jkjeremy
Jul 10, 2013
Undergraduate / As a young Haitian-American woman, I have faced many hardships ; MassART/ SOP [3]
For the most part, you've written an autobiography (along with some discussion of your goals) rather than really addressing the writing task. There's a big difference.
The job is to express what makes you unique and to let us know who you are.
Much of what you've written applies to lots of other people.
For the most part, you've written an autobiography (along with some discussion of your goals) rather than really addressing the writing task. There's a big difference.
The job is to express what makes you unique and to let us know who you are.
Much of what you've written applies to lots of other people.