then stick with it, the second doesn't make sense to me, if you stand above others, hwo can it suddenly become an puzzle that's missing?
anyway, about my UPenn community essay, it's still not clear even after I added
"Among the contributions I will make such as diversity and ideas to the larger Penn community, the best contribution I will make is to actually use what I learned from Wharton. Also I will pass down the knowledge to generations after. Inspired by Why Wharton: What is business? Business is Building Your Own Company - Ari Meisel Interview."
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / U of Chicago - Supplement Essays - Why Chicago? and Favorite Books. [6]
they don't offer business programs
can you take a look at my short essay?
it offers a superior business program and exquisite alternative majors,
they don't offer business programs
can you take a look at my short essay?
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / UPenn page 217 of my autobiography: Strength of Stature [8]
I like this lol, I don't know why o.o but I laughed
and this is an awsome essay
can you read mine please
you have to scroll down to see the new version
I could literally stare down Napoleon Bonaparte in the fifth grade
I like this lol, I don't know why o.o but I laughed
and this is an awsome essay
can you read mine please
you have to scroll down to see the new version
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / Famous New Yorker, Haiku, Movie, Program, NYU [8]
Regina is part of?
can you read my essay, very short, it's a conversation lol
scroll down to read new version.
not sure you can use that...
also you are missing a title for the movie( I DID TOOOOOOOOOO DAM).
Regina is the middle child in a large immigrant family
Regina is part of?
can you read my essay, very short, it's a conversation lol
scroll down to read new version.
&
not sure you can use that...
also you are missing a title for the movie( I DID TOOOOOOOOOO DAM).
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / A Conversation between a granddady and his beloved grakid. UPenn Community Essay [5]
Prompt:Which of the academic communities and social communities that now comprise the University of Pennsylvania are most interesting to you and how will you contribute to them and to the larger Penn community?
I might have missed some of comments you guys made... Well this is my newest version, please read it and feedbacks please!!
Thank you, I will read yours back.
Empty Promising?
*Digging*
"Grandpa, just let the workers do the work, let's go play" my nine year old granddaughter said.
"So, you don't know why I brought you here, Pan (granddaughter)?" I said.
"Nooo" Rolling eyes (shrugs).
*Sigh* "I love Wharton." I told her, eyes closed (reminiscence).
"Ok...?" Pan said in a monotone.
"Hey, guys! I will come back in a minute" I yelled over to the workers.
"No Problem!" The workers responded.
"You know, Pan, this is not the first time I have dug ditches." I told Pan as I led her through the wonderful campus of UPenn.
"I know, Dad told me you actually did the physical work! You were stupid, no you are still stupid." Eyes rolling, finger pointing at me.
(Laugh) "Did your dad and mom tell you why they attend Wharton then?" I asked.
"I don't remember." Pan danced around freely with two arms stretched out.
"You remember Grandpa Meisel?" (2003 Wharton grad).
"Ari Meisel?" Pan asked.
"Correction, Grandpa Meisel." I corrected her.
"What about him?" Pan asked in sarcastic tone.
"It was him, who taught me how to build my own company. No matter what business you are in, you have to understand - by actually doing it - what it takes to do the lowest-level jobs involved in it. People will respect you for knowing what they do on daily basis. This time is a little different though, I want to build this new School of Foreign Languages(diversities) for UPenn with these very two hands." Hands extended out.
"I don't understand."
"Oh, you will when you attend UPenn." I said as we finished our tour around the campus.
Amongst the many contributions I will make, such as diversity of culture and ideas, I believe the most valuable is my enthusiasm for the Wharton School. I will definitely use what I will learn at Wharton to make a difference in society, spreading my knowledge and love for Penn to future generations. As an Asian American, I will fit very well into VPUL's Pan-Asian American Community House(PAACH), a community centers on leadership development. I honestly believe Wharton together with PAACH will shape me into one of the world's top leaders in business. Perhaps when the day come, I will give speeches of inspiration to the larger Penn Community, then when I retire, I will teach Chinese at the newfound School of Foreign Languages.
Inspired by Why Wharton: What is business? Business is Building Your Own Company - Ari Meisel Interview.
Prompt:Which of the academic communities and social communities that now comprise the University of Pennsylvania are most interesting to you and how will you contribute to them and to the larger Penn community?
