vangiespen
Aug 31, 2014
Writing Feedback / Ignoring what others' think and others' opinions is clearly the more successful path in life [9]
If I could make a suggestion. I believe that the best way to answer this essay is from a personal point of view, based upon personal experience. You could present 2 arguments. The first is a story about making a personal decision (say about buying a car) when you sought the advice of others and ended up getting a bad deal on the car even after you based it on others recommendations. Then the second, could be about a life changing decision such as whether to follow in the path of your family tradition of say becoming a doctor (if you come form a family of doctors, lawyers or accountants could also work),. You could mention having asked for the advice of you family and friends but then ultimately following your personal decision instead because you feel you would be more successful in that path. Then conclude the essay by saying that it is important to listen to and consider other opinions when making decisions, but that ultimately, their advice will not matter more than your personal considerations about the decision you are about to make because you are the only person who can set your true path to happiness and success in real life. Writing the essay this way might give it a more engaging hook that will keep the admissions officer interested in finding out what you have to say in the end.
If I could make a suggestion. I believe that the best way to answer this essay is from a personal point of view, based upon personal experience. You could present 2 arguments. The first is a story about making a personal decision (say about buying a car) when you sought the advice of others and ended up getting a bad deal on the car even after you based it on others recommendations. Then the second, could be about a life changing decision such as whether to follow in the path of your family tradition of say becoming a doctor (if you come form a family of doctors, lawyers or accountants could also work),. You could mention having asked for the advice of you family and friends but then ultimately following your personal decision instead because you feel you would be more successful in that path. Then conclude the essay by saying that it is important to listen to and consider other opinions when making decisions, but that ultimately, their advice will not matter more than your personal considerations about the decision you are about to make because you are the only person who can set your true path to happiness and success in real life. Writing the essay this way might give it a more engaging hook that will keep the admissions officer interested in finding out what you have to say in the end.