bastian20
Apr 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / The impressive building or public service are crucial for people's lives [4]
Hello Mujahiddin, you wrote this article quite well. Actually, your idea can be accepted and understood. But, In my opinion you should avoid to use same words in one paragraph since it can reduce your lexical resources significantly.
Let me paraphrase your equal vocabularies in one paragraph and correct your grammatical error.
Hello Mujahiddin, you wrote this article quite well. Actually, your idea can be accepted and understood. But, In my opinion you should avoid to use same words in one paragraph since it can reduce your lexical resources significantly.
Let me paraphrase your equal vocabularies in one paragraph and correct your grammatical error.
, whilst otherothers say that the money should be alocatedallocate to facility of education and health of inhabitants. Although, the opulent buildingstructure are vital to make the city more breathtaking, I strongly believe that development of the public service are more crucialimperative to encourage