I might have missed some of comments you guys made... Well this is my newest version, please read it and feedbacks please!!
Thank you, I will read yours back.
Empty Promising?
*Digging*
"Grandpa, just let the workers do the work, let's go play" my nine year old granddaughter said.
"So, you don't know why I brought you here, Pan (granddaughter)?" I said.
"Nooo" Rolling eyes (shrugs).
*Sigh* "I love Wharton." I told her, eyes closed (reminiscence).
"Ok...?" Pan said in a monotone.
"Hey, guys! I will come back in a minute" I yelled over to the workers.
"No Problem!" The workers responded.
"You know, Pan, this is not the first time I have dug ditches." I told Pan as I led her through the wonderful campus of UPenn.
"I know, Dad told me you actually did the physical work! You were stupid, no you are still stupid." Eyes rolling, finger pointing at me.
(Laugh) "Did your dad and mom tell you why they attend Wharton then?" I asked.
"I don't remember." Pan danced around freely with two arms stretched out.
"You remember Grandpa Meisel?" (2003 Wharton grad).
"Ari Meisel?" Pan asked.
"Correction, Grandpa Meisel." I corrected her.
"What about him?" Pan asked in sarcastic tone.
"It was him, who taught me how to build my own company. No matter what business you are in, you have to understand - by actually doing it - what it takes to do the lowest-level jobs involved in it. People will respect you for knowing what they do on daily basis. This time is a little different though, I want to build this new School of Foreign Languages(diversities) for UPenn with these very two hands." Hands extended out.
"I don't understand."
"Oh, you will when you attend UPenn." I said as we finished our tour around the campus.
Amongst the many contributions I will make, such as diversity of culture and ideas, I believe the most valuable is my enthusiasm for the Wharton School. I will definitely use what I will learn at Wharton to make a difference in society, spreading my knowledge and love for Penn to future generations. As an Asian American, I will fit very well into VPUL's Pan-Asian American Community House(PAACH), a community centers on leadership development. I honestly believe Wharton together with PAACH will shape me into one of the world's top leaders in business. Perhaps when the day come, I will give speeches of inspiration to the larger Penn Community, then when I retire, I will teach Chinese at the newfound School of Foreign Languages.
Inspired by Why Wharton: What is business? Business is Building Your Own Company - Ari Meisel Interview.
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / Three characteristics best describe me, how can they contribute to the college [4]
your essay is great, 5 para really does the wonder here.
and I like your ending, it sounds you are confident that you will fit into BU
good luck!
can you read mine please
your essay is great, 5 para really does the wonder here.
and I like your ending, it sounds you are confident that you will fit into BU
good luck!
can you read mine please
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / A Conversation between a granddady and his beloved grakid. UPenn Community Essay [5]
no one????? can just one MOD(master of deed) read it lol..
no one????? can just one MOD(master of deed) read it lol..
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / To assist people with problems - Cornell College of Arts and Sciences Supplement [8]
the way it was, was confusing. maybe just counseling,(delete the loss of love one) saves you some word
I like your ending
read my plz
Whether it may be something as simple as tutoring or as complicated as add a verb here the loss of a loved one
the way it was, was confusing. maybe just counseling,(delete the loss of love one) saves you some word
I like your ending
read my plz
qomoco
Jan 1, 2010
Poetry / "Jump to the sky" - NYU write a poem which best represents you [4]
honestly, it's a great poem. yup, nothing is impossible. and I like the failure part, failure does teach you lessons.
can you read mine please
honestly, it's a great poem. yup, nothing is impossible. and I like the failure part, failure does teach you lessons.
can you read mine please
qomoco
Jan 2, 2010
qomoco
Jan 2, 2010
Student Talk / Application Question January [127]
well I submitted 01/01/2010, but it's downloaded by them at 01/02/2010... that's won't make me late right...
well I submitted 01/01/2010, but it's downloaded by them at 01/02/2010... that's won't make me late right...
qomoco
Jan 2, 2010
Undergraduate / A Conversation between a granddady and his beloved grakid. UPenn Community Essay [5]
thanks guys, I submitted before I can read your comments though, didn't want risk been late.
thanks guys, I submitted before I can read your comments though, didn't want risk been late.
qomoco
Jan 5, 2010
Undergraduate / Why (or why not)? Perhaps the key question is "Why in between?" [22]
Thank You :). I'm glad you like it, so far everyone who read it likes it. Hopefully everyone will like it. :-)
Thank You :). I'm glad you like it, so far everyone who read it likes it. Hopefully everyone will like it. :-)
qomoco
Jan 14, 2010
Undergraduate / Angel's Decision (Seeking Death?) NYU limerick [7]
just wondering can someone just read them and ummm tell me which one is better?
