EF_Kevin
Aug 15, 2015
Letters / A formal letter I want to write to a notebook provider [4]
Yes, I can help! First, do not write 'Dear Sir' because it's better to give his real name if you know it. But if you do not know the name, you can use:
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:
Okay, here it is:
Dear Sir
I purchasedsuccessfully a notebook from your own shop three days ago. The machine had worked very well until yesterday evening.
I brought it inside my backpack and cycled about 20 minutes home. -- Do not include this sentence. It makes the reader think maybe you broke the laptop when biking around with it, lol.
After getting back home I putted it
I put it on the tablethen and powered it on but it won't boot any more. There is just a black screen and ...
Everything outside the notebookdon't look looks normal and does not seem damaged at all.
Please tell me what should I do. -- good sentence!
Could Ibe able to return it back and get another computer of the same type?
I would be very grateful for anyhelps help you are able to provide.
Yes, I can help! First, do not write 'Dear Sir' because it's better to give his real name if you know it. But if you do not know the name, you can use:
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:
Okay, here it is:
I purchased
I put it on the table
Everything outside the notebook
Please tell me what should I do. -- good sentence!
Could I
I would be very grateful for any