I think I'm finding a trend here
just wondering can someone just read them and ummm tell me which one is better?
I think I'm finding a trend here
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]
don't worry, just keep on trying. I'm Chinese and I have been a "failure" in English for years. I never know how good/bad my essays were; my teacher never failed me once but I'm not sure if it's because I'm Chinese. Nevertheless I kept on trying, right now I'm in AP English but I still have doubts in my mind if I really deserve to be in that class. So for years I have no clue if my writing is any good... because well you know I thought maybe the teachers are been nice not to fail me since I'm Chinese... that's what I have been thinking for years
Right now I have gained some confidence (all thanks to this website), I just wrote my college essays and posted. The first few ones sucked ( I know from all the comments, and that's why I like this website, honesty and harsh is the key lol ), then the later ones improved. In just a few months (2-3), I think I have improved a lot.
So maybe just write and post away! we will read it.
p/s excuse me if I made any errors, you are always welcomed to point them out - Mistakes are the stepping stones to success!!!
don't worry, just keep on trying. I'm Chinese and I have been a "failure" in English for years. I never know how good/bad my essays were; my teacher never failed me once but I'm not sure if it's because I'm Chinese. Nevertheless I kept on trying, right now I'm in AP English but I still have doubts in my mind if I really deserve to be in that class. So for years I have no clue if my writing is any good... because well you know I thought maybe the teachers are been nice not to fail me since I'm Chinese... that's what I have been thinking for years
Right now I have gained some confidence (all thanks to this website), I just wrote my college essays and posted. The first few ones sucked ( I know from all the comments, and that's why I like this website, honesty and harsh is the key lol ), then the later ones improved. In just a few months (2-3), I think I have improved a lot.
So maybe just write and post away! we will read it.
p/s excuse me if I made any errors, you are always welcomed to point them out - Mistakes are the stepping stones to success!!!
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]
Envie
I didn't speak any English so they might not grade as harsh as they would to other students. I wasn't a Chinese who spoke English.
I don't really know lol, I guess I wasn't very confident about myself.
Envie
I didn't speak any English so they might not grade as harsh as they would to other students. I wasn't a Chinese who spoke English.
I don't really know lol, I guess I wasn't very confident about myself.
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Poetry / What smile gives witness, proof for you to judge?; First Stab at a Sonnet [17]
Jeannie
the letters are the rhyming patterns
I wrote two for my english class, how about read it and give me some comments too? I have always hated poetry but now I'm starting to like it lol
here is the Italian sonnet
Italian
Love & Hate
Shall I compare love to light, hate to dark? A
Oui, for hatred could cloud peoples' small mind. B
And love is the one to cause people blind. B
Why can love and hate be so alike-hark! A
Attitudes toward each are so unlike & dark. A
Is it easy to understand peoples' mind? B
Or is there a true way of truth to find? B
But one thing is sure, each will leave a mark. A
For love can be sweet until people lie. C
Then death cause people to shed tears of flood. D
Good God! Love is such a spell that binds. E
But hate can be so sad, cause one to die. C
It does not shed deep flood, but tears of blood. D
Devil! Why can you cast the spell that binds! E
Jeannie
the letters are the rhyming patterns
I wrote two for my english class, how about read it and give me some comments too? I have always hated poetry but now I'm starting to like it lol
here is the Italian sonnet
Italian
Love & Hate
Shall I compare love to light, hate to dark? A
Oui, for hatred could cloud peoples' small mind. B
And love is the one to cause people blind. B
Why can love and hate be so alike-hark! A
Attitudes toward each are so unlike & dark. A
Is it easy to understand peoples' mind? B
Or is there a true way of truth to find? B
But one thing is sure, each will leave a mark. A
For love can be sweet until people lie. C
Then death cause people to shed tears of flood. D
Good God! Love is such a spell that binds. E
But hate can be so sad, cause one to die. C
It does not shed deep flood, but tears of blood. D
Devil! Why can you cast the spell that binds! E
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Poetry / Limericks or poems. Started to like poetry... maybe [2]
Angel's Decision (Seeking Death)
Shall I compare you to light or fire?
For I'm the petrified moth in desire.
Light? Is that you? Unlikely,
Fire? Is that you? Likely...
Though I still search, for my straits are dire.
Shark
I saw a man reaching for the red moon.
Forty years later, I saw him again at noon.
I was a curious little boy,
Confronted the man with "why?"
"Why not," the man replied, a sharp harpoon.
well I wrote these for college but I couldn't get much comments from the essay thread so I decided to post here.
tell me what you think
Angel's Decision (Seeking Death)
Shall I compare you to light or fire?
For I'm the petrified moth in desire.
Light? Is that you? Unlikely,
Fire? Is that you? Likely...
Though I still search, for my straits are dire.
Shark
I saw a man reaching for the red moon.
Forty years later, I saw him again at noon.
I was a curious little boy,
Confronted the man with "why?"
"Why not," the man replied, a sharp harpoon.
well I wrote these for college but I couldn't get much comments from the essay thread so I decided to post here.
tell me what you think
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Poetry / I will get what I desire. [7]
I will get what I desire
For I'm reaching for the higher
Though, times, I lost sights of the stair
Nevertheless I still acquire
If you think I'm looking for fire
Then you are calling me a liar.
I will get what I desire.
or
I will get what I desire
For I'm reaching for the higher
Though, times, I lost sights of the stair
Nevertheless I still sought
If you think I'm looking for fire
Please lose that thought
I will get what I desire.
I will get what I desire
For I'm reaching for the higher
Though, times, I lost sights of the stair
Nevertheless I still acquire
If you think I'm looking for fire
Then you are calling me a liar.
I will get what I desire.
or
I will get what I desire
For I'm reaching for the higher
Though, times, I lost sights of the stair
Nevertheless I still sought
If you think I'm looking for fire
Please lose that thought
I will get what I desire.
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Poetry / Shinigami - Death God [9]
Death God
If death is what I sought
Perhaps I won't get what I desire
Since my will will surpass the kill
It will be the one ending up dead
Then I will have to fled
Since I really hate the red.
or this is better?
Death God
If death is what you sought
Then you won't get what you desire
Since my will
will surpass the kill
You will be the one ending up dead
Then I will have to fled
Since I really hate the red.
Death God
If death is what I sought
Perhaps I won't get what I desire
Since my will will surpass the kill
It will be the one ending up dead
Then I will have to fled
Since I really hate the red.
or this is better?
Death God
If death is what you sought
Then you won't get what you desire
Since my will
will surpass the kill
You will be the one ending up dead
Then I will have to fled
Since I really hate the red.
qomoco
Jan 18, 2010
Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]
what languages do you guys speak? three, that's very impressive.
what languages do you guys speak? three, that's very impressive.
qomoco
Jan 22, 2010
Poetry / I will get what I desire. [7]
haha, I was wondering if that sentence sounded too immature but I guess it adds some humor to the poem.
Looking for fire means looking for trouble(fire will burn you) or looking to fail(when you want to achieve something great, a lot people would say "That kid is just looking for more trouble; he is going to fail." Or "That kid is just talking big (that's where calling me a liar came from)"
:)
"lose that thought."
haha, I was wondering if that sentence sounded too immature but I guess it adds some humor to the poem.
Looking for fire means looking for trouble(fire will burn you) or looking to fail(when you want to achieve something great, a lot people would say "That kid is just looking for more trouble; he is going to fail." Or "That kid is just talking big (that's where calling me a liar came from)"
:)
qomoco
Jan 22, 2010
Poetry / Shinigami - Death God [9]
EF_Kevin
Red is blood (bad stuff o.o), so I have to run away!
Anyway, blood represents death. Since most people fear death, they run away covered with fear.
or any suggestion to make a stronger ending?
EF_Kevin
Red is blood (bad stuff o.o), so I have to run away!
Anyway, blood represents death. Since most people fear death, they run away covered with fear.
or any suggestion to make a stronger ending?
qomoco
Jan 22, 2010
Undergraduate / NYU (Cinema Studies): Four Small Prompts Driving Me Insane [10]
thought the deadline was Jan. 1st?
thought the deadline was Jan. 1st?
qomoco
Jan 23, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
Touch, see, smell, hear and taste.
Dream, like the flowing river without an end
Melody, the cheer of crowds, might as well be
My best friend
The raising of audience, can't you see?
Are always there for me
The feeling, is
So sweet, honey
Been success is not always about money.
This is what I got, you can use this as an example to help you with your poem(if you think mine is better, I think an example from a student just like you is better than a peom from a poet). I don't really know much about poetry, but I think you should break your lines up (1st, 2nd last, and the last lines), and try get some rhyme - at least that would make us newbies sound more professional lol.
Hope this helps!
I panicked when I had to write my first poem too, I think you will do fine.
Touch, see, smell, hear and taste.
Dream, like the flowing river without an end
Melody, the cheer of crowds, might as well be
My best friend
The raising of audience, can't you see?
Are always there for me
The feeling, is
So sweet, honey
Been success is not always about money.
This is what I got, you can use this as an example to help you with your poem(if you think mine is better, I think an example from a student just like you is better than a peom from a poet). I don't really know much about poetry, but I think you should break your lines up (1st, 2nd last, and the last lines), and try get some rhyme - at least that would make us newbies sound more professional lol.
Hope this helps!
I panicked when I had to write my first poem too, I think you will do fine.
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Poetry / Shinigami - Death God [9]
Ok, thanks! I will try that when I feel to write another poem. :) Sometimes the rhyme does make the meaning a bit unclear.
Ok, thanks! I will try that when I feel to write another poem. :) Sometimes the rhyme does make the meaning a bit unclear.
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Poetry / I will get what I desire. [7]
Well, one can always come up with new expression. :] Maybe someday this expression will become famous.
or I can use
If you think I'm playing with fire. I guess this way people might understand better.
Well, one can always come up with new expression. :] Maybe someday this expression will become famous.
or I can use
If you think I'm playing with fire. I guess this way people might understand better.
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
It's pretty good, but I need to read more lines to give more comments.
Is there any particular form of poetry you are suppose to write?
if not and if you like short poem, try haiku.
not sure if you can fit everything into 3 lines though, I had hard time writing haikus.
I found it easier to write a poem by writing out the "contents" first, doesn't matter about if it's like poetry. Then I start editing it into a poem, it took me like 10 hours for my first poem. And for real poets, it took them years to edit a poem they like, and some will continue editing.
It's pretty good, but I need to read more lines to give more comments.
Is there any particular form of poetry you are suppose to write?
if not and if you like short poem, try haiku.
not sure if you can fit everything into 3 lines though, I had hard time writing haikus.
I found it easier to write a poem by writing out the "contents" first, doesn't matter about if it's like poetry. Then I start editing it into a poem, it took me like 10 hours for my first poem. And for real poets, it took them years to edit a poem they like, and some will continue editing.
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Grammar, Usage / Whats a word that means "Big or small"? [7]
could it be bigorsmall? j/k
oh if this is umm a trick question
big is a small word means "big"?
could it be bigorsmall? j/k
oh if this is umm a trick question
big is a small word means "big"?
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]
I'm not complaining lol, I like all my teachers.
I'm not complaining lol, I like all my teachers.
qomoco
Jan 24, 2010
Poetry / Shinigami - Death God [9]
EF_Susan
Thank you, that does make it sound more clear and fix the grammar error and keep the rhyme.
EF_Susan
Thank you, that does make it sound more clear and fix the grammar error and keep the rhyme.
qomoco
Jan 25, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
honestly, over half of your peom is mine lol o.o, and I don't know how your new add stuff relates to mine at all.
honestly, over half of your peom is mine lol o.o, and I don't know how your new add stuff relates to mine at all.
qomoco
Jan 25, 2010
Letters / Letter to Financial Aid Office - FAFSA and CSS [8]
FAFSA question
"Select the rigorous high school program of study that you completed "
I don't really get this question, and the drop down has depart of defense program DoDEA
should I leave this question blank?
FAFSA question
"Select the rigorous high school program of study that you completed "
I don't really get this question, and the drop down has depart of defense program DoDEA
should I leave this question blank?
